Containment Control Starts with the Umbrella

After reading the first chapter and reading the second chapter, I couldn't help but comment, does the protagonist have a shell in his head? What kind of dialogue are these? The author shouldn't do this, and novices don't do this either.

We contain, we fail, we run away

As the author, I think you can choose to travel through World War II. As for who you want to help? I don't know, but I feel that traveling through World War II might be more fun, and it can make readers like us feel refreshed for a while. After all, we have been fighting interstellar wars for nearly ten years, relying on equipment to crush them, and finally holding the entire earth in their hands. I hope the author will adopt my opinion.

Oh, my God, it hasn't been updated yet. Do you want to be a beast?

The author of Good Guy has a set of illustrations in the comment area.

After reading it for a few hours, the subject matter is still good, and some small parts can still be read. However, one problem with this book is that the interaction with the female characters will conflict with the style of the subject matter. The subject matter of this book generally determines that this book should have a serious and rigorous style, and the dialogue between the plot and characters is the same. Of course, if the whole text is so serious, it will also appear boring, so some light-hearted plot lubrication is needed to spice it up, but it is obvious that the author places this role on the interaction with the female characters, so I do not object to the author writing plots related to female characters, but I hope not to write too many female protagonists. If it is unavoidable, then don't write about real female characters (it's not impossible to write, just don't have too deep interactions). The above are some of my personal suggestions. I hope the author will make some progress. I will subscribe to it if it is published. In addition, I will give you today's recommendation vote.

Is it not good for your father to directly complete the Dzogchen if the system does not allow the protagonist of Shabi to do anything and just accept it?

I've read more than 100 chapters, and I feel pretty good. I've read a lot of books, but I can't feel much. Come on, the author, and try to finish it 😁

Halsey dresses up, she looks pretty😄

After the protagonist and Halsey's children grew up, things began to change and they developed towards feudalism. We are here to see super technology fight various super problems, not to see you come to dominate your own children. It is not interesting at all, especially when you are obviously relying on the power of the system.

Equipment map of each unit: UBCS's AAES (most similar) Expat agents Herendin/Yggdrasil Mecha Thor's Hammer (Spartan) USS biochemical armor

The protagonist is very childish and the emotional line is disgusting and embarrassing.

Umbrella Containment Operation (only pictures found by the author 😄)

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ There are many people, which means that the trolls are coming. Before it was recommended, everyone discovered this book on their own initiative. At that time, it was prosperous and enjoyable. Nowadays, some people use various words to criticize, and some people make blind comments without even reading them, which extremely affects the author's writing mood.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      . What to write now is nothing to be afraid of. When I first wrote it, I hoped to collect more, but now I am facing this problem. I used to be able to write 8,000 words a day, but now it takes 8 or 9 hours to write two chapters of 4,000 words.         ...         ...

D77 Pelican F-X B65 Dagger Individual airdrop pod

I embroidered an Umbrella Barefoot Agent😓 His equipment is still on the way to be mailed and is to be completed🥺 . Tom Cruise's head is too big to wear the helmet😅

Paris class;

I come from Mercenary to support the author. After all, there are still too few novels about this kind of summoning. I hope the author can write as long as Mercenary and I will be satisfied. For this book, I wonder if the people summoned can have memories of the past. In this case, I think it will reduce the protagonist's time to develop Umbrella Company. The above are some of my thoughts as a reader who likes to read this type of novels. I just hope that the author will not care. Come on, Ollie!

This book feels weird, I have read dozens of chapters so far The subject matter is CSP, which is pretty good But the theme is containment, and the protagonist is a super boss It is impossible to contain it personally, so it would be the same as reading Baidu documents Write it in CSP, it is basically from the younger brother's perspective, and the protagonist is missing Write it as the protagonist, it is all Shenhao system's running accounts and clumsy emotional drama

I read this book because of your title and technology. Is it necessary for you to write a lot of emotional dramas and things about the entertainment industry? Is it related to the main plot? Don't you feel awkward?

I hope the author will carefully check the data. The science and engineering man looked a little embarrassed. The electromagnetic accelerator in Chapter 47 is too abnormal. It is completely impossible to achieve with the protagonist's technology because of insufficient energy. In addition, the author completely underestimated the power of kinetic energy weapons such as electromagnetic running. The specific reasons are as follows, The kinetic energy formula E=1/2MV^2, the mass unit is Kg, the speed unit is m/s, a 30-ton tungsten rod accelerates to one-tenth the speed of light, applying the formula, E=1/2*30000*(30000000^2)=1.35*10^16KJ, which is 3 Let's not talk about the kinetic energy and penetrability carried by a 0-ton tungsten rod at one-tenth the speed of light. Let's simply convert what so much kinetic energy means. The complete combustion of 1Kg TNT can produce approximately 4184KJ of energy. The equivalent of one ton is 4184000KJ. That's 3 The energy carried by a 0-ton tungsten rod is converted into equivalents, which is approximately 1.35*10^16/4184000=3.2*10^9 Tons of TNT equivalent, which is 3.2 Billion tons of TNT equivalent... If there is 0 loss, how many kilowatt-hours of electricity does the electromagnetic main gun need to accelerate this rod? One kilowatt hour of electricity is equivalent to 3600KJ of energy. Just convert it and you will know. The answer is 3.8 Trillion kilowatt hours of electricity. When deuterium and tritium fusion occurs, the mass loss is about 0.377%. If the energy is fully utilized, then the energy of 3.8 Trillion kilowatt hours of electricity is equivalent to about 40,000 kilowatt hours. Ton of energy produced by the fusion of deuterium and tritium nuclei. Even if the protagonist can increase the mass lost by the fusion of deuterium and tritium nuclei by 100 times, which means a loss of 37.7% Of the mass, it would still require 400 tons of energy produced by the fusion of deuterium and tritium nuclei. Do you understand what I want to express? Nuclear fusion energy seems to be quite a lot, but when it comes to speeds such as one-tenth of the speed of light, nuclear fusion can only win based on quantity, and there is no infinite energy.

Also, the author hopes that future novels will not have children. I really don't like children. It's not that satisfying for us to put ourselves on the protagonist's behalf. Seeing that he's about to become a father, I really feel that having children is the biggest poisonous point in this fine novel. I've seen people with children skip it.

We control, we contain, we protect. We neutralize, we escape, we nuke.

It's a very good subject matter and setting, but the author's understanding of many things is too low, and his way of thinking is too characteristic of the walled country, deviating from logic, and the writing and conceptual skills that the writer needs to have are also very average, so it's a pity.

Whether it is the moral level of the protagonist or the calmness of the protagonist's words and deeds in the character creation, it can be seen that the author has made great progress. The new book "Light of Humanity" is indeed much better than this one, and it is much more comfortable to read.

When you wrote about Marvel, I gave up. I hope the next book won't write about Marvel.

{"TopicId":"598921104752574464","TopicName":"My Years with Qidian"} What is our slogan? An organization: We contain, we control, we give for free!

Feeling a little awkward

This book is okay, but overall I feel that the writing is not as good as the next book The Light of Humanity, and the Light of Humanity Hurry is even worse. It is just a little bit every day, and it is not enough to read.

Author, why did your book The Light of Humanity ban me for life? I haven't seen the paid chapters yet and haven't posted any chapter comments?