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The story is great in every way. The main character is the biggest problem. He keeps saying he won't date, but now he's letting a girl live in his house. He might as well just dump her. That would be better for both of them. You wouldn't need to look for another partner, and she could rely on you for life. If you don't like someone, just say so.

Testing poison, on the verge of poisoning, write this before death: skipping thirty, thirty-one, thirty-two, and you'll be safe! For future readers, the early part of this book is decent; although it has minor flaws, it's still readable. The most toxic parts are chapters 30, 31, and 32.

Every protagonist in Japanese stories has a pitiful, helpless girl with a tragic past and a cute, innocent personality, like a little white rabbit, waiting for the protagonist to rescue her.

It was well-written, but you had to poison me with your writing. Look how well you wrote the beginning! Then, once you got to the police station, you all turned into idiots. Is that something a human would do?

1. My writing pace is just slow, and urging me to write won't help. I might write a faster-paced infinite flow novel next time, but I can't change this one. However, this problem can be solved by putting the book on the shelves. After it's published, I'll write 10,000 words a day for a while, and then I'll guarantee at least 6,000 words a day. 2. I'm new here, so the writing is so-so.

Can this story continue? Yes, but if the author is busy lately, please say something to let us know; if not, just announce it outright. You've just quietly stopped updating; you've really let down all the readers who have been subscribing (including me).

It's well-written, without any pretense or hidden agendas. The most satisfying thing is becoming stronger openly and honestly.

The author's praise of Wing Chun is excessive! The late Qing Dynasty and the Republic of China were the golden age of martial arts, how many people knew about Wing Chun back then? Why did Bruce Lee create Jeet Kune Do from Wing Chun? Wasn't it because Wing Chun's practical application in the world wasn't effective?

The author's writing is decent, but this formula is so outdated; you can predict the ending just by reading the beginning. And that's not all—what's with the protagonist's transmigration with his cheat-like abilities merging with the natives, or just escaping directly?

I came to the book review section when I got tired of reading, and found a bunch of people criticizing the author. So I'll share my personal opinion: I've read half of this book, and there's nothing particularly offensive about it. I didn't feel the "poison" effect mentioned in the top comments about chapters 30, 31, and 32.