Cultivation: My Talent Can Combine Things

The protagonist can't hide anything from the enemy?

It's really annoying how you're suppressing the protagonist. When he transmigrated, there were several loading screens in just a few days, but in the following years, there were only a few. The protagonist is still struggling for a single martial arts manual; I'm fed up and giving up. Besides, this is a cultivation world; are you planning to write a hundred pages on martial arts and then another hundred pages on Qi cultivation?

There aren't any major flaws so far, it's just too formulaic. If you continue down this path and make martial arts a separate category, and then everyone reaches the pinnacle of martial arts cultivation before even starting immortal cultivation from the first level of Qi Refining, your book is definitely going to fail.

He can kill without changing his clothes; is the phrase "one person, a thousand faces" just for show? It's extremely poisonous.

The words related to hunting and killing in the mountains are not written down; it's mindless suppression.

It took two and a half months to reach rank eight, and the cheat code disappeared after only twenty-odd chapters.

The novel is filled with all sorts of inexplicable conflicts, forcibly created, and the author thinks he's doing a great job. The events the main characters encounter in just these few chapters are enough for a writer like you to experience in several lifetimes.

The author lacks common sense; every minor villain is merely clever in a petty way, the boss doesn't act like a boss, and the subordinates don't act like subordinates. It's utterly baffling.

Everything else is alright, but the moment I see Iron Shirt, I instantly lose interest. These days, Iron Shirt is practically a standard feature in the early stages of any book related to martial arts... No matter how much you talk about it, it's still annoying to see it too often.

Damn, the synopsis sounds so impressive, but the table of contents is just a bunch of small gang warfare.