I Don't Want to Be a Hero

First, you must persevere. Don't give up midway, get stuck, or end up unfinished. It's normal to not update as expected, but don't give up. Second, don't be afraid of poor writing. For writing fan fiction, as long as the cause and effect of the matter are clearly described, the person who writes it is not a professional writer after all. Real professional writers probably can't write fan fiction either. Third, the plot of the original story can be abbreviated, but cannot be omitted. For the original plot that is considered unimportant, it must be briefly described without omitting the past. What you want to write is a complete story, not a diary. At the very least, people who have never seen the original work should be able to roughly understand what happened in the middle. Fourth, try to enrich the description of daily life, psychology, body movements, psychological expressions, enemy and enemy and other multi-angle plots. The original story plot can be appropriately modified or extended. But you must also be careful, because most readers of fan fiction sometimes don't go too far into the plot that the author has worked hard to create. When seeing such an unfamiliar chapter, most people will choose to skip it. It's okay to change the original plot, but it can't be done in one go. Fifth, except for the protagonist and supporting characters, the author's fictional characters should not exceed his or her control over the plot. If there are too many characters in a certain work that are not in the original story, it will be difficult for readers to accept it and they will not be able to figure out the relationship between the characters. It is recommended to think twice before acting. Necessary characters can be fictional, but try to control them within your own overall story concept. New fictional characters should have prototypes as much as possible so that readers can adapt to them as quickly as possible. Sixth, be able to withstand the abuse and stick to the principles. The psychological quality must be good. No matter how you write, you will be criticized, insulted, intimidated, ridiculed... The work is your own, and you must insist on your own creation. Let those who curse die. Seventh, try not to wear random clothes. In a work, try not to mix characters from other works, except for comic novels. You can also learn from the plots, skills, character prototypes, etc. Of other works. Eighth, the settings should be clear. For some unique settings, explain them in the story instead of writing them in related documents. Many readers don't look at the relevant settings. Ninth, YY is the kingly way, don't be afraid of criticism. Without YY, there would be no point in writing fan fiction. It is precisely because of YY that it attracts attention. Tenth, don't go back. Unless there is a flaw, don't go back and make changes. It is advisable to continue writing, and do not follow the advice of some readers and go back to drastically change the plot. Eleventh, what you like is the most important thing. If you create or adapt stories and characters that you don't like, fan fiction will lose its vitality. Twelfth, don't be afraid to overturn the original settings and deliver packages. Many novels and animations constantly overturn their own settings, and a story without flaws is incomplete. Thirteenth, chapters should be clear, and avoid no titles or chapters. The number of words in the title should be between 4 and 15 words. If the chapter is not clear, many readers will forget where they last saw it after the author updates it. 14. The number of words in each chapter should be controlled at around 2,000-5,000 words. Too short or too long will affect the reading effect. 15. Try to explain the unfamiliar terms, geography, etc. That appear in the novel.

The book is already finished, so it doesn't matter what I say. This book has seen the shelf stage. In the early stage, there was a protagonist and author who were not easy to understand. The protagonist has no desire to make progress, has no desire to become stronger, and has always been in a state of being beaten. The author basically does not strengthen the protagonist's strength. The lottery system is so easy to write, and it can increase or decrease the strength at any time, and adjust the rhythm. It is like an upgrade flow for fighting monsters. This system is not as well written as other people's experience in killing monsters. Every time the protagonist travels through time, he basically doesn't have any brains. The Naruto arc is simply retarded to the extreme. There is no point in exercising, and if you don't think of ways to collect more things that will help improve the main world, the Lengshui plot is meaningless. I don't know what the more than one million words will be written in the later period. However, this book is not without its merits. The writing is still passable. The author may have stopped at level 4, but it is still much better than the normal level 1 writing and is not so childish. It's still possible, just work harder and write a good outline for your next book. I always think about what I can write to make money. If you don't make money, who will? Before it was put on the shelves, I didn't even think about the plot. I revised it twice in ten chapters and wrote it under the title for fear that others wouldn't see it. Please don't do it again.

First of all, I have some suggestions: 1. The chapter name is a little bit poisonous. Can it be concise, like Chapter 121 (The third generation of Mizukage will die forever, it can be changed to, die), something simple and a bit suspenseful. The previous chapter titles always seemed like they were reading online articles like The Crooked Dragon King, which made people uncomfortable. 2. I hope the author will make the story more logical and the writing style more rigorous in future writing (questions like this are too discouraging). 3. The content in the first few dozen chapters is too toxic. If I didn't like this kind of novel, I would probably be persuaded to quit. If possible, the author would better revise the previous article appropriately (it's logical, author, be more rigorous). Of course, this is a thankless task, but it should be necessary if you want the novel to achieve better results. After all, you must pay attention to the golden chapters. I am currently reading "Starting from Gu Huoniao", which is also a novel of this type. It is very attractive at the beginning. The author can take a look at it and you will have a strong desire to read it in the first three or four chapters without reading too much. As for the future chapters, if the author is very busy, you can have someone read it first to see how it goes, and if there are any illogical points, modify it, and then upload it. 4. Let's talk about the world that the protagonist travels through in the novel. Please consider it carefully. For example: God of Death. People who like it really like it, but those who don't like it will find it very boring. For example, I don't like Death very much. It is best for the author to postpone the update, carefully think about the comparison of the force value of each world, and calculate the protagonist's ability. This is more critical. If this is not considered in advance, it will be dissuaded, which will make people very uncomfortable. For example (Kizaru in One Piece World and Boros in One Punch World). 5. The author can extend some content in each world that is not included in the original work. Of course, it must comply with the most important logic, haha. You can also travel into the legendary stories of some works, such as the devil conquering the brave, haha, just kidding. You can also combine some worlds with similar backgrounds into one large world, so that you don't have to travel through so many worlds, which makes people feel very messy. Of course, the combat power of each character must be arranged well or it will explode. You can also write some native worlds (the story is logical and rigorous, otherwise it will collapse), of course, if the author has no intention, forget it. 6. Let's talk about the characters in the novel, such as: (the protagonist, after using the swordsman card for so long, he won't be able to do anything as soon as he takes off the card. This is not rigorous and makes people confused). It is best to write the supporting characters with flesh and blood and realism, that's all. I was too lazy to fight anymore and went to sleep💤. The above are all my personal opinions. If you feel that what you say makes a little bit of sense, please don't criticize me. I also hope to communicate more with the author. I really like this novel. I hope it gets better and better as I write more. Thank you.

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Your opinions and suggestions about this book (don't comment if you don't like it)

The more I write from now on, the better, but I hope I can write more plots about One Punch Man

Dear author, I still like the plot of One Punch Man, but I don't like the others very much, so can there be more plots of One Punch Man?

Is the author full-time or does he still have a job outside the home?

I feel that Mizumu is the best sister I have seen so far (this is just my personal opinion). Also, I hope you don't always write about being bullied by women. This kind of bad routine is really uncomfortable to watch. It is not male chauvinism. Since the protagonist does not bully women, why should he be bullied by women?

Generally speaking, the early stage is not bad, but it is a little watery. The flaws in the later stage are too big, especially the combat power. You can give any explanation. You can't explain it even if you don't explain it. You can't beat Blackbeard in the super match? ? ? I really don't understand your combat power setting. The original Dragon Ball can explode the moon at about 1,000, and you don't explain it. You can just give a reasonable explanation. This is the main flaw, and then how to say it in the later period, it feels a bit watered down, it just becomes more and more boring. Let's advance the timeline, and then improve the combat power. It feels like the combat power system has collapsed.

Yes, I am a gentleman (pervert)

Is this worthy of being a scumbag or a central air conditioner? I have read more than 400 chapters, and the main character has no virginity (๑˙ー˙๑) I was stunned. Esdeath, the beheaded girl, was delivered to my door. I didn't even dare to touch her. She even said she wanted big breasts and a small butt. With a pretty waist, Esdeath wouldn't touch any girl that fits her well, but she said she likes this kind of girl 🙂🙂🙂 I was shocked (๑˙ー˙๑)

They say I am addicted to the later stages. I was already obsessed after reading the first 200 chapters. Not to mention too much water, the writing style is very boring and the more I read, the more sleepy I feel. The One Punch series is good, but it is too watery.

It really gets better at the end, which is completely different from the previous one. After surviving the bad points in the first few dozen chapters, you will find that the performance of this book is getting better, and it is not without reason 😁

If there are many people, then I will just write it. I won't care about the grades of this book or anything else. As long as everyone is happy^_^

It's very watery, very watery. Many plots are very watery on purpose, which makes people uncomfortable watching it.

I saw that when I first joined the pirates, I met the young empress and retreated. It's not the author's fault, it's just that the fans have seen too many of this plot, and it's a bit cliche.

🙂 As I watched it, I realized that it was finished. It felt good, but it was too short and weak.

It's a psychotic setting. The protagonist is so powerful but he doesn't have any money.

More and more Holy Mother, when you see a woman, show your love, the sea. It's boring to have too many routines like my sister's. Her own strength is rising slowly and she's still thinking about others. I just read more than 200 chapters. Apart from the above problems, it is generally good and can be read. I prefer the chapter about hundreds of little lolita, which made me a little touched and excited, although I have never watched the anime. There are really not many books that give me that feeling after reading novels for more than ten years.

Regarding many irons saying that the Super Saiyan was cut too hard by me, I can only say that the Super Saiyan obtained here is only the strength of seven-year-old Goten, not Kakarot and Vegeta. And we can't all use "exploding stars" as the standard. In Dragon Ball, one thousand combat power can explode stars...

Many of the worlds the protagonist goes to are prohibited by the system from using the power of Super Saiyans. I think this setting is very unreasonable and the plot does not look good. The following suggestions are given here: Since it is a system for cultivating heroes, the decision of whether to use power beyond the world's combat power system should be left to the host itself, not the system. The system should serve as a reminder, such as "Super Saiyan is too powerful and may cause serious damage to the world, so the host should use it with caution." The protagonist, who was reminded by the system, knew that using too powerful a power would "accidentally destroy the world". In this way, he would limit his use of these powers and act more like a hero. "Because the system doesn't let you use it, you don't use your powerful power." Is this a hero? (X) "Because you are afraid of being too powerful and causing damage, you give up the method of easily solving the enemy and choose a method that is difficult for you but will not cause harm to the world." This is a hero! (✓) It is also very simple to change the settings. Before the next world travel, the system can be maintained and upgraded. After the upgrade, two new functions will be added. One is the lifting of power restrictions as I mentioned above, and the function "can spend hero points to repair the world". Looking at Dragon Ball, the reason why the protagonists have no worries when fighting on the earth is because Dragon Ball can repair the world and resurrect humans, so the protagonist also needs something to solve these problems, and that is to spend hero points. Things like these that require the protagonist to explode can also be written more excitingly. When faced with the disaster of annihilation, he directly transforms into a Super Saiyan to crush the enemy. Afterwards, it is heartbreaking to use hero points to repair the world. Choosing the latter between his own interests and repairing the world, this is more like what a hero does. A person who clearly doesn't want to be a hero, but behaves like a hero, can greatly deepen the charm of the protagonist.

One year has passed, and I have been struggling for another year, but I don't intend to be discouraged. Things will always get better, right? I also hope that everyone who reads the book will have a better and better new year, come on! (*^_^*)

There are a lot of typos in this book from beginning to end, and some are missing words. Afterwards, I was jumping to see the sea, which is full of water.

The front part is mostly good, but the later part is weak. Basically relying on system tasks to push the plot, my own thoughts have become much less, and the frequency of interaction with characters has also been reduced. Most of the other people's roles are to be spectators or to fight in groups. . . Do you still remember the attributes of the Shyro King? I miss the days of farming with Loli~

Update soon! Zhazha update soon! Give you a ticket! If you don't update it, I will raise it until you finish it and ask you if you are afraid!

I saw that I was in the wrong place, and I owe Xianyu an alliance, and hereby as proof

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I just discovered that there is a side story, which is interesting!