Begin by Becoming the Lord of Monsters

The subject matter is good and eye-catching. However, there are too many poisonous points 1. He contacted the criminal police to fight monsters together, but he said that he was forced to show off. We like to show our holiness in front of others, but we don't like to deliberately show off and then say we were forced. It's a bit tea-like 2, maybe the original intention was to have a natural and silly female supporting role, but the female supporting role turned out to be disgusting to death, weak and annoying, and she likes to hit the protagonist with a ball with a ball she just met. At first, he looked down on the protagonist and disliked him, but he still lingered afterward. The plot was cliche. He often wears a police uniform and goes to school to find the protagonist to disrupt order. He has no respect for the protagonist at all and only cares about himself. Readers responded many times that it can be worn casually. But because of her obsession with uniforms, the female supporting role only needs uniforms.

The latest chapter says that subscribing is miserable. In order to support my favorite authors, I came to the official website to subscribe for the first time, but I can't find where to subscribe. You can now read for free for 7 days. So just find a reward of 15 yuan for half a day. The student party spent 15 yuan on the 150 yuan card fee for meals a week on campus, which is a small amount of support.

It's very well written, and I feel like I'm immersed in it, hahaha. I came here to support you.

I ordered 100 points just to complain about the three golden chapters. It's not a poison at the beginning. It's really yours. You can even open a vest and go straight up. I'm really confused. You are like a terrorist attack and the police blockade. Then you come over and say that there are machine gun fires. Then the police see you as an ordinary student. I don't have the ability to kill people, so I think you are not suspected. Then you said that the terrorist attack was too deep and you couldn't control it. Then you looked at the unrecognizable corpse without changing its expression, which shocked the police. They thought you are so nb, you must be a big boss who can solve terrorist attacks... 😅

Does this picture deserve a refinement? !

It's not without reason that this book is criticized for its poor performance. I won't talk about a lot of nonsense. The combat power is always written incorrectly and confused, and the poisonous points are one after another. Why can you write such a good subject like this?

The protagonist's position feels completely untenable! Neither human nor ghost, traitor among monsters

In the later period, when the real world position collapses, you will either side with the human race or the demon race. But the protagonist first helps humans kill monsters and then helps monsters kill people. Don't tell the difference between good and bad. This is a race war, and there must be innocent people involved. Killing to the back can only be due to hatred rather than good or evil. If you really want to follow the Holy Mother style, just occupy a hilltop and show neutrality, so that anyone who still comes to challenge can be killed with confidence.

From the time I started writing Journey to the West, I could clearly feel the loss of popularity. I thought the first few worlds were okay. Even if there were water parts, I could accept it. But when Journey to the West started, it suddenly became a drama, because this is a second-generation Japanese manga novel, and there are many Chinese comics. The reason is that I can't write it, but I really didn't expect that Xianyu would write Journey to the West all of a sudden, and I felt a little bit like letting myself go. The world of Journey to the West keeps digging holes, and I have the illusion that I will send You Dou to the list of gods, but the disaster of becoming a god has passed, and then Later, I had the illusion of writing Sun Wukong to death in this world, and then found six-eared macaques to replace him, helping Monk Tang to obtain scriptures from the West, and A Chinese Ghost Story's chaotic journey to the west, etc., Which gradually went against the original intention of writing this book. The recommended episode is not to dislike him. I dislike him because he is not popular enough, but instead of doing that, it is better to finish the novel early and save time for the next novel. This is much better than writing a few chapters or one thing for a fighting scene, writing several chapters with fewer words than before, and still writing without stopping. It will at least have a reputation.

I would boldly speculate that this book has been sold to the studio, so now I am dragging it on. Then I can only tell you when you finish it and pop the champagne😅

I don't know why, but I always feel like it's written crookedly. When I first saw this subject, I was full of expectations, but everything came to nothing later.

The world view of the main world is too badly set, and the introduction of gods is too sudden. It feels like the power of Pig's Knuckle increases too quickly, and the force of finding an opponent for Pig's Knuckle is not written well. There is no sense of crisis in the whole process. The biggest crisis is just the backlash of the evil in this world, and for this reason, it is forcibly exposed, which will probably poison the few readers away and destroy a good hand.

I have been reading this since the last book, so let me share my two personal feelings. 1. The author is really good. I don't know whether the writing style is like this or is intentional. Many places can be explained clearly in one or two sentences, but it takes several pages or even a chapter to explain. At best, it's a clear explanation; at worst, it's just a lot of useless nonsense. This also leads me to my second point. 2. The battle scenes are too weak. It's also because of what I said above that I feel this way. A sword is fired, and a lot of words are used to explain the sword, causing the battle to seem continuous at all. For example, a man and a woman were doing something indescribable. The man spent half an hour bragging about how powerful his gadget was, and did nothing in the middle. The woman had already solved the problem by herself, and she almost fell asleep after adding another cigarette before you said I was coming. 3. Some of the plots are really bad. 4. Since there is a main world, don't waste so many worlds on world grinding. Just finish it in a dozen or twenty chapters. Too much is boring. This is also a shortcoming of variety comics. Most people who write variety comics write about the same anime over and over again. Those who like to read variety comics are tired of watching them. They keep going back and forth. They rarely write better plots. Looking at the author's last book, he probably can't write any variety comics with special features. It's actually a good idea to move toward originality. It's also a good choice to practice semi-originality first. And if the author is semi-original, there is no need to spend so many chapters on other worlds. Just learn the skills, pick up the things, and complete the tasks. In fact, if the author himself likes it, he can write more about it, as long as he doesn't like it. Only personal feelings. Now that I have read the latest chapter, I feel like I can't stand it anymore. Good luck with the sales and farewell.

... Sure enough, I still don't understand why the author has such good results for these two books. It really feels very average, and it's embarrassing to read half of it. I haven't read the last one since I came back from Naruto. I've been reading it hard since then, including this one. I couldn't stand it after seeing Demon Slayer.

The more I read, the more I am confused. It is extremely difficult to gain reputation, and it is extremely casual to use. When I went to another world, I was given a big gift package in the main world and the spiritual energy burst out. Others were improved, but there was no pig's feet. I was afraid that it would rise too quickly and the writing would collapse too quickly. I would not be successful. The subject matter is really good, but there is really nothing to see

If nothing else, the old man was very handsome when he was young, but unfortunately he became disabled later on.

I'm not afraid of spending money, I'm afraid of being inexplicable. Fortunately, I don't spend a lot of money. For books like this, Laoqidian is very good. Those who can get VIP will charge. Others are just for fun. Demon Slayer and Slippery Ghost are both good IDs. Don't waste good things.

A reminder to friends who are also new to the game: those who are just starting to watch, don't read the post. There are a lot of people looking for faults, which really affects the reading experience.

If you have a favorite world, you can share it here (´▽｀)

Am I the only one who thinks this author's book is too naive? I feel like sometimes the writing is very good, but the next world suddenly becomes too pretentious at the beginning. I couldn't stand the previous one-punch book about halfway through. It was okay at the beginning, but it was always hard to do as soon as I got some strength. It's really embarrassing. This is my first time traveling to Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, and I feel a little uncomfortable. The key is that this book's results are very good, and sometimes I also like the writing, but it's very contradictory.

Xingyue fanfics are really boring, I don't even want to read them. The main thing is to write about Xingyue fanfics. There are just a few people who keep fighting and being beaten to death. They make all kinds of excuses. Obviously they can kill them directly, but they just play and don't want to destroy Xingyue characters. But has the author ever thought that Xingyue characters have a basic foundation? Instead of highlighting the protagonist's character, you keep emphasizing the character of Xingyue. What do you think?

As in the title, you can tell me about your favorite monsters. I will let them appear depending on the situation. Some of them are relatively rare. I hope you can bring pictures so that I can describe them better (´▽｀)

It doesn't matter that Shen Gongbao turned into a Jiejiao. He was still listening to Tongtian before, but he came to trick Tongtian with his back foot. You can still play with the half-human and half-ghost protagonist in front of you, but now he has become a real dragon and the previous setting is too strong. A good comprehensive comic now writes so much fantasy, which is a bit overwhelming, giving book lovers a feeling of being out of place.

Of the 3.02 Million words, 2 million are in water! Really unnecessary

In the middle and later stages, the protagonist becomes more and more like a virgin.

Seeing that there are so many character cards, wouldn't you consider posting some character pictures?

I admit that many people think that the female character in the beginning is a kind of cute and fun-loving character. Generally, many people will hate this kind of character. But it's common in many Japanese comics. This type of female character, because the opponent is very bad at first, completely eliminates her chance to appear and doesn't give her a chance to become stronger. And I want to mention one more thing, Kujo Hinano is not the heroine, the heroine is still under consideration for the time being...

I can only say that this author is better at writing in the middle and late stages. If you read the book reviews, you won't be able to read any of the books. According to what the author said in the group, there will be new brides, fox girls, snow girls, etc. The heroine may not be a normal human being...

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How to say it? Personally, I feel that it is very watery. The free ones at the front are fine, but it gets messy at the back, and water keeps adding, and water keeps adding, and I have no intention of watching the back. It's a pity, I took advantage of the free time to look at the back, and I'm not very interested. All in all, an average 50 points