Hogwarts 1991

It's rubbish, I feel upset when I see it! ! ! What is it? Poison!

It's really bad... The main character has a real mental problem. What are you writing?

——The so-called "MacGuffin" means something that does not exist. It represents a topic or a simple plot and idea, and the suspense and plot generated from it. That is, someone or something does not exist, but it is an important clue to the development of the story. This is one of Hitchcock's most commonly used film expression techniques. I first read the book on Baidu. After reading hundreds of chapters, I realized it was the starting point. Why don't you rename your book "Harry Potter and the MacGuffin"? The protagonist plays 0 role in it. The nicknames others give him are all fake. The protagonist himself is just a silly lunatic who can't even lose his temper and is teased by Old Bee and Voldemort. The meaning of the name is quite ironic. I was pushed around throughout the whole process. I had some talent but it was quickly wiped out. The most glorious titles and achievements always belong to others. Even throughout the whole book, I only knew about the protagonist's external characteristics, his messy hair and even the color of his eyes. I remember that the protagonist also commented that he had "embarrassed the time-travelers". Indeed, he was embarrassed and embarrassed. Others who have traveled through time have either become graceful and graceful, dominated the magical world and become gods, or married a lot of wives and reached the pinnacle of life. You are the only time traveler who is not only disgusted by people, but has always been treated as a pawn and so on. Can you imagine that the priority of the protagonist in this book will always be lower than Harry and others? I read the book to see that the protagonist is so useless and aggrieved, and I still don't realize it. Leave all this aside... There is no way to leave it behind. This book is quite difficult to review. Voldemort just rules the world.

The pace is so slow, with more than a hundred chapters written, I don't know how long the plot will drag on!

The plot of this book is not bad, but this book has no routine and no heroine. Some things are often skipped. If you want to read this book, it is best not to read 1 to 53. Some of them are unacceptable. Although I have not read the last 200, it feels better to write his sister as a boss.

The previous problem is that the arrogance of the time traveler is written, making him feel that he is always right and unable to see his own shortcomings. This makes him feel that he is special and will be targeted by everyone, but it also makes him feel that the things the protagonist does are very weird and uncomfortable to watch.

This was the first time I saw a protagonist who was threatened by a reborn sister and broke his wand without being angry. He was tortured throughout the holiday and couldn't sleep well, so he couldn't resist. Finally, he broke out on a classmate who disturbed his sleep and reminded him to get off the bus. It was also the first time I saw the NT thing dancing on the boat when Marv entered Hogwarts. I won't mention other poisonous points, see you later

I suggest changing the title to "The Mental Life of Psychopaths at Hogwarts" so that it can attract many people who like it.

It feels like the protagonist has mental problems, maybe the author wanted this effect. I feel that the character design and the actions are very inconsistent, but this is a common problem among Harry Potter fans. The time travel party forcibly reduces the intelligence. He said that he didn't need his body but was very honest. I'm sorry that I don't like this style, so I gave up. I'm looking for a book where the protagonist's IQ is online and he doesn't follow the group. Is there any book friend who would recommend this book?

The system is good, but my family is too stupid and irritating.

This sister is so annoying, haven't you checked out other fandoms? This family is so miserable.

It's really rare for an adult to be so retarded in thinking and acting like this in a mentally retarded novel. He always says that he wants to develop in a low-key manner without any low-key approach. He is falsely accused in front of dozens of people and doesn't say a single thing. He knows where there are dangers but still gets close to them. He knows that there are many problems around the three protagonists and they still stay friends and cause trouble. Damn it, there is no main plot idea at all.

After reading the comments, I feel relieved. The problem is not with me. It is indeed a poisonous one. The protagonist is like a headless fly with no goal at all. Either you establish your dominant position in the protagonist group and write about it, or you do not get involved in the plot, just like the majority of students in the plot make backgrounds and write out their own college life. Finally, I would like to give the author a word of encouragement. The plot is so bad that I can continue to write. I am a qualified author and can criticize the article, but the author's professional attitude cannot be said 👍

Is the male protagonist really a reborn person with adult psychology and IQ? Being paranoid about persecution, he loses his mind at any time. He cannot perform the transformation spell and does not listen to the professor's advice. He has to find the reason himself.

Highly toxic. Originally, it seems that the protagonist is a bit crazy in the first part and can be treated as a joke, but in the second part, the protagonist is given a blood curse by Erpilian and it becomes extremely poisonous. A controlled weakling, although he has a trump card to make a comeback, will commit suicide if he continues to seek death.

I am a Level 99 Titled Poison Douluo. I was poisoned to death by this book.

I feel like there are all kinds of silly plots, and the pig's feet are silly from beginning to end.

I didn't feel that he was reborn as an adult at all. I felt like a primary school student might as well be like an idiot -_- || Frequent mindless fantasies

I don't know why the old guys in the book review section were so irritable, but I joined in after reading about ten chapters. What can I say? This book gives people a sense of incongruity from the beginning. The description of people is perfunctory, and they all become tools for personal gain. In order to stick to the theme of the book, it is very eager for magic, but it is full of prejudice against the magic world and even adds unspoken rules of collusion to the magic world. This thing was originally intended to be a reading book for all ages, but it turned out to be even more intelligent than some TV series on Toilet Station.

Newcomers, don't believe the words of the seniors. The negative reviews with more than 200 likes are no joke. I'm fucked too.

Why doesn't Qidian have a blacklist function? Every time I come across this book, I won't open it at all, okay? Out of sight and out of mind? Is it disgusting to appear in the search list every day?

It's a rubbish novel, and you'll make adults look bad. You don't want to make progress in cheating, complaining that the cheating is not good enough, and you have to study and do tasks by yourself. He still rides a horse like an idiot child and has no virtue

A sister who has no lower limit for the Nobel Prize, a muscular brother with a very low IQ, a very mischievous sister, two somewhat normal parents, and a schizophrenic protagonist, it is really poisonous.

I don't know what mental state the author is in when he writes about a mentally ill protagonist. I can't bear to watch him dancing on a boat. Normal humans can control their own behavior, but the author's protagonist often loses control. It's really impossible to put the perspective of the mentally ill protagonist into perspective.

I have always wondered, without strength, what is the use of Occlumency alone? Would anyone use Legilimency on a student? Isn't it more curious that Legilimency is useless? Since the spell doesn't work, there is still veritaserum. Magic is useless and there is physical torture. Besides, what if others really knew about it? Can it make people immortal or have unlimited powers? The only ones that really affected it were Dumbledore and Voldemort. In this magical world, prophecy is not the exclusive preserve of the protagonist. Moreover, the protagonist only knows Harry Potter for a few years at school. Besides, if you say you have traveled through time, will others believe you? In this magical world, visitors from other worlds have never been seen. But it's not uncommon for people to have their memories altered? Others will just believe it without questioning whether it is possible for you to use prophecies to set up chess like Dumbledore did.

It was extremely toxic in the early stages, always emphasizing that the protagonist is a mature adult in his thirties at heart, and then kept doing extremely childish things. It was normal to like to play with figurines, but it was clearly made known to the whole family that the figurines were his wives, and there were more than ten people in the carriage surrounded by them. He swallowed his temper even when being beaten and scolded, and then broke out when his figure broke. He couldn't control his emotions and danced in front of everyone on the ship entering Hogwarts. These behaviors are not normal for liking the second dimension. They are just the kind of two-dimensional demons seen on the Internet that make people startled; He never hides his behavior and always looks at people with a superior look. The key point is that the author always emphasizes the maturity of the protagonist. Although he does a lot of sb things, the professors think he is mature. He adds a halo of intelligence to everyone and behaves like a little kid. But just ignore the author. He is a mature middle-aged man in his thirties, but he insists that everyone thinks he is mature, which seriously makes people suspect that the author is also a two-dimensional demon who has not yet entered society. If you don't know how to describe this kind of setting, you don't have to write like this 😰😰

Not to mention anything else, let's just say that the male protagonist was cursed by Voldemort and turned into a snake in his first year of school. It was lifted from chapter 113 to chapter 562, and he even lost his curse in the middle. The psychological description of the male protagonist in the middle is quite realistic, and there is reason to wonder whether the author has had similar experiences.

I vomited. The author first wrote about the real world of the protagonist. Then look at it in the real world. Then the protagonist starts going crazy when he arrives at school and becomes a psychopath, which is okay. Then the protagonist is framed. The author himself uses the protagonist's hand in the article to say what made them lose their wits. Professor McGonagall, the student "framed" the protagonist like a fool, and even Snape did such a clumsy thing. The protagonist admitted that he was snitching behind his back. When the Gryffindor students went to duel at night and snitched, the protagonist got rid of the title of the mastermind behind the scenes, but he was the betrayer. Under Snape's high pressure, he defended himself with a few words, which was disrespectful to the professor and was punished by Dumbledore.

What the hell is this? I just read chapter 50. I was so depressed that I wanted to kill someone. I wanted to break Malfoy's neck. I wanted to kill Snape. Dumbledore should die. Magic is a ghost, you have traveled through time and have a system, but you still wrong yourself like this? What kind of magic world is this? Isn't it good to just mix in the ordinary world? What Mother Mother asked Mag made sense! What's so good about learning magic? Isn't it better to be an ordinary person?

It's a bit funny, but the pricing is crazy. It costs 10 to 15 starting coins to read one chapter of other people's books, and more than 30 to 20 for your chapter. The lowest is 20. One chapter of yours is worth two to three chapters of other people's books. The price positioning is too high. Don't read it now. Find something else to read.