I Train the Boss Behind the Scenes

In fact, I was too lazy to participate in the event because I had to type a lot of words and was too lazy. . . But this morning, a friend in the group asked me to recommend a novel, so I chose this book by the mastermind behind the scenes and typed a lot of words. I turned around and thought, I finally worked hard and couldn't waste it, so here is my wall-breaking strategy! =͟͟͞͞( 'ヮ' 'ヮ' =͟͟͞͞) ----------------------------------The ruthless separator Getting back to the subject, let me tell you my thoughts on this book. As a family, interested book friends can discuss together. [Plot Summary] The story of this book is written by a member of the army of time-travelers. It mainly tells the story of a protagonist who takes the God List to fight against the natural enemies of human race - ancient gods and demons in another world, and weaves (false) Chinese myths. The protagonist hides behind the scenes, weaves mythical stories and ancient forces one after another, uses many vests to fool and train many potential newbies to become big bosses step by step, fools people in other worlds, and makes false Chinese myths come true in distant alien worlds, and legends reappear. It looks interesting ( • ̀ω•́ )✧ Please note that this book is not strictly an invincible text. The protagonist Zhao Li has been growing up, from weak to strong. The reason why Zhao Li was able to play the role of the man behind the scenes was due to his golden finger - a blank list of gods. The Conferred Gods List did not directly bring Zhao Lilong Aotian's strength. The Fengshen Bang allows Zhao Li to leave his body and enter the inner world of the Fengshen Bang, improve the status of the soul (which seems bluffing), shape the scene according to Zhao Li's heart, provide an extremely realistic experience, and deduce various magical skills. But the Conferred Gods List also needs energy to drive it, and that is the luck of the alien land of Kyushu. This is why the protagonist is the man behind the scenes and trains the boss. People from Kyushu are selected to be cultivated using the Fengshen List. Their improvement in strength changes their destiny and also affects the historical direction of Kyushu. The resulting luck is the energy source of the Fengshen List. The Fengshen Bang trains the newbies to make them stronger, and the cute newcomers' strength replenishes the Fengshen Bang with energy and feeds back to Zhao Li. In this cycle, everyone is getting better and better. The various stories in this are the highlight of this book. See how the protagonist excels in acting, how he deceives people, how he turns lies into reality, how he turns things upside down; see how the newbie is deceived, how he is trained, how he changes his destiny... I have to say that Lao Zhao is really a profitless businessman. [In-depth evaluation] I think the advantages and disadvantages should be part of the evaluation. Only by considering the advantages and disadvantages can we get an evaluation. So I'll put it all in this part. ੭ ᐕ)੭*⁾⁾ The first is the advantages. 1. The theme is novel and the perspective is unique. Behind-the-scenes scenes are actually a relatively common subject in Qidian, and it is difficult to write anything new. What makes this book unique is the setting. Most of the behind-the-scenes streams are written in the form of game text streams. They are all about summoning players, using tactics like a sea of ​​people, and immortality. To be honest, I get tired of watching too many of the same genre. The book "The Master Behind the Scenes" changes the background and perspective. The story is set in a completely real world, the protagonist is just a small character in the world, and the supporting characters are all real existences of flesh and blood. There are no players here who are immortal like locusts crossing the border. Here are the residents of this world who have their own loves, hates, sorrows and joys, and death is like a lamp going out. Therefore, by watching the characters in the book strive for self-improvement and gradually change their destiny, readers will have a sense of involvement and empathy. In addition, compared with other behind-the-scenes novels, the focus is on nurturing the protagonist through players becoming stronger. Players are just tools. This book's perspective goes down to the supporting characters. It does not simply describe their cheating and becoming stronger, but also narrates their growth and their involvement with the world and other forces. Only with a novel perspective can the book seem less pale. 2. The emotions are delicate and the characters are vividly drawn. As I said above, supporting characters are not tools. They have their own love and hatred, so the characters will appear vivid and the plot will not be pale. Ji Xin's "I want to win", Yunying's ten thousand years of suffering, the blood splashing on Xuanyuan when the silver gun shoots Yun... The author is very strong in the description of emotional brewing, and it seems that he has a lot of feelings. 3. The description of group portraits is colorful. Every character in the book has his own story and determination. The perspective is not focused on the protagonist Zhao Li. Most of the supporting characters are very brilliant and will not be ignored. Of course, group dramas are very difficult to describe, and how to control them well is a big problem. The best group portrait drama I have seen so far is "The Master". The author's description of the group portraits is slightly lacking in comparison. I will talk about this later. 4. The action is outstanding and the fighting scenes are full of momentum. Anyone who has read this book will find that the author is very good at describing action scenes, and the fights are particularly brilliant. The early scenes of Zhao Li using Bajiquan and spears were exciting to read. The description of magic and swordsmanship in the middle and later stages is still majestic. I read the author's last book. It has a martial arts style, youthful spirit and martial arts flavor. No wonder the action scenes in this book are so brilliant. 5. Be good at being cool and pretending to be more natural. As a web novel, especially a fantasy novel, having fun is an unavoidable topic. The author is good at creating cool moments, with a natural look and feel. Most of the time, it won't make you feel awkward. Of course, there are occasionally a little stiff, but that's in the later stages, and the proportion is very small, so it's generally harmless. Okay, the sweet dates are gone, now comes the big stick ╮( •́ω•̀ )╭ As for the shortcomings, friends who have been ordering all the time should be able to see it. First of all, the current combat power is collapsed. The main plot of the book is the human race's struggle against ancient gods and demons. In the early stage, the gods and demons are very powerful, and various descriptions are also dedicated to highlighting the personality and strength of the gods and demons. Countless characters and martyrs sacrificed their lives in exchange for the end of the gods and demons, ushering in a short-term peace. In addition, there are ancient gods and demons on top of the gods and demons. Logically speaking, this is the ceiling of the world and the final boss. Putting aside the two weak gods and demons who first appeared, are the subsequent appearances of the gods and demons too weak? A legion with only a small number of people and no outstanding individual strength can defeat the gods and demons and even the supreme leader of the gods and demons. Even if Xu Yun takes the lead before reincarnation, it seems too childish. The atmosphere of global unity exaggerated in the early stage has been washed away. In addition, there is also the issue of the strength of heaven and earth. In the book, heaven and earth are all existences that far exceed the strength of immortals, so why did they fall so long ago? Just because the gods and demons who are performing very poorly now are even innate gods and demons? What's more, the innate gods and demons have been cleared. How can this lie be fulfilled? Of course, this involves a plot that has not happened later, and it depends on how the author writes it. This is a plot discussion, so I won't go into details. I just hope that the author can grasp the combat power system well. After all, this is the basis of fantasy literature. Second, the stalls are too big and the rhythm is not well controlled. The structure of the book is not a multi-line narrative, but usually focuses on describing a certain character's growth experience. But the characters are spread all over the place and there are many things involved. This has both advantages and disadvantages. The good thing is that each character has his own plot, his own power and growth resources, and the combination of them with each other in the middle and later stages is a good thing to watch. The disadvantage is that poor length planning can easily downplay other characters, and even the participation of the protagonist himself is reduced. This is also the difficulty and shortcoming of group portraits mentioned before. Moreover, the protagonist's stall is too big and attracts many forces. The Buddhist stalls in heaven and earth are spread out, and the rhythm of all aspects is difficult to control. These problems have been exposed in the latest Legion chapter. Hope it can improve in the future. In general, these are the two big problems. The overall progress of the novel is currently not high, so this can all be remedied. So, please come on, author~ I believe that after overcoming these problems, your writing power will become stronger and the book will be more beautiful! Overall, this book has outstanding advantages. Although there are shortcomings, they do not affect the overall viewing experience. For me, it's more than food and grass, but not enough grass. If the setting can be improved and the problems of combat power collapse and story rhythm can be solved, this book will be even better. Above|ω･)و ̑̑༉

Do you really want to know the origin of Heaven? Every generation will be born with the most powerful people. They will endure for a lifetime and last forever... But there are too many powerful people, so some of the most powerful people established a divine dynasty, which was called Heavenly Court. Want to establish order in heaven. But not all strong men are willing to join the Heavenly Court, so they established their own divine dynasty. The Demon Court, Hades, the human world, the four seas... The world is still in chaos. After a long period of war, Heaven unified the world and established the Five Constants, Five Categories of the World, and the Three Realms of God and Pluto. The world seemed to have calmed down... But there were still some people who were dissatisfied with the rule of Heaven. They started the war again and wanted to pull Heaven down from the altar. However, Heaven had been unified for too long, and no single organization could defeat them. So, the rebels created another most powerful, world-destroying weapon! The weapons that destroyed the world caused great damage to the world itself. At this point, there is no distinction between the pure and the earth, and there is no distinction between heaven, earth, humans, gods, and ghosts; there is no distinction between immortals, gods, humans, ghosts, and demons. The chaotic war seemed to have been going on for a long time... Time had been messed up until... Those detached strongest men and saints came to an end. We don't know what happened at that time, but according to vague memories, the saint did what he wanted to do most back then, and re-enacted chaos! Reset earth, water, fire and wind! ! And brought everyone into a new world. And ordered us to re-establish order. Rebuilding Heaven is the fastest way, so Heaven is reborn.

I think the author may be a little confused now. I suggest you take a day off and rethink your thoughts. The chapter updated last night is actually a climax, which should be described in detail. I personally feel that it is not too much to describe it in two or three chapters. On the contrary, some of the middle chapters in the front are actually completely unnecessary. There is also Greedy Wolf's backstabbing. In fact, we can't keep doing this... This book should only be half written... What will happen after Greedy Wolf reveals the setting so early... It would be better to tell half and leave half. For example, the protagonist uses a sealing technique to let Greedy Wolf talk about the things in heaven, but he is silenced. Isn't it interesting to whet the appetite of others? And the setting of that game... I find it very embarrassing. To be honest, there is no need for any virtual reality at all. Instead, the level of heaven is lowered by virtual reality. Also, You... Let's intersperse the heroine a little bit... I almost forgot about this role... This book is quite interesting. It creates a "heaven" from scratch. Such a grand and majestic story has considerable potential.

Although the title of this book is unremarkable, I didn't see the feeling of the title being that of a book with old fairy tale themes. But as you continue reading, the content is very interesting and emotional. The original Kyushu cultivation system is similar to the immortals and demons in the book "Yang Shen" or a simple version of the cultivation system in the book "The Lord of the World", while the protagonist in the article brings the classic cultivation system of Taoism and immortality under the prehistoric system. This book is not limited to the majesty and solemnity of the Three Realms and Six Paths in traditional prehistoric themes. The author describes the transformation process of human immortal martial arts against gods and demons into the classic system of cultivating immortals in a humorous and modern writing style. From the chapter names to the words between the lines, they all have the same joyful and transcendent feeling that I had when I watched the "My Senior Brother is Too Steady" back in the day, and they all have something in common with the development of Gou Dao behind the scenes. At the same time, the emotions and spirits of the characters depicted in the mythical battle between the human race and heavenly beings, led by the protagonist in the later stages of the book, are also extremely touching and shocking. On the basis of the traditional themes of gods and demons in the ancient times, it is also full of the author Mao Ni's "The Story of Choosing Heaven" and "The Great Way to Heaven", the artistic conception of seeking Tao and accompanying the mortal world. The book is basically a comedy with a vivid plot and is worth reading.

I finished reading it in one go, and when I was lucky enough to watch it, it was already over. I cried many times and was excited many times. However, I was not particularly moved by the ending because I almost knew the ending after watching it. It really started from the time when Lao Zhao merged with Jiuzhou to form three parts of the world. I was so excited that I couldn't stop. It's a pity that many of the subplots disappeared. Especially since I finished reading it in three or four days, I remember the plot relatively clearly, and I was a little speechless. The characters that were obviously very colorful in the early stage were completely gone in the later stage. I liked the Dragon Clan's Yu Jie more at first, thinking that she would have some follow-up, but she was completely gone. However, I was still excited for a long time when Yuanhuang exploded. This is the first book I have read in more than a year. The pacing is pretty good and there is basically no plot that makes people lose their patience. I hope the author can have better development and progress. Thank you for bringing such a great story. Finally, I love Yun Zhongjun the most, and I also love Zhao Li's white hair. I hope Ji Xin and Xiao Long Nu will be happy, and I hope Donghuang can prepare more chef costumes for Greedy Wolf. Happy New Year to everyone 😊

*The content of this article has been converted from traditional to simplified. Please forgive me if there are typos or unclear words Stop at Chapter 150 of Tianqian Yuanshuo, about 40-50% of the book. The reason for stopping is that the plot of the chapter does not have enough highlights to impress me. The other part is about using Tianting Skin to create characters. I felt tired and tired of the process. When I finally read this, it felt more and more inconsistent with my original expectations. I originally expected to see a development story in which the protagonist was created by many coincidences and trained many interesting bosses. However, I felt that what I was seeing was that the protagonist used other people's memories to create himself. The training space was getting less and less, so I decided to abandon the book here. Before abandoning the book, I thought that the initial training of Ji Xin and Greedy Wolf was actually the flavor that I really wanted to see. The protagonist himself is a plug-in for other characters, and the original destiny of the character is changed through this plug-in. Moreover, people still don't know that the protagonist is actually just an ordinary person with low strength. I think this idea is actually quite interesting, but unfortunately later on I felt that the protagonist did this less and less. Starting from the establishment of the underworld, it felt like there was no main line and no new character development. Instead, he started to conquer other ghost realms, but the battle itself was very boring. In addition to the interesting nurturing, the more impressive passages only have some more ridiculous stories, such as Yun Ying'er's stupid wait. This stupid bird founded a sect while waiting, and trained disciples while waiting for someone who only stayed with her for three months. , And also treated her hypocritical master, waiting for 10,000 years was not enough. He was soaked in the rain all day and still didn't wake up. She was also worried that the evil master was just delayed on the way and was rushing here, and he forced himself to hang himself for 3,000 years, lying in bed every day and waiting. Such a stupid bird deserves a perfect ending. I hope she will be happy in the chapters that I didn't see. The other scene is the scene where Ji Xin found Tong Le following him up the mountain covered in blood, so he took off his boots, put them on for her and carried him down the mountain. It's not a very novel story, but I'm often moved by silly and bloody places like this. Finally, let's talk about the use of mythical skins to visualize certain characters. The first one to use this method is absolutely amazing, but in modern novels, I think this method has become a bit outdated. Too many novels use this method and it is not refreshing, especially pure skinning, and people cannot observe the process of skinning. Especially in this book, there is a greedy wolf and a land, which constantly reminds these trapped characters who they are. Forcing the characters to cooperate with the performance in this direction seems boring and without any surprises.

This is a story about a rookie who made up myths in order to survive, but later all the myths came true. It can be said that many people have written this routine, but few have written it so richly and passionately. The last few articles have been very touching. As a bookworm of more than ten years, this book is worth reading.

Uh-huh, if I want Lao Zhao to be beautiful alone, this emotional scene is too embarrassing.

How can I put it this way? This is the climax part recently. It's pretty good to watch, but every time it reaches a certain point, it breaks. So, author, do you often feel like this? This feeling of not being able to go up or go down is very uncomfortable.

The writing is not good, so I just express my personal feelings. Reason for pursuing the book: When I read it, I felt the heroic spirit of Jianghu. In addition to the protagonist, I could also see the joys and sorrows of other characters' stories. In particular, the tragedy of Lao Yan was absolutely unique and outstanding. Things that don't work well: Some of Lao Yan's descriptions of relationships between men and women look awkward and will be skipped. And although it is about the protagonist, the stories of other characters are often more prominent. Although it is mainly the appearance of other people that is the climax of the plot, but after reading those stories and then looking at the daily life of the main line, it will feel tasteless (although I have read it, it just lacks a bit of flavor). Note: Lao Yan has not saved the manuscript, so the update frequency depends on the status; Lao Yan likes climaxes and fragments, which may make you excited, so remember to save chapters and read them all at once; Lao Yan does not know TJ, so he will definitely give the story an ending, so don't worry. (The above are my own feelings and may be modified and added at any time. If you disagree, it is indeed normal.)

Keep it up, author, and don't be led astray by the unclear combat power in the comments. Don't you see, such as Lan Ke Qiyuan is a model. They also don't have a clear division, but instead write a classic fairy tale flavor. The author is still the same now, and his writing is more perfect than that of Lan Ke. And the author's setting of mythical characters is very good, but there is no need to worry about physical laws and regulations. Because classical mythology, no matter which country it comes from, is purely idealistic, and any physical laws of energy conservation are useless.

Recently my writing style has stabilized again. As expected, I can't update it three times. The writing is so confusing and it's eye-catching. It's fine as it is. Don't put too much pressure on it. It's okay to write slowly. The key is to write well and not rough.

， A pill is refined outside the prescription, and a hundred poems are written into drunkenness and madness. Hutian has its own Changchun mirror, and the island is peaceful and peaceful at night. Stepping on the road outside the blue clouds, Emperor Aoxi is in the ninth heaven. Dreams are broken, yellow grains are over, everything is over, and mirage clouds are no longer visible in the smoke. It takes three thousand days to cook into lead and mercury, and it leaps out of Yin and Yang for eight hundred years. The sword hangs in the bucket and Nankui goes down to the north. The moon is slightly above the sky. When I came, I showed a flawless film, but Qingxiao refused to accept it. A modern person travels back to the ancient Shang Dynasty with a system and becomes one of the Sha Po Lang. In this background there are Xiqi and eight hundred princes. There are immortals, gods, emperors, three religions, and saints who lead them. Different from the list of gods, the background of the characters is the ninth destiny. The main plot unfolds in Yizhou Houfu

I once sorted out hundreds of books on a whim! Read his book? Suddenly remembered! What a great book! When I look at it again, it is still the same. After viewing, pay the fee! Poverty! Look at it from a different perspective! I don't know the time! Suddenly money came to me! Looking back, it's just a few pictures! Wait two days! Shocking foreshadowing! Astonishing! Pull up your pants next time!

Rush! Come on, author!

The update speed for a book like this is already pretty good. If it were any faster, the quality might fluctuate. Come on, author, just don't forget your true intentions.

Dear author, please write a little more steadily. Don't have too many pretentious plots like the last few chapters. It will collapse easily. As long as you write a few million words steadily in this book, you will have a chance of becoming a god. Stability is very important.

I really like this book. There are very few people like me who can take the initiative to pay for it without reading the original version, so I must support it.

Update quickly

Recently, my style of painting is a little different from the previous style. I still like a more cheerful backstab.

Original introduction———————————— That story that no one knows has become a myth and legend. The distant myth eventually disappeared into the earth and became history. Strange things emerged, the first gods walked into the sky, Xiangliu spit out poisonous fire in the sky, Lei Ze's God of Thunder beat the war drum that shook the world, and human warriors crossed the sky and smashed into Mount Buzhou in anger. The rocket rain burned the entire night sky, and the arrows containing spiritual energy shattered in the air, forming a trajectory that could be seen from thousands of miles away. This is the golden age of spiritual practice. People, demons and spirits walk on the earth, the dead ones form strange ghosts, and the inborn gods stand high in the sky, overlooking the mountains, rivers and earth. All practitioners are competing for the authority of the seven realms and nine states. 'Taichu' opened his eyes.

Heretics meet the deity. GIF

As for Jiuli, he should have some tattoos.

It looks a little awkward. . . It's not popular probably because of writing and setting issues.

I originally wanted to run away, but after seeing your reply I might as well say it again. What I'm talking about is Yunying's perspective. The word limit for this chapter is too high, so I said it in the comments. Li Yili Yunying's line, she has waited for more than 13,000 years, and fought against the rules of heaven and earth to continue waiting. 1. The ancient ruins of Miaofa Valley begin, and the mountain gate is opened to entertain guests. Then when the mountain gate was about to close, I wanted to go out for a walk, having not been out of the courtyard for nearly three hundred years. (Note that the following behavior here tells the price of her leaving the courtyard from the perspective of a disciple - the consumption of her short life span, as well as the whim instincts of ordinary immortals regarding their own important matters and crises, and the master's cultivation). 2. I happened to meet Zhao Li who was late in front of the mountain gate formation. Seeing Zhao Li's blue and white Taoist robes and the sword that obviously had a long history, Zhao Li slightly nodded in greeting. Pay attention to the reaction of the ancestor in the article, "My eyes were slightly widened, and I looked at Zhao Li, as if I didn't expect to see any guests here, and my breathing seemed to stop slightly." With Yunying having lived for thirteen thousand years and looking down on the world, what made her lose her composure was definitely not that there was a guest in front of the mountain gate, but the identity of this guest. Looking at her return gift, Zhao Li just nodded slightly, while Yunying said "the old man returned the gift with a slight smile, raised his hands, and bowed." It means that here we have already determined that this is what Master said back then that we will meet again one day. Although it has been more than ten thousand years, we finally met in this valley and determined that the person in front of us is Master. This is the expectation of the agreement made back then and the trust in one's own instinct. Otherwise, who is worthy of Yunying, the ancestor, to be so generous when the other person only slightly lowers his head? 3. Looking at the dialogue again, the sentence "Xianzhang, why did you come so late?" This is a kind of temptation, stemming from the recognition of identity, so she is very polite in her words, but the emotions contained are really complex. She is looking forward to the arrival of the master. Master, why did you come? Are you here for me or for the Gu you raised? The uninformed Zhao Li replied like this in order to show off, "If I hadn't come here at this time, how could I have seen this moment? The destiny is destined, everything is just like a sword." Yunying's reaction was "his eyes were lowered, he was silent for a moment, then smiled slightly and said, 'What the immortal said makes sense.'" No matter what your purpose is, no matter why you came so late, after 13,000 years of waiting, you are finally here. So the author said that Yunying recognized his identity as soon as they met, and she never had any doubts after she recognized him. This is an objective description. I say this is a perceptual identification, and I explain it from the reader's perspective, because this identification is her subjective identification. Apart from the coincidence of time, Taoist clothing and her instinct, there is actually no support for her. 3. After the disciples in the valley noticed the abnormality and came to respond, Yunying's reaction was written from a third-person perspective, "Zhao Li nodded and stepped forward. The old woman was a step slower than him and followed him. Her steps were not hurried or slow, just about the same speed as Zhao Li, but Following him, her eyes were quietly looking at the hem of the clothes, and she was in a daze at the blue and white Taoist robe that was exposed as she walked around. "If it was respectful before, it can be said to be submissive here. He followed step by step, staring at the blue Taoist robe in trance, and his emotions were simply beyond the sky. 4. When the disciple wanted to show off and comment on the founder, "the old woman didn't answer and looked at Zhao Li with a pair of brown eyes." The emotions here are very complicated, but there should be a sense of expectation. While most people would even find the wrong target, Zhao Li accurately found the target and sighed slightly due to his complicated mood. He subconsciously said what the old man said when he taught Yunying the swordsmanship, "The old man next to him was stunned for a long time, with his light brown eyes lowered." This place was a qualitative change. If the previous identification was Yunying's wishful thinking, even if she had never doubted her own thoughts, it was ultimately Yunying's unilateral decision. This sigh and the same words were equivalent to the master giving him a response, in response to her identification, in response to her thirteen thousand years of waiting. At this point, both parties were in harmony. (On the surface, Zhao Li did not know the identity of the person in front of him, but he was feeling complicated and trying to show off). 5. Then, that disciple acted as a plot propeller. He wanted to show off all the way, but unfortunately Zhao Li broke through all the way and didn't give him a chance to show off, so he started to want to tell a story again. So we know that 13,000 years have passed, and the world has changed dramatically. Even the meeting with the immortal to teach and teach has become a legend among the ordinary disciples in the valley. The waiting time does not even have an accurate large number, or it is subconsciously denied (some people say that they waited for hundreds of years, some said that they waited for thousands of years, and some said that they waited for ten thousand years). And that reply that she admired but didn't understand made her subconsciously, that sentence was worth it. It was a reply to the disciple, to herself, and even more to the master. In that chapter, a book friend expressed this feeling very well, "Even if it is a calculation, but the teachings and the grace of saving my life, everything I have is given by you, and I am willing to give it back to you." Because Zhao Li was too clear about the truth, he broke this unilateral willingness with a cold comment that it was not worth it. If commenting on the sword was a response to waiting, explaining that it was not worth it was to clear up his doubts. Knock on the blackboard to pay attention, treating his disciples as legends, things that are unclear about time, and ask Zhao Li to accurately say "three months" when he opens his mouth. Then he tells the details of the year and the immortal's feelings from the perspective of an immortal, and then tells her that the immortal has also received her own reward in those three months. She should do what she likes. Three months is not worth her lifetime, which completely negates Yunying's thirteen thousand years of waiting. (Zhao Li used it subconsciously because he had seen the old monster's memory. He didn't realize that he shouldn't know these things. The same goes for commenting on sword skills). From Yunying's perspective, it is like this. I went out for a walk and met the master with something in mind. I struck up a conversation with him. He greeted me with courtesy and followed step by step. I was looking forward to the master's response. Then the master responded to the wait with the same evaluation as when he first taught me the teaching, and denied the wait by saying it was not worth it. From Zhao Li's point of view, 1 I was late for the meeting and was depressed and helpless when I met an old man. Well, let's say hello. 2 Damn, such an embarrassing thing is actually brought to the heart by a question. No, I can't lose my temper, so hurry up and pretend to be awesome. 3. If someone comes to pick you up, take the first step. If you are locked up, you will lose all your strength. 4. You actually want to trick me into making a fool of yourself. I know the details of your ancestor's beginnings better than you. I actually met such a person. It's a pity that I feel envious. I sigh, alas, and continue to show off. 5. That guy has such a vicious mind and is not worthy of your attachment. No, why did you say it out? They can't pretend to be coercive because they think they can't tell the truth even if they slander the teacher. Therefore, Zhao Li explained that it was not worth it, and said that growing up was lonely and wandering with no one to rely on. Asked her, "Fellow Taoist, do you think so?" Then the perspective switched back to Yunying, Taoist? Master, you said it's not worth it. Did you not even acknowledge my status? Did you ask me about my wishes? Then he asked, "Do you think so, Master?"

I was sorting out my notebook and found a character relationship diagram I made when I was in my senior year of high school... It started with just a few lines and then ended up filling a whole page. When Lao Yan finishes writing "Suppressing Demons", I must sort out the unfinished pitfalls behind the scenes... My favorite novel is "Behind the Scenes" (word ugly, face covering)

Tens of thousands of people die every second. How will Po Meng feed her soup? Move at super high speed and fill a bowl in one microsecond? Recruiting a thousand Po Meng, coming right away? Thousands of clones? Or a fully automatic soup filling machine?

Tonight, a grand prize for poems written in the group "Qilu·Taiyi of the Eastern Emperor" The nine-layered palace is locked in smoke, and the south wind blows in the purple light at five nights The flowers have fallen with the sky, and the fragrant cold has begun to fly away from the imperial furnace The yellow gate plays a whisper to the prince, and the white snow sings a poem with a gift But there is no compensation for laughing at this body, and I can't bear to shake my head to the dragon's door "Qilu·Yuanhuang" Where is the harp without strings, the lonely crane is flying in the autumn? The moon is born outside the cold mountains of Nanpu, the wind falls by the far water of the rivers and lakes Who has white hair is as pitiful as jade, and the clear bottles are compared to the guests.

I said, Lao Yan, you can do less or even less updates in the past two days. Hurry up and reverse the time. Your schedule is too scary. People collapsed halfway through the book. Back then, Brother Yi collapsed in the middle of writing "Heroic Prison" and recuperated for two years. I remember that although I continued to write, it didn't feel like it did back then. You must never let something like this happen. I don't want to experience what happened to Brother Yi again.

​Actually, I feel that the author advanced the plot too quickly. First is the theme of this book. The original theme is that the protagonist cultivates various geniuses behind the scenes, and through the progress of the geniuses, he feeds himself back and gradually becomes stronger. After that, the geniuses emerged in their respective spheres of influence, stirring up troubles and composing their own life epics. Among them, they got to know each other through the protagonist Zhao Li and joined forces, causing a storm in the great era that followed. This is a microscopic description, and it is also the starting point of the story. However, starting from Yin Gun Jue Yun, the progress of the story has obviously accelerated significantly. After preaching in the cave, Zhao Li's strength began to increase by leaps and bounds. He no longer needed the support of the geniuses at all. All he needed was a little extrapolated spiritual material. The frequent appearance of gods and demons reduces the strength of the bosses in the early and mid-term, and the emergence of innate gods causes ordinary gods and demons to be reduced to mere soldiers. There is an obvious cliff in the strength of the novel. At this time, the characters developed in the early stage such as Ji Xin, You, Tanlang, etc. Obviously cannot keep up with the evolution of the plot, and have been completely marginalized and become background boards. Even including the various forces at the beginning, such as the Dynasty, Jiuli, Yaoting... Not even gods and demons can resist, let alone the innate gods? So they all become background boards and foils. The descriptive perspective of the novel has also changed from microscopic to macroscopic, and the writing and ink focus on the protagonist Zhao Li. The plot has been describing Zhao Li's layout, the game with the mastermind behind the scenes, and the intersection with various forces (actually the forces represented by the Innate God). It was obvious by this point that the story had long strayed from its original intention. This is the result of the collapse of strength, and also the result of the plot advancing too quickly. The combat power system is broken, the growth of small characters cannot keep up with the progress of the plot, and they cannot reach the level of strength required to participate in the plot. The story has developed to this point, and the lord of Fengdu supported by gods and demons can subvert the nine continents and make the world tremble. And this, in Donghuang's eyes, was just a trivial matter, not worth mentioning. So, with the innate gods appearing one after another, how can small figures such as Ji Xin Tanlang, Jixia Academy, and the Tianxia Human Race reasonably cheat and stir up the storm? All living beings in the world are like grass and mustard. Because they have no time to develop and have no ability to participate in the situation, because the plot advances too fast and their strength collapses too seriously. When writing this post, the only solution I thought of was for the protagonist to plan and use the layout of other positive innate gods to disrupt the chessboard and restrict the villain's innate gods, making both parties and even the protagonist temporarily unable to enter. The protagonist, Shenyin, returns to the background to make arrangements and cultivate the power of his subordinates. When the age of great conflict comes, your own forces have gained sufficient strength, and only then can you influence the battle situation and participate in the plot. Otherwise, it would just be the protagonist's solo show, a game between the innate gods. I hope the author can control the direction of the plot and not collapse. I hope my opinion is just a blind man trying to grasp the elephant, and my worries are just unfounded worries😶