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I just happened to read Chapter 7 and saw the fragment about the factory. I felt that the author seemed to have a cloud player flavor. 4396 Is a well-known joke (the damage is not low, the factory just doesn't dare to fight), who can define a professional player just because of one game, and who has no time to decline. Watching a professional player just because of a game is undoubtedly an act of spying. Looking at Changzi's career, the highlight moments undoubtedly far exceed the crotch-pulling moments. Alas, I just hope the author doesn't get to know the players too one-sidedly. Let's talk about Factory. During his peak period, the three top junglers in the LPL were Severn, Factory Director, and Ming Kai. (Haha) So I hope the author can revise the previous chapters. I don't comment on it on a daily basis, but regarding the content of the game, I hope the author won't follow others' opinions. Grateful.
I admit that Uzi is very strong, but surpassing SSS is too much. God-level players should only be considered when they reach the limit of human operation. What about the smile at its peak?
Some suggestions: 1. The system is the system. Don't have any dialogue all the time. It will look very pale. The system is just an auxiliary function. 2. Don't be too invincible. Training a new hero cannot take just a few seconds. It must be done step by step and don't be too buggy. 3. Stop making fun of yourself and licking your dog.
The introduction of the system is very average and over the top. I don't want to watch it when I see Ryze using all mana to support. Ryze in the high-end game can't control mana? A golden Ryze will control...
Collection of team names, character names, and ID names. Whether it is LPL, LCK, or North America and Europe. If you have a good team name and player ID, you can write it in. Really needed!
Battle description needs to be changed
It is recommended to study the combat description carefully. You are a qwerdf with a set of instant kills and a running account. Others are: An arcane shot passed through the minion and hit Verus accurately. Seeing this, ez used arcane leap e to Verus's face, and hit him with an inevitable Essence Leap, following up with the basic attack to deal Essence Leap magic damage Ez's set of combos instantly knocked out two-fifths of Verus's health. When Verus turned around, a corrupt chain imprisoned ez, and at the same time Verus flashed to distance himself. Turning back, the evil spirit rain of arrows detonated the three-layer mark attached to the ultimate move, and Verus' fatal rhythm was triggered, transforming into a walking monster and using both hands to deal crazy output to ez. The arcane shooting released by ez was mixed with basic attacks, and both sides were angry. In the middle, there are commentary narrations, barrage comments, and inner activities of the players, plus some blood counterattacks, predictions, and I will predict your predictions. If you write like this, you can write a chapter or two even if you fight in a group. The water needs to be watered down. In this way, no one will scold you and you will praise it.
I wonder if the author watches LoL games, or does he really just read a few novels and write them?
The three views are not in harmony, and I am trying to find excuses to spite myself, so I say goodbye.
Come out and learn to slide @ Irelia🎃
Author, you can summon the players. Just change the Korean players to Chinese. What you wrote seems to be adding the player's operations and awareness to the protagonist and teammates.