My Suit Is Super Awesome

! ! : I've been raising it for a while! Suddenly discovered this phenomenon! The author shouldn't make major changes! The rhythm is really good now! The key to developing the plot is the number of words, not the words. If you have to be fluent, I will show you the outline directly. Unlike those cool articles, there is no need to describe or describe, just practice, upgrade, and pretend to be 13. What does it mean? ! What about feelings, what about romance (referring to the exoskeleton)? ! 5.29: Slightly ……………………………………………………………… 6.7: Slightly ……………………………………………………………… 6:11: Many people say it is bad, but I personally feel that the rhythm is just right now. I have seen too many early stages where it was very good and the latter stage was very good and the rhythm couldn't be controlled and it immediately exploded. Generally, by the end of the first year, it exploded directly. And from the comments saying that the author's daily routine was very poor before, it can be seen that the author has made great progress. Such daily life makes the character of the character more distinct, and the female team members need to be strengthened! (Why can't I remember her name...) ……………………………………………………………… 6.24: So cool! But I feel like the exoskeleton is cool! ! ! But there are no features yet, I look forward to the future developmentqwq I feel that a lot is missing without a detailed description of the protagonist's exoskeleton, especially after the protagonist takes the stage. This kind of thing is of course the most handsome when fighting. Combined with the environment (weather, opponent's ability, own ability), it will be more handsome if you give it a close-up, and it will definitely be as "ordinary" as it is now in the future, so the portrayal of it Description is a very important point_(:з∠)_ ……………………………………………………………… 7.8: U1s1, boasting about the subject matter and the author's thoughts 👍, I am still picking on faults, some of which have been mentioned before, let's talk about the main ones ! Lack of explosive points: All the descriptions and characterizations are very flavorful, but there are no explosive points. They are all good but not outstanding. (Let's talk about what was said in the comment area. This is not water. The author has almost no useless running accounts. The characterizations and descriptions are all for a reason, but there is no climax.) ! No goal: The previous goal can be said to be the championship, but there was no vision for this goal, and no specific description of its difficulty. There was no description after winning the championship (no echo before and after), which made the championship seem insignificant. It also resulted in no explosive points and was unable to arouse the reader's emotions. After winning the championship, he became a headless fly. Personal opinions, for reference only.

Let's start writing American comics again. The first half of Superman was really attractive to me at first, but it's a pity that the heroine changed halfway through and became Batgirl.

Finally a new book! ! ! Long time no see! Welcome back! ! !

Dear author, please read another American comic. Since I read your American comics, I can't stand more than 90% of them. I can barely read the rest. Except for two or three American comics such as Deathstroke, which I can read, I have no interest in the others.

Boss, don't you write about American comics anymore? Cheers for the new book

It's been a while since the author. I really can't write anymore, so I can cut this article in half, but as long as I'm not used to being a eunuch, I can still forgive it. The next book can be about an American comic that you are familiar with. Maybe the protagonist does not need to borrow strength this time, nor does he have to suffer from the hatred and force Gramman from the beginning. Write a new star character with original abilities and see the world from a new perspective. Maybe... Become a fighting type?

The author must not be a eunuch, this book is the only book that I have pinned to the top of my list! ! I've already watched all of your Superman post-apocalyptic future. I definitely don't want eunuchs 😭😭

Let's rewrite the superpower and DC series. The mecha series is indeed good, but with the system, it will change. No, no! I still miss Kent Farm.

Let me know when you will come back, and when you come back I will steal other people's monthly tickets to support you 🙂

Boss, don't you write about DC? There are very few DC fans in the entire starting point who can read what you write, which is the best. The Zha Dao version and the main couplet are out, why don't you write DC 😭

Author, please come back and write a book soon. I can't stand those beautiful comics now. I miss your Superman, Paso, and Amazo.

It's hard to find someone who writes about this kind of mecha. Don't be a eunuch.

The first thing I read was the author's Gotham Detective. I think this is the best DC fanfic I have ever read so far. The rest of it is basically OK. I hope the author can continue to work hard and continue to write beautiful comics.

Does anyone know what happened to the author?

I think it's a bit boring for you to give the protagonist this skill. At present, the protagonist is upgrading a new suit, but I feel that it is boring and too cliche. It is better to let the protagonist use different suits according to the situation, defense, heavy, offensive, rush, support, medical. The more types, the better. Otherwise, one suit for each level will not be interesting.

The War Armor team adds another point, will Stranger return to the knight dream🥴🥴

Oh, say something, it's been so long, why have you been there? It's National Day 😭

There are no new books. . . Gotham Detective is really one of the highest quality DC fics. . . .

After waiting for more than a year, have you given up? Even if you don't write it anymore, let's explain it to readers!

When will the author come back and publish a new book?

Does anyone know what's going on with the author? Why is there no update and no new books?

😢😢😢😢😢 After a year of raising him, he came back to the palace

Stranger lost? Got up to pee!

Did you see a black cat, lost on the road of life?🙂

It is said that those who write American comics can gather here.

It's been a long time, I hope the author can get back on his feet.

Does the author have any new books?