1997: Reboot

Why did they portray the protagonist's father as such an idiot? He knows absolutely nothing and yet beats his own son; a typical buffoon.

Books that disrespect their readers are destined to flop. When writing web novels, you need to define your target audience. Even after being reborn, you're still stuck in your ways. Your parents and girlfriend are portrayed as incredibly toxic; they'd be perfect for a low-quality domestic TV drama. You force conflict where none exists.

They created difficulties right from the start, and there were multiple difficulties in a row, what's the meaning of that? What were you thinking? A platinum-level author? With your own readership?

Who told you that a book written with care will be read? If that's really what you're thinking, why don't you write a physical book? Good game novels share an ultimate logic: hard work will be rewarded. How can a novel be made to feel real? That is to reverse this logic. This book is readable, but it's very difficult to read. The biggest problem is the protagonist

What kind of utter garbage is this?

Nobody wants to read this kind of angst and forced plot in online novels! With this kind of writing style, you probably won't even make it to the top of the shelves.

This novel feels like a TV drama; there are too many forced dramatic conflicts. I don't like this style.

What the hell? I've only read a few chapters and I've already been beaten up several times and hospitalized twice. Won't I be beaten to death by the time I reach a hundred chapters? And other people who are reborn are only a few years old or in their teens... You're almost 30!

What a load of crap, go home and sleep.

Seeing the author repeatedly mention in the book that it's not doing well, it's worth reflecting on. Many plot points are like melodramatic soap operas, and some are downright nauseating. For example, a father from a family capable of raising a Tsinghua University student wouldn't be the kind of person who smashes ashtrays at the drop of a hat.