1997: Reboot

Why did you write the protagonist's father as a 250-year-old? He beats his own son because he doesn't understand shit, he's a typical clown.

Books that don't respect readers are bound to be written down. When writing online novels, you have to position yourself as a reader. After being reborn, you still stick to your own selves. My parents and girlfriends are all written in a vicious way. It is suitable for domestic hot chicken TV series. There is no conflict and there is no conflict.

What does it mean to forcefully create difficulties at the beginning and have multiple difficulties in a row? What do you think? Platinum author? Bring your own readers?

Who told you that books written with care will be read? If you really think so, why don't you write a physical book? Good game novels have the ultimate logic running through them, that is, hard work will be rewarded. And how to make the novel real? That is to reverse this logic. This book can be read, but it is difficult to read. The biggest problem is the protagonist The protagonist is reborn, but as soon as he goes back to the past, he disappears into oblivion and everyone cannot tell that he is a reborn person. This brings about a lack of sense of substitution. How can we bring in people who seem to be indigenous people? In other words, it doesn't matter if your book is not reborn. Then there is no fun. You have to give the reader a carrot. You can't just do whatever you think. Just letting the reader make up their mind is not enough. Finally, I personally hate the protagonist's approach to life. It is an adult's approach to life. He is sullen, depressed and cunning. I would not have expected such a person to be the protagonist.

What kind of shit did you write?

No one who reads online novels wants to read this kind of cruel, forced plot! ! , With the way you write it, you probably won't be able to insist on putting it on the shelves.

This novel feels like a TV series, with too many forced dramatic conflicts. I don't like this style.

What the hell is Ma De? He was beaten several times after reading just a few chapters. He was hospitalized twice. How could he not be beaten to death for hundreds of chapters? And how old are others when they are reborn? Teenagers. You are almost 30.

Write a hammer, go home and sleep

I saw that the author said many times in the book that the book was not good enough. In fact, I can reflect on it. Many of the plots in this book are like bloody dramas, and some of the plots are disgusting. For example, in a family that can cultivate students from Tsinghua University, the father cannot be the kind of person who smashes ashtrays at every turn. If this is the case since childhood, the child will not be able to grow up healthily. If you want to write about reality and write something of your own, then don't ask for big sales first. If you want to ask for big sales, you might as well risk a swollen face and learn how to arrange the plot to make people feel comfortable, and how to make it comfortable. I will always support and read it. I don't want the author to be cool. Come on.