I Am the First Fort of the Immortal Sect

Hanbao is a bit too fake. Drought Demon, it should be a thousand miles away, a catastrophic drought, the level should be higher, and there are multiple Drought Demons appearing at one time, it is too fake. I hope the author will find more good materials when writing in the future.

The layout and blank space make the talisman and seal script look like a scroll.

The talisman seal is about to appear on the talisman paper.

Gather your own magic power to communicate with the spirits of heaven and earth.

Although it is an ancient text, it is like a living creature, like an elf.

Good guy, the author directly replaced the six countries in the Seven Kingdoms with the Three Kingdoms! I guess, when the Six Kingdoms were fighting for hegemony, Wei and Shu concentrated their forces to fight against the enemy, while the other four kingdoms A, B, C, and D dispersed their forces and were defeated one by one. Later, among the four kingdoms, A and B gathered their remaining soldiers and merged to form the Wu Kingdom. C and D were divided by Wei and Shu. I'm a genius!

When writing, you must concentrate your energy and energy on the tip of the pen

The nib is smooth and uninterrupted

How can such power be obtained so easily?

The yin and yang of the five elements can do anything

The protagonist's parents fought tooth and nail to buy food for the family and rescued 2/3, but the family refused to reward them and cut off resources when they were sprinting to become a master. Will anyone in such a family do something next time? With Elder Jin Dan in the sect, a Qi refiner can bully this family, but Jin Dan has no sense of existence at all.

In the first chapter, the foundation-building ancestor founded the family In the second chapter, it became the golden elixir ancestor who founded the family What a ruthless author Is this one of Xianxia's strong recommendations this week Dreaming about writing a book is really powerful 👍

The writing style is very suitable to my taste But the updates are a bit lacking Can you add more details?

The author's setting is too contradictory. As mentioned earlier, the protagonist's family was heavily punished for losing food. However, the protagonist's hostile family colluded with the devil and was punished with a small penalty. Since food is important, why didn't the sect carefully investigate the mastermind behind it? It was obvious that the investigation results were problematic and did not deal with it. This is in line with the previous sentence that severely punished the protagonist's family. It doesn't match, and why didn't the elders of the protagonist's family come forward to find out who was behind it? Didn't the protagonist's family still have foundation-building and golden elixir seniors? How could a young Qi-training monk assassinate the family? The food-important sect could have sent a Foundation-building monk from the protagonist's family to investigate instead of a Qi-training monk. All in all, there are too many plot holes.

Author, you don't write cool articles. I thought you had your own pursuits. But what did you write? This article is as bland as water. The latest chapter is so poisonous that it makes people speechless. Can the sect allow a talisman genius to track 5 golden elixirs? 🤔Then the protagonist believed it 🤔 You wrote various letters to the emperor about the protagonist before, and the prince came up with the right idea. 🤔Are you writing a book with nz?🤔

The biggest failure is that the zombies devoured ten thousand people and then promoted them to Yuanying. The monsters captured hundreds of thousands of Yuanyings. That's okay. Just a few dozen Yuanyings. Damn it. If it's done well, if it's done well, it could snowball. Then the human race won't be exterminated.

I thought that Fortress had some novel ideas and creativity, but I didn't expect that he actually relied on a copy machine to make copies and win by quantity. Although the writing was indeed good, he was also from time travel. Can't people who have received higher education have something novel?

I've probably finished reading it. I can only say that this book is so disappointing. In order to promote the plot, the author completely lost the rationality of the plot. Generally speaking, the four major dynasties actually came to establish the Qin Dynasty 10 years before the monster invasion? Isn't it okay to fuck him after the beating? The human race doesn't mean to suppress the demon race and kill its own people before fighting. What if the Qin Dynasty directly betrays the enemy? Are the four major dynasties the four major fools? If the Qin Dynasty's vitality was severely damaged after the war, wouldn't it be okay to attack him again? The author also emphasized that the relationship between the dynasty and the sect is also very unreasonable. The strongest combat power of a warrior is only the golden elixir. How can he order the sect of Nascent Soul and even decide the size of their scope?

The combat setting of this book is fascinating! You can't watch the battle scenes at all! I often eat settings! Especially fighting the wizard who is equivalent to the golden elixir stage. As a wizard, there are no poisonous insects. There are poisons to deal with the golden elixir stage, but they can only poison the water or sprinkle poisonous powder. He has spiritual consciousness, but it can only be used to watch people perform, and he can't even lower his head with a spiritual consciousness attack. The most important thing is that he can't even fly ヽ(￣д￣;)ノ. This is the most rubbish wizard I have ever seen who is equivalent to the golden elixir stage. After all, he has lived for so many years without any combat experience. I don't know how he survived in the Song Dynasty where there were so many demons.

Poisonous? It is said that the family does not like people with Gao Linggen. They think that it is best to return to the family and serve the family before they have even reached the foundation building stage. Without high-level monks to protect the family, there is no telling when it will be destroyed. Even if the high-level monks do not stay in the family, they can at least form a deterrent effect. The author made me laugh so damn hard.

The writing has some merits, but it still has shortcomings. Goldfinger is quite new. But what annoys me is that none of the named villains who want to kill the protagonist seem to have died. The No. 1 Miscreant villain is the second-generation dean of the protagonist's dormitory, the successor of senior brother Mejiro. At the critical point when the opponent is about to break through, the protagonist delays the opponent's training time a little and is done. Still at the expense of his own time, the protagonist later enters the inner door. As a result, the opponent also breaks through and enters the inner door unharmed. By the way, he also recognized the miscellaneous fish villain No. 3 As his eldest brother. Pick it up hard and put it down gently. The second miscellaneous villain is the fourth prince. During the war, he wanted to forcefully recruit the protagonist's parents to serve on the battlefield and kill them both. What is the protagonist's revenge? He helped the eldest prince seize the throne. Maybe rationally this is reasonable revenge, but emotionally I really feel uncomfortable with it. You didn't even show how painful it was for No. 2 Bastard to lose the throne, and how much he regretted offending the protagonist. This is definitely a problem with the writing style. The miscellaneous fish villain No. 3 Is the core disciple of the protagonist who enters the inner courtyard. He is a bit like a gentleman, but he does not have that kind of magnanimity, so he simply stops pretending to be a gentleman later and becomes a full-time villain. It doesn't matter if you offend the protagonist, not even to teach him a lesson. Pick it up again and put it down gently. The fourth miscellaneous villain is from the chamber of commerce where the protagonist often buys things. Chen Shibo has been planning to assassinate the protagonist three times. He is currently fighting with the protagonist and is still alive and well. The other senior sister, Mo Li, basically regards the protagonist as her younger brother, isn't she worried about it? Throughout the entire text, the only person who truly recognizes the protagonist's talent and hard work is his teacher Mr. Zhou. Is that sect blind? As mentioned before, ordinary disciples should pay attention to the first-level talisman. As a result, before the ascension, the highest level on land was the fourth-level talisman. Now that the protagonist has obtained the third-level talisman, the sect still favors that junior sister infinitely. Not to mention that the protagonist is making talismans in batches, especially using a photocopier to print them. The higher-ups of the sect know it. If it weren't for his teacher Zhou's constant care, if I were the protagonist, I wouldn't even be in the teacher's school. Isn't this too unreasonable?

The writing style of this book is really unflattering, and the plot setting also has big problems. The most important thing is that the author completely failed to understand the way children speak. It reads awkwardly and really stains the eyes of others. I was looking forward to reading the text, but after reading more than a dozen chapters, I felt that I had been greatly deceived. To be honest, if the text of your novel is at the same level as the copywriting, it will be considered unsatisfactory. In this situation, you'd better read more other people's good works, improve your ability to choose words and sentences, and finish the novel with your heart. Don't live up to the readers' expectations of you and fool them with shoddy stuff.

After reading so many novels about cultivating immortals, this was the first time I encountered a Jindan who was practicing Qi and beating Jindan without getting hurt.

Brainless retarded novel, whoever reads it will know

The title of the first chapter is really annoying to watch, just like "Shu Lai Bao", it is not clear or clear Secondly, there are too many loopholes in Golden Finger. What should I do if I draw symbols on site? You have no talent, and your drawing speed is the same as everyone else's. Even if it's faster, others can draw one in half a day, but you can draw one in an hour. Excuse me, how do you achieve such a speed that the monthly volume is hundreds of times theirs? Especially in the future second and third levels, what kind of cheat is such a big loophole? Why is it not attached to the copy and the copying process is automatic hand drawing?

If I had agreed to borrow this book, I would not have read it.

The chapter names are annoying to look at

In the first chapter, it was said that the ancestors of the Bao family were building foundations, but in the second chapter, they became golden elixirs?

So who created Baojia? ,,, To

It is always said that the power is pure, the mana is deep, and the enemy has not been surpassed. It is no different from ordinary immortal cultivators. You must either surpass three or four small realms in order to withdraw money. The protagonist is better than ordinary immortal cultivators.