
I Have a Passive Skill
我有一身被动技
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I saw the update and wrote a long review.
After reading this book for a few days, I laughed for a few days. It is so funny. It is indeed a good book. But after seeing the update, I can hardly stand it anymore. It was okay before, but after the release of Night Watch, the style of painting has become a bit wrong. I won't comment on whether the method used to kill Zhang is stupid or not. After all, this may be due to different opinions, but I don't understand. When most people don't know your background, you and a bunch of big guys can pretend to be tough and not get beaten, but you can still persuade most people with your strong words. Shouye is a man in red, and his attitude towards ghosts and beasts is not to mention that he would rather kill them by mistake than let them go. At least he should arrest them and bring them back for interrogation. It is impossible to throw away this general principle just because he is optimistic about the protagonist, right? After the protagonist's unreasonable talk... OK, I took it as if the protagonist was talking about the truth. After the protagonist's talk, I was still deeply suspicious, or did I let him go? What I don't understand the most is that when Shouye told everyone in the White Cave that the famous sword belonged to Xu Xiaoshou, he had no intention of being reasonable. As soon as I came out of the vigil, I felt that the author was portraying the image of a selfless man in red. After meeting Xu Xiaoshou, the style of painting changed suddenly Later, when I watched Xu Xiaoshou chatting with him, I found that he did not pay attention to ghost beasts at all, and let go of them after just a few words. However, in a world where strength is respected, there are a lot of big guys and a junior talking to each other, so I felt that the style of painting was wrong. Later, in Baigu, I thought the vigil's completely unreasonable attitude was okay. But there are inconsistencies, the night watchman design is broken, and the sense of dissonance is too great It is emphasized that the ghost beast and the man in red are incompatible with each other, but the ghost beast incident is handled so hastily. You have always been suspicious, but you can't say it, so why not arrest him? He was unreasonable in the White Cave, so I just reasoned with the protagonist (not to mention that the reason seemed to me to be unreasonable). I can only laugh at this person's behavior before and after... And there is a detail, Fu Zhi imprisoned Xu Xiaoshou and his junior sister in the Tianji Disk, and when he appeared later, Fu Zhi didn't react at all, and the Tianji Array Disk Stolen, such a big thing, there is no follow-up to directly open the White Cave dungeon Also, the protagonist Xu Xiaoshou is starting to hate him a little now. He was sabotaging Tiansang Ling Palace because he didn't know about it. He didn't know that trouble would happen before he did the sabotage. I can understand it. I thought it was quite interesting at the time. When you come to the Alchemist Guild, you can understand. After all, you can't afford to offend Mr. Fu in the past, but you can't do anything about it later when you are refining alchemy. But what he did when he went to the house of Fu and his son, who already considered him his elder brother, was a bit excessive. What's funny is that my host has such a good temper? Why do I always say that he is arrogant? Because even if Shiti and Shouye didn't say they could defend but failed to defend, it doesn't mean that the protagonist really has no responsibility at all, right? Not to mention that the entire city lord's mansion was later brought to justice. Doesn't the protagonist really have any responsibility at all? But no one seems to be pursuing it In short, Tiansang Ling Palace has his master, and he can do whatever he wants. Can you make him more stable when he is outside? Don't bring the unscrupulousness in the Ling Palace outside. He has no backer, and he can't rely on him every time. Fang's mysterious power (author's power) makes a big boss change his personality inexplicably to accommodate him and spoil him. The sense of disobedience is too serious. With the big boss and others, if you don't accept it, I will knock you. With Xu Xiaoshou, if you don't agree, tell me and I will listen to see if you have a reason. Don't you think that all the big guys are trying to accommodate Xu Xiaoshou? Is it really fake, just by saying something? Is the world you have created just by being reasonable? People who are chess players can take good care of Xu Xiaoshou, but people like Vigil, Shiti, and Fu Zhi are not chess players. Maybe they are not worthy of being chess pieces, right? The most serious thing is the latest chapter, even the world view has changed. The cage theory and chess piece theory that Mr. Sang said, warned him to be a good chess piece when he has no strength. But what is he doing in the latest chapter? A being who can't even lift a sword while standing vigil at night, and you still want Xu Xiao to be scolded? Are the chess pieces talking to the players? Are you really invincible? Is it really reasonable? ? ? ? ? The author, please think clearly, the world you create is not a world of chatter. Chatter can be used for lightheartedness and comedy, but it is not suitable for guiding the plot. Ahem, to put it bluntly, what caused my discomfort was exactly when the protagonist went down the mountain and started to play with IQ. Not everyone can write brain-burning articles You can let the protagonist analyze the information revealed when the boss speaks, instead of directly letting the protagonist pretend to be a chess player. The boss of the hand... Forget it, let's just let the story be arrogant to the end, don't burn your brain, it becomes more and more embarrassing from the moment the protagonist starts to use his brain This is one of the longest book reviews I have ever written. I really like this novel. The previous part is really well written, lighthearted and humorous, a rare masterpiece. I'm not trying to argue or ask the author to change the plot. I just hope that the author will not make the first half of the masterpiece unfinished and the second half unfinished. The characters should be stable and not become incomprehensible, and everything should not be too much or too little... Come on
The author, with all his Jiangnan talent, deliberately wrote those "funny" scenes that are not funny and are embarrassing. It is better to focus on advancing the plot seriously. The frequently appearing funny scenes have no points of laughter and only make you bored. The serious plot is getting worse and worse. Energy and inspiration are spent in the wrong place. Which masterpiece does not test the plot, writing style, and canonization of gods? Which novel is famous for being funny? The point is it's not funny at all. It makes the protagonist look like a retard, ruining the character and plot
This book is very good. The protagonist is smart, the villain is intelligent, funny, passionate, and has no major flaws. It is a book that can be continued to be read. I felt very comfortable reading it all in one go, and I still have more to say. This book by the author is actually better-looking than most novels. The plot connection is very good. It is much better than ordinary system books. Usually the system books I see are about upgrading skills. All skills can be upgraded. You don't need to work hard at all. If you can't win a fight, you can draw a lottery and draw a peerless master or some weapon, and all problems will be solved. But this book by the author is different. Although it is also a skill point upgrade, Xu Shaoshou can continuously explore and improve these skills. For example, he is proficient in swordsmanship and cooking skills, although the system has given him the most basic abilities. But Xu Xiaoshou kept working hard. From the way he comprehends sword intent, sword thoughts, new moves, and repeatedly tries new moves in alchemy, you can see that what the system gives you is not omnipotent, and you still need to understand, accept, and explore it the day after tomorrow. This angle is great. It can be seen from the sword duel with the three Gu brothers, the understanding in the battle with Gu Qingsan, and the sigh of inferiority after seeing Gu Qinger's swordsmanship. As for the plot, it is also very compact, and there are a lot of foreshadowings, such as Sang Lao. It is also very interesting to see what forces like Saint Slave and Xu Yue Gray Palace are going to do. Xu Xiaoshou is actually very smart, at least this Xu Xiaoshou is very smart. He is also very capable and very perseverant. Innately able to compete with the throne. I also experienced despair. When I was assassinated by the red dog, I tried all my tricks, but I was still defeated. The description of the details is also very good, and Xu Xiaoshou is also very funny. Next I would like to make some suggestions and opinions. 1. Although it is common for the protagonist to cross the line and kill people, at least the readers must be convinced and appropriate reasons must be given. For example, I now believe that Xu Xiaoshou can compete with the throne with his innate ability. I hope the author can continue to maintain it 2. In terms of skill upgrading, I think Xu Xiaoshou can rely not only on the system, but also on himself. Xu Xiaoshou is very smart and perseverant! Xu Xiaoshou can upgrade skills such as strength, sword proficiency, and cooking proficiency without relying on the system, but the speed is not that fast. This is also the book, there is something a little unreasonable about it. Although it is said that once a skill reaches master level, it can no longer be upgraded with skill points. You can rely on Xu Xiaoshou to level up! At least in my opinion, his physical strength is no longer Grandmaster V1, and his swordsmanship proficiency is no longer Grandmaster V1. I hope the author can make some adjustments. I think this is a systematic text that does not look like a systematic text. It is indeed worth reading, and it is indeed better than most novels. As for the fact that this book is not popular, I believe it is temporary. As long as the author can maintain this level and persevere, I believe that one day this book will be known to everyone. Another thing I hope the author can do is make two updates, as one update is really not enough. For some readers, in fact, quantity is large and management is more important than quality. For example, the number one in the monthly ticket list last time was the case. Of course I'm not saying to abandon quality for quantity. What I want to say is that if the quantity can be increased while ensuring quality, there should be more people watching it! The author and the reader achieve mutual success. If you write a book that I want to read, I should give the author credit. The reward of 10,000 starting coins is not respectful. I will give it when the monthly ticket is doubled. Will come often in the future. I hope the author can keep persevering, for those of us who like the author's articles. I also hope that readers will not be stingy and support the author. {"NickName":"Jiang Taigong's Fishing Rod","UserId":213318530}
The protagonist of this book talks too much rubbish, like a scoundrel, and gave up after reading more than a hundred chapters 😒
Needless to say, I have read so many novels, but not many of them are really eye-catching. This novel is not a mindless novel. The protagonist's passive skills can be said to be very strong, but they are not mindlessly strong at least in the sealing technique. There are many strong people who can restrain him. The protagonist is not Long Aotian's character, smart and sincere, and this book secretly reveals a feeling of yearning for free life. The writing is also okay. It is a great novel.
Depends on the subject matter. There are plug-ins. . Feeling invincible. It looks like the main character and is very funny. But what the hell is the lottery system. . . And then there it is. The protagonist's xinxing problem must be honestly cultivated in this kind of world. He didn't even adjust his mentality. . I vomited. Sorry I can't stand the free chapters anymore, let alone the paid chapters. Goodbye
As an old bookworm for more than ten years, this book is definitely one of the few bad books on online dramas in recent years. When many books are copying Chen Dong, Er Gen, etc., More new terms have been revealed. The writing style, ideas, delicate and exquisite, this book must be highly recommended.
Final book review
It's finished. This book is of the highest quality among the many fantasy novels I have read. It is not stuck in a template, has no running accounts, and has no thunderstorms. The biggest highlight is probably the character creation. When I was writing the Void Island chapter, I thought of one word to describe the characters in this book: Eight Immortals crossing the sea, each showing his magical powers. At that time, no matter the strength and resourcefulness of the water ghost, the secret of Dao Qiong Dao, the powerful combat power of Tianji Puppet No. 2 And Yan Wuse, the harmless Hongmei Sanliu, the long river of time and space in the underworld, and the strange physique of the Five Declines of Heaven and Man, all are unforgettable. In the later period, the ten seats have more distinctive personalities. The gods and ghosts are unpredictable in the sky, the sky is one foot high and the eight are familiar with it. The only pity is that many of the characters who performed brilliantly in the early stage were really unable to play in the later stage. My favorite character is undoubtedly Ai Cangsheng. As the only one among the ten who was voluntarily recruited by the Holy Temple, he was willing to serve as the protector of the Five Realms, which not only prevented the five Holy Emperor families from overly interfering in the Five Realms, but also prevented the monks from the Five Realms from overestimating their abilities to challenge the authority. In the past few decades, the Holy God Continent has been peaceful, and his top priority is to love the common people. Although he cannot break the cage like the Eight Masters, he still devotes himself to the five realms, explaining the responsibilities that people in the cage can also take, and is worthy of the name of "loving the common people". The second highlight is that the logic of the book's intellectual battles is relatively clear, and there are a lot of foreshadowings and information differences that will make your brain burn. It looks very enjoyable. In my heart, I can compete with the Lord of Mysteries in a battle of wits. The early Sang Lao Water Ghost Bazun, the late Xu Xiaoshou, Dao Qiongcang, and the second potion ancestor are all representative figures of wits. Each of these people also has their own thinking characteristics: Xu Xiaoshou is a bitch, he is heart-attacking, and likes to manipulate other people's psychology; Dao Qiongcang is good at calculations, and can always come up with the best solution with the help of his heavenly brain; Yao Zu likes to be safe, and is fully prepared for everything, and develops steadily; Demon Ancestor is self-confident, always believing in his own strength and judgment, and not willing to suffer any losses in cooperation. However, there is also a pity in this part, that is, in the end, Dao Qiongcang is not strong enough to support his plot. If he can use small measures to win big, and then bring unexpected threats to Baxu, who was already invincible at the time, it may be more in line with the character. Another highlight is that although the book is a fantasy novel, it contains some profound thoughts or emotional outbursts from time to time. I am always moved by Sang Lao's teacher-student relationship between the protagonist and the innocent man; the disagreement with Shoye, the subsequent mutual sympathy, and the protection of the protagonist during the Five Decline Periods of Heaven and Man. I also like this feeling of friend and foe very much; the innocence of Yue Gongli and the ruthlessness of Dao Qiongang, and the peaceful and happy days of Yuebei Hua Rao Dao as a child are gone, which is full of sadness and helplessness. It's not without its flaws. First of all, the portrayal of female characters is a bit weak. Whether it is Xiang Yaoyao, the shame of the ten thrones, Yu Zhiwen, the younger junior sister, and Yuegong Slave, the partner of the eighth child, they were not able to stand up and become the master in the end. It is true that the emotional drama is obviously not the part that the author wants to focus on, but since these characters have been written, they should be given the treatment they deserve, regardless of intensity or emotion. Then the ending is indeed a bit rushed, and there is not much foreshadowing left at all. It's okay, but it's really unfinished, especially since we didn't see the ending of Shen Yikui Leihan, everyone in Xingjie, Mr. Sang and other acquaintances after the battle, and we didn't see Nuo at all (at least once), which is still a bit regretful. But overall, the time spent chasing this book is indeed a happy one. At least the growth of the protagonist always makes me look forward to it. The unfolding of the plot is always unexpected, the battle scenes are also wonderful, and the highlights of each character are also exciting. The flaws do not hide the merits. Compared with those template articles that have no characteristics and no ideas, I think this book is at least in the right direction. Maybe I will forget nine out of ten online novels I have read, but this book will probably be the one that will be remembered.
It is my favorite book so far, although it has various problems, such as sloppy writing, slow pacing, fatigue of reversals, anticlimactic ending, etc. But in my opinion, it is still full of flaws, and there are many things that have not been written. The structure of the whole book with 3 or 4 large copies actually makes the book a lot monotonous, including Seven Sword Immortals Trial Sword, Throne Realm, Ten Seats, and some favorite characters, Ancient Sword Immortal, Gou Wuyue, Yu Tu, Mo Mo, and many, many settings. There is actually a lot that can be written. If the writing is not so procrastinating and there are more copies, I think it can be better than Mystery and Snow. Especially the characterization, I have never seen a character like Lao Ba in online articles, who is as tall as the sky, a poet and a swordsman, with such high-spiritedness and pride that goes straight into people's hearts. When I was in high school, this was the first thing I watched during every vacation, and I watched it throughout high school without finishing it. I hope the author will quickly open a new book. Now he is not as poor as before, and he will no longer spend all his time on QQ reading...
The mid-term is boring
I can't finish it. I read more than a thousand chapters. It's so long-winded and the word count is too low. Do you believe that I only typed the second copy after more than a thousand chapters? Half of the book is spent watching big guys fight. Then there were fights between elementary school students and college students. The protagonist is a primary school student and can't beat him. Although this system is somewhat useful at the beginning, it is completely useless later on. Many chapters have no role in promoting the plot. It is like saying that Europe is in the Age of Discovery and then talking about the Great Migration of animals in Africa.
Brief review, this is a very slow-paced systematic text
Reading a book is a matter of subjective preference. This book is a systematic flow, and the main source of resources is the various emotions of the onlookers. The protagonist has a lot of talk, and the plot is deceptive. Half of the content is filled with the protagonist's various sluts. If you can accept this kind of tone, you can still read it. If you like a protagonist who enjoys grudges and doesn't talk much, then I suggest you don't read it. The protagonist is too boring to tell the truth and talks a lot of nonsense. Just watch the battle of wits. The villains basically like to bicker. The only one who doesn't like bickering doesn't have much plot. I can only say that the author's style is like this. Whether you like it or not, I think there is still room for improvement. I need to compress the amount of nonsense and write the plot and adventure world line well. There are many books of the same type with this kind of character. This is the second most nonsense book I have ever read. Especially in the later period, after the protagonist's credit goes bankrupt, there is still so much nonsense that I fell asleep several times while reading it.
After reading Chapter 858, I originally wanted to write a long story with a title, but I didn't know what title to write, so I could only talk in general terms. I think Xu Xiaoshou and the author are similar on some levels. Maybe they have missed something. When there is another such opportunity, they want to make up for it twice as much. In the process of making up for it, they see other things they want and want to pick them up. This statement is too abstract. Take Xu Xiaoshou for example. He was unable to appreciate the beauty of life because of his illness in his previous life, so in this life he not only wanted to live healthily, he also wanted to cultivate immortality to break the limit of his lifespan. This was the main reason for his rapid cultivation. Other people's requirements for him were just to add to this. And there are actually a lot of things he wants to gain at the same time. He wants to take all the love he has with others and the righteousness he has with other living beings. But his process of cultivating immortality is different from other immortality novels. The cultivation system of other immortality novels is huge and the cultivation time is too long (while the cultivation system of this novel is relatively exquisite, the cultivation time is also long, but it will not be very long for the peerless genius in this world). Xu Xiaoshou has never been in seclusion for more than ten hundred years. Even if he was hit by the reincarnation sword, he did not build a car alone for decades in that reincarnation. He also lived like a normal ordinary person, and his social interactions and relationships were still treated as normal people before time travel. The scary thing is that his unique talent has infected many immortal cultivators who are not deeply involved in the world. Before this chapter, his humanistic care and communication gave many readers and people around him an optimistic feeling. After all, this is still a novel about cultivating immortality. Looking at other novels of the same type, ordinary characters and secondary characters are just numbers and consumables. They were born in XX year, what they did in XX year, and then died after XX year. The sentence "all ants under saints" are all connected by such cold numbers and facts. Although this book has a maximum restriction that restricts the fate of super combat power standards, it cannot escape the fact that after this restriction is lifted, Xu Xiaoshou will have to give up something. It is not clear in this chapter whether the author had the idea before or because of some inspiration. Xu Xiaoshou, who created a humane atmosphere, suddenly felt like someone was about to burp. There was no sign in the previous chapter. It was like an accident in reality, making people have to face certain facts. The treatment of the next few chapters of this chapter will be very critical. Mu Xiaoxi's other powerlessness she said is to dominate this body or is it really powerless. If she is really close to death and she has no solution, Xu Xiaoshou's behavior in the book will lead the book to continue to return to a state of danger but there is a way out, or speed up the process and have to choose what Xu Xiaoshou currently wants... Of course, it can only
Deliberately "funny". Too contrived and not funny at all. The author is normal, there is no benefit except to make up the word count. It will only make me look more and more annoyed.
The author obviously doesn't know how to write group portraits. There are obviously more and more characters, but the story line is becoming more and more monotonous. Each group of heroes either has "network fluctuations" or is directly "offline". There are hundreds of chapters to write about a battle (who asked you to write it in such detail). . . There are also frequent requests for leave and interrupted updates,,, but There are many advantages. Although it is a system flow, it does not simply provide skills and introductions, but forces the protagonist to learn knowledge. In the later period, the IQ is online and getting higher and higher (it also tests the author's ability more and more. Now I am very afraid of unfinished work. After all, I have been following updates every day for several years 🙂)
Why is such a good book ranked so low?
This book has some bad points, but also some good points. Just looking at it for entertainment purposes is great. But the protagonist's acquired innate sword power and innate physical body are too ridiculous to even enter the inner courtyard. This is too poisonous. After all, according to the setting, this is not an era where monsters are everywhere and geniuses are not as good as dogs. The writing is not bad, but the poisonous point is really too great, and old bookworms can't stand it. The above are all personal opinions, please don't comment if you don't like them.
Miscellaneous comments
Haha I came from the browser. This book is really great. It ranks first among the novels I have read. I hope Apple can finally finish it.
Welcome to Xiaoyu has something to say. The chapter review of this chapter is exclusively sponsored by Xiaoyu's girlfriend, Spreading Flowers Author Jun: How do you feel about writing a long comment for the first time? Me: Thank you to the party, thank you to the government, thank you to all the friends who support me and love me! Thank you everyone! Of course, I am most grateful to my girlfriend... Yes, that's right (I'm not a human again! Whisper bb🥱) I tricked you into coming in 😄 Dangdangdang! The following is the text time This is the first time for the author to write, the picture is good 🌹, and the curiosity is also satisfied a little From the inner activities of an idle person : There have been so few good books in the recent period. It may be due to the epidemic. I hope the epidemic will pass soon ~ , the macho man cries Now I rely on the ones I collected before, it's so difficult for a small fish So, can I have such a handful of suggestions ✌️, I don't say anything, it seems to be the acquiescence, my damn charm, well (as a reader, well~ I just read seven My only advantage is that I can read 700 or 800 chapters a day quickly. I'm not a full-time bookworm!). First of all, I must have been attracted by the author's charm to write this book review (I won't tell you that). You, I wrote a book review because my girlfriend ignored me, ), okay, let's get back to the topic 1. Does the author like Master Xing very much? I feel that he has a bit of Xingye's nonsensical style. Of course, I personally, I personally, I think the best point is a bit similar to the style of this book. The villain's arrival he wrote before was pretty good, but he couldn't update it due to family reasons. It made me quite sad. (Speaking of which, if the author can't support himself, maybe... Maybe, probably, can I introduce you to a rich woman 😏...? I seem to know a little bit 🎁 and then I will be locked up in a small room to write a book every day), and oh I'm a little curious about how the author set the huge force value. Personally, I feel that the system has no sense of existence. I don't know if the author deliberately downplayed it. Personally, I personally recommend (only represents my personal opinion) that similar nonsensical styles should not cause too many bugs in the end, because the force value will collapse. The bad kind, occasionally it is okay, it has crossed n realms many times, wow, what a great review (Hey, where is my IQ? Why did you sneak away again, how good are you?), I'm sorry, I just lost my mind, maybe because I think it is not an invincible article, nor a pseudo-invincible article, so it is best not to have too many bugs Skills or operations. 2. For a update-chasing person like me (only speaking for myself), if the sense of connection between the plot of this chapter is not particularly strong, because I have to read a lot of books every day, if the plot line is not very rocky, it will be like a needle sticking in the wrong direction, hiss, um~ it will hurt, the needle will hurt. It's really painful and tragic to be pierced... It will be difficult to attract me after a long time Disappear suddenly (Looking for a girlfriend) See you later (this article only represents my personal opinion) Finished with flowers The author Jun's writing is quite good, hehe
Anyone who writes books seriously deserves rewards. I came from the reverse version and subscribed to the original version, not because the original platform has the copyright, but because I like this book and have subscribed to the full text. I hope that the platform will not bury the author.
Definitely a good work, getting better and better. Although some of the battle scenes are a bit lengthy, the shortcomings do not hide the flaws and it is a top-notch masterpiece!
A novel with real characters (good book, highly recommended!)
I have been reading online novels since 2009, including fantasy, historical, suspense and romance, but not many of them can remain in my mind to form an impression of the characters. Some novels have wonderful settings, humorous language, concise plots, and refined writing, but the characters are very tool-like and cannot form truly wonderful people. In other words, the only exciting thing is the protagonist, and such protagonists can be found in other books. After a while after reading it, except for the setting of the novel, which I still remember, I forgot everything else. This book is different. The supporting characters are Eight Masters, Tao Qian Cang, and Night Watch. It is really well written! There are also the five declines of heaven and man, which are also very mysterious. Other settings, such as Gu Qing's one, two, three, big smile, Yu Zhiwen. It's also well written. Independent ancient sword cultivation system, continent-wide live broadcast of Taoist mirrors, mystical spiritual training system, unique Holy God continental ruling system and rebel Holy slaves, and unique Holy Emperor crybaby scientific research madman - Bei Huai. Suspected to be Shizu's anxious brother - Kong Yuhen. Mysterious creatures, ghost beasts... These are very interesting. Of course, I am not saying that this book is unique in ancient and modern times. It also has some shortcomings-for example, there are too many descriptions of some minor supporting characters whose endings are known from the beginning, such as Guyu and Miss Liu. Even before I wrote this challenge, I knew that these three (plus Bei Bei) were guaranteed to lose. The book thief almost skipped it. There are still a dozen Half-Saints, and I know they are going to lose without even looking. Why write it in such detail? The shortcomings do not hide the good points. Perhaps it is this extremely long length that repeatedly and rigorously constructs "The sky is one foot high and eight people know each other, and the gods and ghosts are unpredictable in the sky." These two people are the best-written characters in the book, much better than the protagonist. Maybe it's because the protagonist feels too immersive after he grows up, maybe it's because the protagonist is too close to me (mentally, as a reader), maybe it's because I've seen the protagonist's character in other books after he grows up, maybe it's because the protagonist is an earthling and doesn't have a profound story as a past like the locals. I always feel that Badao is more attractive. Of course the main character is pretty good too. I estimate that I can write another 500-1000 chapters in this book. Now we have to fight the Holy Mountain, Chapter 500. After beating the Holy Emperor's Secret Realm or becoming a god, there are another 500 chapters. It's almost over. This book had a hold on me for a week. My advice is: look! Watch patiently in the early stage, watch carefully in the middle stage, and jump to some small plots in the later stage that will tell you the ending at a glance. ————Didi didi, the following contains spoilers—————— Very good character! Very good novel! It breaks the pattern of cultivating immortality in the college entrance examination system without jumping into the strange circle of historical novels about the will of all beings. I initially thought that the Holy Slaves represented the lower class rebels, but later I felt that they were like the new bourgeoisie with strength but no status in modern Europe - because they did not regard the lower class as human beings, and the Holy Temple was an old aristocratic force that hindered the development of the Holy Slaves. It was also internally corrupt and engaged in crazy human experiments. After thinking about it, fantasy is the ultimate individualism - it is the integration of thousands of great powers. People in the fantasy world are different from us... Emmm, people in the homo sapiens world, which is normal. After all, matter determines consciousness. From the perspective of the Ten Lords, I can understand the Holy Slave, from the perspective of the Holy Emperor, I can understand the Holy Emperor, and from the perspective of Homo sapiens, I want to fight both. The Holy Emperor's family received an even heavier beating, the kind that destroyed Beihuai's family. Maybe the first floor in the sky is better than the Holy Slave, at least Xiao Shou is more soft-hearted than the Bazun Shu. Harm~ I am looking forward to the tunnel sky, hahahahahaha, the little one is loved by all the people, isn't this another kind of ntr? 😍😆🤭 Love watching! More updates!
Later on, the protagonist became more and more pretentious, and his combat power and logic began to get messed up. It started to feel uncomfortable to watch, so keep watching. But there are endless funny parts, and many of the battles are quite entertaining to watch, but the more you watch them, the more you fear they will end badly, pretending to be annoying.
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I can't remember exactly where I was following the last update, and the plot was blurry as all the plot fragments were mixed together. I took a look and subscribed to Volume 4 of The First Sword Immortal. I remember that it seemed to be because the chapter names of each chapter were in symmetrical sentence patterns. Simply by looking at it, I felt that the style had changed drastically, and most of the content was a running account, at least in terms of the sense of reading after reading. More than a year has passed before I knew it. I suddenly thought of this novel when I had nothing to do recently. I started reading it from the beginning and found some small details and big foreshadowings that were ignored at the beginning of the book. I didn't pay attention to it the first time, but when I looked back with a... Reviewer's mentality, I discovered a lot. I have to say that this book left me with a lot of happy memories. Even though I still vaguely remember some of the plot when I read it again, I still couldn't help but laugh out loud when I saw some of the unexpected plot points. The sense of oppression I felt on Xiao Shou was also deeper than the experience I had when I first read it. It was similar to what I felt when I read it, but it was a little more intensified, with the tragedy hidden in the comedy. Sure enough, I am not suitable to comment on certain things. I can say a thousand things but don't want to say anything in the middle of the sentence. It seems that I am at a loss for words, as if I am speechless, or as if I have already described it to myself in my heart and don't want to repeat it again. This book is a good book
Can you let him fake it all at once? It breaks at the waist every time.
There's a lot of foreshadowing, but I don't feel bad about it. After a lot of saving, now I've even forgotten some of the characters, let alone the embodiment of specific image abilities for certain tasks.
If you don't vote and I won't vote, the author will naturally be bald! If you don't reward me, then the author won't be lazy! Only when you are bald and don't be lazy can readers enjoy reading!
It is a relaxing book. It is well written and the characters are very vivid. There is Mu Zixi in the front and Rao in the back, and the father-son relationship between Yu Lingdi and Yu Mo. 🤔🤔🤔🤔
What kind of combat power does Xu Xiaoshou have? Can you explain it?
I feel like these chapters are so good these days, and the additional updates I promised have turned out to be a fog light 😭
The creativity is quite good, but the plot and character design are off-putting The protagonist is mentally retarded and has a bad mentality. People are using you as a guinea pig, but you don't know how to fight back or tolerate it. Instead, you feel a little grateful? How come you didn't react at all to someone's desperate trick of sucking your life force, but instead just sucked her up casually? People use the protagonist as a guinea pig, but they can also forcefully whitewash this person? Since it is based on whether you are born into the inner courtyard, is there any point in holding this competition? Later, the quota for Tianxuan Sect was based on strength. Why did the number one in the competition not accept the inner courtyard? The setting of the sect is ambiguous. Is it because everyone does not take human life seriously and plays with it casually? Is it because the evil protagonist accidentally kills someone and everyone condemns it? No one knows about the first apprentice, and he doesn't care if he is bullied, suspected or insulted. When he takes a token, everyone thinks it was stolen by the protagonist. How come the second apprentice who is the second apprentice has to be given face by everyone? And when I was looking for exercises in the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion, I said I didn't want this wood? It's quite poisonous