I Only Want to Die of Old Age in Peace

Q-version portrait drawn by roommate of female goose

Hahaha, I felt good when I first watched it. The heroine actually thought quite clearly in many aspects, and the progress of things was also interesting. And it's really rare for a female channel to watch such a real, big heroine! It's not that no matter how powerful the heroine is, she has to rely entirely on men. It's not that she will die without a man's rescue. It's not that women are virtuous as soon as they travel through time. It's not that women are precepted to regard their husbands as their heaven. It's not that no matter how the heroine is written, she helps her husband and relies on her husband's wealth (say, there was Wu Zetian Mulan in ancient times)! My interest in reading online articles, which has almost cooled down recently, has come back to life again!

First of all, let me say that I am definitely not criticizing this book I don't know if I am the only one who feels this way. It is too verbose, big and small, and insignificant things have to be explained, and the explanations are repeated. The same meaning is repeated in different words, and people of all sizes, even if they only appear once, spend a lot of pen and ink to write about the background, mentality, reasons for doing things, and opinions on things. This situation becomes more serious later on. I understand that the author may want to flesh out the character's personality, but the writing is not concise enough. It is too cumbersome to repeat one idea over and over again, and there are too many other people's opinions on the matter The author may not be intentional. It may be due to the problem of the newcomer's writing style that the content is really watery. It is too serious, cumbersome, and highly repetitive (referring to a description with different meanings) ) I don't know if the author is not confident enough in himself or has doubts about the reader's reading comprehension ability. He is just short of telling the reader word by word what it means and what it means Look, my words above are similar to the author's. Several paragraphs express similar meanings, but they are still divided into three paragraphs to express one thing repeatedly.

The world is as black as crows - "A Dream of Red Mansions" by Cao Xueqin of the Qing Dynasty

Additional Rules I will repay what I owe... (Emphasis added) I remember every payment, and I will really pay it back (emphasis added) The author's conscience aches, so the part less than 10,000 will not be cleared. When the accumulation is added together, the most likely thing is that it will be paid back during the winter vacation. The academic load is so heavy that I really can't take care of it all. Feel sorry! —— The following are the rules for adding updates to the first update players. Mayfly is extremely self-aware. I am a one-update player, and it is difficult to extract more. So I set myself tolerant and appropriate rules for updating. The total reward points are 10,000 points, and one chapter will be updated to 4,000+ points. (The rule is applicable from September 1st to September 30th, which means that the total number of reward points in this month will be 10,000 points!!!) The cumulative reward points include QD, q-read, Hong-xiu, Xiao-xiang and other channels (although not It's a reward from QD on this site. The humble author gets a small share, but I have received your support! ) If the rules for adding updates are not met within the time limit, then I will happily fish, hehe - One update per day, unbeatable. Leisurely leisurely! ๑◡๑ If there is a large reward, such as a 100,000 point reward, a million point reward, etc. (Ahem, you still have to have dreams, although the possibility is extremely low.), Please allow the humble author to pay off the debt slowly. For example, a reward of 100,000 points requires a total of 10 updates to be paid back slowly over ten days. That's all I can think of right now. I'm a newbie, so I may not think carefully. The updated rules will be posted in the comment area, and then rewards will be recorded! All supporting friends (*￣3￣)╭♡❀Little flowers will hit you

Chapter 130 in progress, minor revisions, patching part of the plot... (The author of chapter v does not have permission to modify it. After the full text modification is completed, the author will ask the editor to grant permission.)

The heroine is really smart and masters all kinds of imperial power. It feels like she has put in a lot of effort. There is no nonsensical plot, and every plot is very understandable. In one word, cool!

It's been a long time since I've seen an author who is so loving to his daughter. Chew Mi, I love the author. Come on, author.

I thought of this article when I read this post, Wu Zhou is too cute!

From today on, I will protect my favorite little prince Lin Shixian (Lin Yanxian). I love you~