Wizard Lord

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The writing style is very green and the words used in many places are inappropriate. There were no changes after writing.

The super god mechanic decided to sacrifice this book 😁😁😁😁😁

A Chinese name for the protagonist of a Western fantasy novel is enough to scare away half the people in the first chapter!

To be honest, the writing style is relatively immature, and the character descriptions are very flat and stereotyped. Farming is often a group drama, and the characters are not fleshed out enough to look dull and boring. In addition, what makes me feel the most uncomfortable is probably this kind of land planning. I didn't understand the geographical layout, population distribution, industry and surrounding relationships at first, and I didn't quite understand the focus on health. It felt like I didn't care about the economy first and ran into the communist society. Normally speaking, people who have enough food and clothing know honor and disgrace, and material needs are at the bottom. Public health should be interspersed with the process of territorial construction and continuous improvement of material standards. There is still something in the idea of ​​​​centering on health improvement and promoting the development of other industries. To sum up, the author is young, has average knowledge, and has a single-minded idealistic way of thinking. So, give me the pen and I will write

The leather armor army is coming, warm it up first

Author, the plot is a bit slow. What most people want to see is a strong and prosperous territory. You are advancing a bit slowly

What? A eunuch? The Mechanical Legion came here to watch it, and they picked up the newest one when they saw it, but ended up not updating it after more than 20 chapters? What went wrong?

The 22W words were gone before I even started reading. . . .

The mechanic came over. It's really not easy for the author. This kind of thing happened just a short time after the book was published.

The main character development is too slow. The territory's infrastructure construction has not yet begun, and everyone's patience is running out. It is recommended that the plot be sped up. Some plots do not need to be written too much! I came to see you, the author, write about the development of magical technology! You don't have any management talent now, you are only a wizard! If you don't look for it, how can it grow? Where can I feed Luo Xun every day? The author please add some details!

I haven't started watching it yet, so I'll hit 💰100 first, because witchcraft and lords are my favorite genres! Not to mention Pei Ge's recommendation! Come on, author!

The author has achieved three achievements. If you invest now, you will definitely lose money! Don't chase the bet!

Open the door, Black Star Legion, routine inspection

I feel that the author can learn more about character creation, and also improve the combat aspect.

The machine got wet, keep an eye on it

? Is it because the original author got stuck in time?

The mechanical army is stationed. I have collected it and started killing. I don't know if the content is powerful.

Pig's feet ability development, I feel like it's being delayed.

Does the Book of Love force one to fall in love with another? If that's the case😥, I'd better give up the book.

The mechanic came here and sent me a wave of recommendation votes first. There are too few. Let's gain weight and then read. Come on, author.

From today on, as the city lord, let go of that witch

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It's exactly the same as the beginning of a comic I've read, by the same author?

Mmm~(^з^)-☆, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's too little. Come on, give me your recommendation votes.

The eunuch next door 😎

What about the spinning machine? It's gone after being photographed?

The writing is good, why is it not popular enough?

Two more recommendation votes, the number of recommendation votes is over a thousand 🙂