Perfect World: Martial Soul

Here are some personal opinions: the system should really stop drawing followers and those character cards. Like in the novel *Covering the Sky: Saiyan*, where they just give you a character card whenever you can't beat someone, what's the point of training? And then there's the equipment.

Ji Haoyue: My life is so hard, Ji Jiaoyue! I finally got a system, and I wanted to marry the Holy Maiden, suppress my younger siblings, and reach the pinnacle of life, but it got blocked halfway through! This is so hard!

I'm honestly speechless. Why does the protagonist have to be written so shamelessly? They're both time travelers, so their minds should be more mature than average, right? But this character is written like a child. Like an elementary school student, I'm really speechless.

It's ridiculous that you'd accept even the heirs of the Immortal Palace. The Immortal Palace, Sword Valley, and Demon Dragon Dao Sect were the ones who condemned the Seven Kings' descendants to the status of Sinful Blood and attacked Kunpeng. Just kill them directly. Without achieving the Supreme Realm, they'd be less than cannon fodder in the borderlands.

Covering the sky is the perfection of a group of people, and perfection is the covering of the sky by one person. This book will make what you write perfect a group of people. What is needed is cutting-edge combat power. Only people like Shi Hao and Liu Shen are valuable to cultivate. If you train a group of people, they will all be cannon fodder in the end.

Saying something like "quasi-Immortal Emperor potential" is laughable. It's probably only possible for pioneers and creators of new paths, or Immortal Kings who have perfected existing paths and further expanded them, to reach the quasi-Immortal Emperor level.

Um, the author seems to be underestimating the potential of Quasi-Immortal Emperors, constantly mentioning their abilities. Also, the author's portrayal of the so-called First Generation is... Well, it's a bit... Ridiculous. The First Generation wasn't really that impressive; it's almost laughable that they all became Supremes.

Does the Ancient Sacred Body in this novel surpass the Supreme Bone? I've noticed that Chen Dong's trilogy seems to favor physiques from "Covering the Sky" that surpass those from "Perfect World"?

Author, have you forgotten that the main character also needs to play the 12 Zodiac games? Where are your 12 Zodiac games? When are you going to get a 12 Zodiac game?

There are people there who have already started cultivating several different systems. Whether they're strong or not is invisible, but your cultivation speed and resources are incredibly slow and limited. They're almost becoming immortals, while you're still trying to unlock the Nth basic realm.