The Only Avenue

I didn't feel much about the book just by reading the title, but after reading the article, I really liked it and it was very comfortable to read. Although Yan is a newbie, the writing is not new, the writing is smooth and natural, and the story is also very interesting. The most important thing is that there is no bloody plot, and there are many warm moments that make people feel comfortable.

The fragments are anticlimactic, incoherent, and the article suddenly falls off when reading. It seems to have deliberately avoided fighting, the handover between the sect and the disciples, and the descriptions of the supporting characters are very average, without highlighting the difference between one, two, three, four, etc. There are also particularly important group portrait descriptions, such as group voice, group handover, or profile description, anti-prominence, turning point, center point, target point. Direct dialogue between one or two single supporting characters is not enough to express the sublimation of the article. For example, when the senior brother held a banquet, he could describe more group portraits. The maidservants brought out the senior brother's elegance. Why can't he describe the facial expressions, movements and inner dialogue of the people he hosted. As for the latter, just leaving a few lines of dialogue and summarizing their opinions is better than using this as a background board, like suddenly pulling it out, and then writing out the points for the female supporting role to reduce intelligence. The one or two sentences from the heroine's perspective are too thin and look like prose. This is not something that can be made up for by good writing. There is still a difference between prose and novels. Many people read novels to see real flesh and blood, not just superficial stories. Even the supporting character Zhan Taimingyue's few words are more outstanding than the heroine's. The heroine's writing is too bland, and so is her character. Cultivation to immortality always has a theme, even if you seek immortality, it must be highlighted. For example, another article I followed started with Confucianism and Taoism, and connected to the fusion of killing and ruthless Taoism. Confucianism is for the people, and no matter how weak it is, it still has the meaning of survival. However, because the Confucianism is weak, it is protected by killing and encouraging people. This kind of outstanding thing makes people curious about what to write next, and two-thirds of the article is about fighting, which is very passionate. Not to mention that it requires a lot, but the article about cultivating immortals must have descriptions of battles. It would be too casual to just mention it in one sentence. Cultivation of immortals fights with humans and heaven, which is like farming articles... The word genius is not a simple word. The emergence of genius is mostly accompanied by great crises, and the spiritual root of immortality Well, the elders inside the big sects are not described first, only the head is pulled out and wandered around, everything is cyclical and gradual, the places that should be flashbacks are not flashbacks, and the things that should be written in advance are not written in advance. There are also some places where I don't know if it is to avoid the parts that I am not good at and directly narrate in reverse, which is abrupt. The most important thing is that the protagonist is not outstanding, the fighting dungeon is not good, and the turning point is abrupt. How can we write a specific style of cultivating immortals? The writing style is so good that it cannot be said that it has always attracted people. Even the most beautiful essence can only be said to be the mortal part. This is compared to those writings that are not good and can be simply discarded at the first glance. It is tasteless and it is a pity to discard it.

The beginning is very engaging and exciting, but then the pace is slow and a bit speechless. If you want to write a long novel, it won't be so procrastinating. Ninety-six chapters of foundation building, and the 450th chapter is still foundation building. There are no plot highlights in the whole process. There are only a few serious fights with people. I have been exploring treasure hunts and killing monsters in secret places. Or the state of mind caused by what happened to the people around me. I was confused at first and then realized that Taoist heart is important. But most of the whole article is describing the state of mind, which is too nonsense. Beast Tide really feels like a long list of chapters that have been wasted for many chapters. I endured seeing that Senior Brother Yun was reminded by the heroine to turn around and cultivate here ten years later and decided to abandon it. The bug fixes are too perfunctory. It makes people feel that it is a group portrait novel but the development of each character is not well planned. It gradually starts to revolve around the talents of the heroine. It is a pity. I was really looking forward to it at the beginning. After all, there are few rigorous and orthodox fairy tales in female channels.

After reading the updates in recent months, I am a little worried that the author will cheat. After all, there have been many good articles about cultivating immortals that have been deceived before, so I am afraid of encountering this kind of thing again. I hope the author can persevere, no matter how fast or slow it is, at least it will be finished!

In my opinion, novels are about telling stories, rather than describing the appearance and clothing in detail, which is really a bit long-winded! I used to read novels line by line, but when I read this novel, I skipped some exquisite descriptions, and there was really no story to read in one chapter. I read 500 chapters in 2 days, and the first 100 chapters were really good, but then it became more and more procrastinating. I hope that the author himself will not use so many exquisite descriptions in new articles~

Are there any people who like Master? I think Master is really handsome.

The book is indeed very good-looking, and the writing is good, but just looking at the title and introduction, it is not attractive at all... (Scratches his head) But how can I put it, the aroma of wine is not afraid of the depth of the alley. In the early part, Lingchu steps from the mundane fireworks to the gate of Taiqing Mountain. The words are full of the misty and hazy meaning of the journey to seek immortality. The heaven and earth are boundless, the immortal path is vague, and the fate between living beings is mixed with countless emotions, reason, and cause and effect. Therefore, Lingchu's path to spiritual cultivation is actually mainly about The word "love" is reflected in the journey. I personally feel that the encounters and separations along the way to Lingchu are the most vivid part of the article. After all, as you practice, you will gradually become friends with many Taoists (in the broad sense) who have been together for a long time. In the end, I am afraid that only one out of ten will be left - to be honest, it is a very lonely thing. In the later part, because Xiu Xianwen, treasure hunt, monster hunting and upgrading are almost all the same routine, which is not as fresh as the early stage. Therefore, I think what is more interesting in the later stage is the fate and friendship between creatures, as well as some amazing experiences (such as Hua Yueyue). Regarding the recent plot of The Endless Sea, I wonder if the author is in a bad state and was in a daze while watching it. I felt that many parts were redundant, especially Liu Chun's section, which made me feel lonely while watching it. If the reality is busy, you can rest assured to stop updating to adjust the status - anyway, the author of the annual update next door will catch a lot. As for the cp debate, it's probably society's fault. Personally, I don't care if there is CP or not, as long as the writing does not deviate from the original intention. The writing is also very clear. Lingchu seeks to hear the Tao, values ​​friendship and justice, and treats people with good nature as his companions. Therefore, it must be a blessing if you have a partner who can stay with you for a long time and can be trusted to support you. Alas, in fact, life is also like this.

Nice! Don't hesitate. The writing is great, but sometimes I can't understand the opening verses. 😭😭😭😭😍😍

It looks good, but I beg the author to work hard and update it.

Answer post about whether there is a male protagonist First of all, let me make it clear that the mainstream of this article is the upgrade of cultivation, and the emotional drama is not the main focus. As for the male protagonist, there is a male protagonist in the outline. The unspoken idea is that in one's life, you will definitely meet someone who may make your heart beat, may make you warm, or may make you yearn for. Not to mention that monks can live for tens of millions of years. It is unrealistic to not have just one or two people, and there are people walking side by side on the long journey of cultivation. It is not bad to say that. However, even though she has been solo since her debut, she is really not good at nor confident in writing emotional scenes, so the future of the male protagonist is unclear╮(╯▽╰)╭

The writing style is very good. As expected, women's writing style is good. I didn't like watching female videos before because they were all about uncomfortable and trivial love affairs. Now I find that female videos actually have this kind of novels, which are illusory, about cultivating one's mind, walking in the world, and realizing the great truth. Chased 🙂 I am a man, and there is another one called "She is a Sword Cultivator" which is also good. It is about cultivating and leveling up, but the writing style is not good.

I saw a similar reply from the latest author Jun. The general content is to chew on cp and keep walking with it. I really can't imagine how a walking Tang Monk flesh, a walking panacea, can obtain touching and touching love. Family members in the world of immortality can betray themselves for profit, let alone a stranger of the opposite sex who wants the heroine's body. If the author assumes that the male protagonist wants nothing, then I really don't understand the starting point of this relationship and what is used to maintain this marriage. We mortals basically use children to maintain the relationship, and what are the methods of cultivating immortals to maintain it? So, I gave up.

The first part was good, but I couldn't stand it when I saw that the ratio of men to women in the sect was 10:1, and I couldn't stand the following chapters at all. The number 10:1 was capitalized and bolded in my mind. I have read so many cultivation novels written by men and women, and many of them assume that there are fewer female cultivators than male cultivators, but the author of this article is the first to write that the male-to-female ratio of the top immortal sects is 10:1, awesome. The reason is that the secular world favors boys over girls, which in turn affects the world of cultivation. I was puzzled. Preferring boys over girls can be said to be the norm on the earth, but there are only a few countries where female infanticide is popular. From this, it can be deduced that in the larger world of immortality, there are not many areas where female infanticide is popular. Why is the male-to-female ratio 10:1? Go to Baidu and check that the ratio of men to women in ancient China was not unbalanced like this. After reaching advanced civilization, it became worse and worse. Also, are people in the world of immortality out of their minds? They know how to protect the basic population during earthquakes, but they don't know how to slightly control the ratio of men to women. Can you think about what the concept of this male-to-female ratio will be if it continues to develop? Population represents power, and 10:1 means that the power of women (regardless of whether they are cultivators or not) is very, very weak compared to men. If their power is too weak to a certain extent, it will be impossible to be equal. Men will be more likely than women to sign up for groups to obtain resources, or women will be excluded from the edge of the resource circle. If the vicious circle is not controlled, the ratio of men to women will definitely become more and more exaggerated. Will the imbalance of yin and yang have no impact on this continent? And sex can be regarded as a resource. With so few female nuns, how many people will take risks and sell female nuns in order to obtain sexual resources? 10:1 Hey, as long as there is one pervert among 10 men, the girl will be in danger, and one pervert will not only satisfy one female cultivator, but will definitely kidnap more female cultivators. How can a woman in this environment cultivate immortality or dream? If I let you cultivate immortality, it would be better to sell it

After reading more than 100 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore and abandoned the article. In the world of cultivation, strength is respected. Why does the author always like to emphasize that girls are not as easy to get along with as boys? Even if women dress up as men at every turn, what kind of writing about female cultivators is this? Go ahead and write about men's videos.

I am a bookworm with more than ten years of reading experience. I got into the fairy tales from the male porn masters. I rarely like the female porn novels. This is one of the few I like. It is free and easy, my heart is clear, I am affectionate but not sentimental, my heart is rock, ruthless but not cold-blooded. Our heroine is also the direction I hope to develop myself. I hope the author writes better and better. It is genuine from the first chapter. I will definitely follow your book. Come on.

The more I watched, the more speechless I became. It was also the late stage of foundation building. The protagonist had to work hard and practice hard to reach the later stage. How about that maidservant who could stay quietly for a hundred years and achieve perfection? ? ? And isn't she the least qualified? She is the protagonist, right? Moreover, people with high-grade spiritual roots have failed to build their foundation once or twice. . . Let's talk about the protagonist, the senior brother of Tianlinggen can reach ninety Yuanying, but the protagonist is only in the middle stage of Golden Elixir when he reaches one hundred, so what's the use of your Tianlinggen? What was originally a genius was suddenly written as a mediocrity. . .

If you want a male protagonist, go read urban romances. There are all kinds of them. There are also quite a few romances about cultivating immortals and having no brains. After all, this is the atmosphere of Qidian female romance novels. I finally came across this one. I just want to say, don't let the male protagonist ruin this book.

After reading this book, there is even less to read. In the fairy tales, I have basically read all the good-looking ones with male and female stories. This book is really good. Both in terms of writing style and mentality, it has the atmosphere of my Taoist fairy spirit. It is a pleasant reading. Unfortunately, the update is too slow.

Big. The four dimensions up and down are boundless and infinite, the void of the universe is boundless and infinite, and the thoughts and thoughts are boundless and infinite. Tao. It is the law in the sky, the path in the earth, and the direction in the heart. Wei. Inner activities dominate. 1. The harmony and inclusiveness of all things. Welcome to discuss and enliven the atmosphere.

The writing is very strange. The first one is about the heroine's life experience. She is set as the daughter of a foreign wife, but her parents are written in a positive way. In the end, she reconciled. Anyway, there is something wrong that can't be explained. The second one is about Huan Niang. The brothel is obviously a bad place. She exchanges her body for money, but in the eyes of the heroine, Huan Niang is very comfortable staying in the brothel, drinking a little wine every day and receiving a few guests, right? There are countless similar small details, all of which are inconsistent with logic.

This book is not recommended for readers who have read novels about cultivating immortals. In addition to popular science and cultivation, cultivation levels, items and props, the same idea is expressed over and over again from different angles. It is purely literary and there are no exciting parts in the story. Xiaobaiwen, Liushuiwen

I was wondering here in the middle of the night whether there is a male protagonist or not. It's been more than 800 chapters and I'm still not sure. There's no other CP romance to eat from both sides.

There are so many requirements for watching female videos. . . It's quite funny. Some people (I've seen some people, I'm not talking about all) people are dictating the relationship between the protagonists of female videos. In male videos, as long as they don't have a real harem, they will say, "But his writing is good, and the flaws are not hidden" even if they are flirtatious. The authors have clearly written their own thoughts. Modern people, do you know how to respect them? Especially some of them just read it before you read it. If it doesn't suit your taste, just change it. Do you have to argue here to show that you have too much time?

The writing content is too cumbersome. The matter of cultivating immortals is either mentioned a little or very little. On the contrary, there are too many other descriptions, which is too putting the cart before the horse. The writing style is indeed good, and the narrative tone is quite gentle and peaceful, but the plot is too stretched and it is difficult to finish it in one sentence.

Spirit Beast Qingkong is a male, so I was mentally prepared at first, but the appearance of the first disciple was a bit sudden, and he is a male, so the male characters have too many roles. I personally watched the female channel without CP not only because I wanted to see the female protagonist, but also wanted to see more female supporting roles.

Lingchu in my heart

I really like this kind of eloquent writing style, not impatient or impatient, and the writing style is very good. A good article will definitely become popular, so please give it a try. Personally speaking, don't let your own daughter be too obedient. It's healthier to be abusive, and it's better to read with restraint and elegance. Personal opinion, for reference only.

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Book club, 1036947606, the answer to the question, the title of the book is enough

"The Only Way" Si Bai Chapter There is a city in the west of the Eastern Continent called Xianye City. This city is famous in the Eastern Continent for its tea. It has a great reputation. Even people like Lingchu who love wine have heard of it. However, this trip is not just for tea. This trip is for receiving secret orders from the sect. Ling Chu, who was dressed in a green skirt, and Si Bai, who was dressed in white, walked slowly and leisurely into the city. Their expressions were the same as normal travelers, looking around curiously, but their consciousness was always on guard. "Is this the first time for this beautiful sister and brother to come to our Fairy Leaf City?" One? Nice to hear. "Yes!" Lingchu bent slightly, his eyebrows were curved, and he looked really good-looking. "Sister is so beautiful! Is she a fairy in the sky?" "Where does sister want to go? I can take her there, and it's very cheap!" The little girl blinked her big eyes and looked at Lingchu. After all, the brother next to her was not easy to talk to, unlike this sister who was easier to talk to. "My sister is here for the first time. Is there any good place to drink tea in the city? And I want to buy some good tea to give away!" The little girl smiled even sweeter, "I guarantee with my credibility that the tea in the place I recommend is definitely the best!" The little girl also patted her chest. Immediately, the little girl led the way while introducing the customs and customs of Xianye City. Lingchu nodded in agreement from time to time. Si Bai on the side looked at the big one and the small one going back and forth, and couldn't help but feel a little funny. This junior sister of the Immortal Spiritual Root is a bit interesting. Subsequently, one person in green and one in white sat in a teahouse. The small side room in the teahouse was very quiet and quiet, and people sitting inside felt like a literati sipping tea and writing poetry. Sitting opposite Si Bai, Lingchu could not help but see the face of the person opposite. Speaking of which, although the two had met several times before, they had never sat down like this. Lingchu's eyes looked down from the willow eyebrows inch by inch, scanning a pair of indifferent eyes, a high bridge of nose, and slightly raised lips. Lingchu woke up suddenly, feeling quite embarrassed when he realized it, and his jade-white cheeks suddenly turned pink. Looking at this reaction, the curve of Si Bai's lips became wider and wider, and a clear voice reached Lingchu's ears from the opposite side. "Does it look good?" Lingchu also relaxed at this time and looked at the other party with a smile. "Senior Brother is such an immortal person, and Junior Sister is the first time I have seen him in my life, and I accidentally fell in love with him!" Si Bai's expression did not change, he picked up the tea and took a sip, and said casually: "Junior sister's color is rare in the world!" Lingchu's eyes curved, he cupped his hands and said in salute: "To each other!" "It's time to go after finishing the tea!" Si Bai walked in front, and Lingchu followed behind. The two followed the little girl around the city, and bought a lot of tea! At night, the two of them dined at the inn and tasted the special delicacies here. Lingchu tasted very delicious, and even Si Bai tasted a few chopsticks of the dishes that Lingchu had eaten the most. At the end of the dinner, Lingchu confidently said to Si Bai: "That's almost it! We can start tomorrow!" Si Bai nodded. Although the two of them did not have much friendship, this junior sister was extremely talented and her talent in formations was not inferior. Si Bai did not doubt her words. After Lingchu returned to the wing, he was thinking about the terrain he had explored today, constantly deducing and calculating in his mind, striving to do it in one go tomorrow. Si Bai returned to the room and couldn't help but chuckle when he thought about Lingchu. This junior sister was really a quickie. When he doesn't talk on weekdays, he has a bit of the immortal spirit of a cultivator. Once he speaks, those talking eyes are really irresistible. Thinking about those eyes, Si Bai's unwavering eyes couldn't help but change, and his eyebrows couldn't help but become gentler. Before going to bed, Lingchu's last impression was of Si Bai's face, so beautiful! Write whatever you want~{"TopicId":"776819114126802944","TopicName":"Praise this novel"}