Powering Up, Starting with An Lan

Blood Transformation Realm, Cave Heaven Realm, Spirit Transformation Realm, Inscription Realm, Array Formation Realm, Venerable Realm, Divine Fire Realm (Pseudo-God), True One Realm, Holy Sacrifice (Transitional Realm), Heavenly God Realm, Void Dao Realm, Sever Myself Realm, Escape One Realm, Supreme Realm, True Immortal Realm, Immortal King Realm, Quasi-Immortal Emperor, Immortal Emperor.

Pretending to be weak to deceive others, you're still a weakling. If you were to become the tiger, this book would have died long ago. Has the author even read *Perfect World* how powerful the "Escape Mirror" is? You're just showing off with a bunch of trash. A character destined to be a Celestial King has been portrayed so poorly by you.

I've finally found some fanfiction about Anlan. I suggest the author change the book title as soon as possible. Otherwise, the biggest selling point of this book is that it has become An Lan's constant stream of witty remarks. This should be reflected in the title, otherwise people will not see it and will just skip over it.

I don't know what I'm afraid of at the Escape One Realm. I have an Immortal King master from the Sword Pavilion. An Lan's peak is also an Immortal King. With an Immortal King as a backer, plus An Lan who has clearly grown up, who would be so blind as to mess with a dilapidated An Lan clan?

No matter what type of book it is, some authors can write about a family's decline or a loser's rise to power. They're truly talented.

Reading these kinds of novels always feels frustrating. The protagonist watches someone so much weaker than him showing off – it's ridiculous, isn't it? If he's so much stronger, couldn't he just instantly kill him? Why wait until he's finished showing off before you kill him? And even though the protagonist is so strong, is his perception so weak…?

Some of the scenes you wrote don't feel like fantasy; they're more like martial arts. For example, An Lan riding in a carriage—even a fallen imperial family in fantasy wouldn't use an ordinary carriage. Also, some of the equivalent items are made of gold instead of spirit stones, which feels a bit low-class. Finally, keep up the good work, author! (ง •̀_•́)ง

Is it fun to play dumb to outsmart others? I didn't quite capture the essence of a master of witty banter. Goodbye, bye!

I don't know why you wrote An Lan in such a low-class way. Do you write martial arts novels, bro?

I haven't read Perfect World, but I still find An Lan's pushover character a bit annoying... In the novels I've read that mention An Lan, everyone says she has an invincible spirit and is very arrogant... I can only say that the author's writing style is too influenced by other authors...