Harry Potter: Trouble

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I have an idea I also like Harry Potter and I also want to integrate into the wizarding world Can I add a supporting role Daphne's spouse's name was not written in the original book I think my character can be promoted 😌😌 I think so My supporting role is in the lion courtyard and she is in the snake courtyard From mutual attraction and mutual understanding, slowly to the end Happy enemies They hate each other but come together every time... Character Frank Sagittarius Er Er cute nonsense and poisonous tongue coexist Optimistic and sensitive, good face My wand in the HP game test is Dragon's nerves + black walnut I read a lot of pornographic novels with supporting actors, but mine is normal compared to the various through holes and weird settings.

I have loved Harry Potter since I was a child. After watching the movie and TV show, read the original work, and after watching the original work, read the fan fiction. After reading a lot of fan fiction, I found that there are many classic ones, but there are even more poisonous ones. So I came up with the idea of ​​writing it myself. I am new to writing. I work during the day and write at night. In my heart, the world of Harry Potter has a complete social system and mature magic knowledge theory. Except for the innocent children, every adult makes a choice that is most in line with their own position. For example, the war between the Death Eaters and the Order of the Phoenix should have a deeper reason. This reason is related to the survival of the wizarding world, and the opponent has to be eliminated by force. Each character has his own persistence and character. For example, a small person like Filch also has his own original intention and persistence. I hope to write these things out. Inadequate writing experience. Whether it's the characters, the plot, or the rhythm of the story, there are many areas that can be improved, but I don't know where the problem lies and I have no idea where to start. It's dark under the lamp, I hope you can give me a helping hand.

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It's quite interesting, I invested in it. Looks familiar, I also write about Harry Potter, will you have a chance to py it in the future?

So let me ask, the heroine Hermione? Big love If you don't like it, don't spray it.

Wait, it turns out to be a eunuch book. No wonder it hasn't been updated for 16 days.

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