Ming Shen Chasing the Immortal Path

The biggest shortcoming of this book is that the writing style is too immature. I want to read the book to see the details, but the author only gives an outline, and the most important battle scenes of Xianxia are briefly mentioned. . . The conversations and descriptions in my mind are like rushing through the flowers as if they are in a hurry.

Can I not use CP? I'm scared when I see CP 😨

I wanted to complain at first, but I saw that it was my first time writing an article and I didn't have much experience, so forget it. Taiyin Shadow was second, so what do you mean, Taiyang was first? Why? The lunar sun and the lunar sun should exist equally! It would be too disgusting if the male protagonist was the first sun. This is a story about a female protagonist. What does it mean to have a male protagonist who is stronger than the female protagonist to put pressure on her head? Isn't it disgusting?

In the previous life, I was still a casual cultivator at the peak of the Yuanying. Since I was a casual cultivator and had poor qualifications, I still cultivated to the peak of the Yuanying. That means I have the ability, wisdom and city. The starting point of the author's design is too high, but the heroine's character cannot keep up.

This is the first time the author has written a book, and it has many shortcomings, which must be admitted. But I still long for five-star reviews. Ratings are really, really important. If you like it, please give it a five-star review. If you don't like it, just leave a thumbs up. It takes many high scores to get a low score back. It doesn't mean that you can't accept bad reviews, but it just looks ugly. When it is written, some people will like it, some will not like it, and people will comment on it, but the author really has a glass heart 😂😂😂 So... Well, everyone understands, right?

I have read a lot of novels about cultivating immortals, but I still like those with male protagonists.

I feel like the supporting characters here are sick, the heroine doesn't owe them anything, they hate others after being saved once, and the heroine becomes jealous of the heroine just by looking at them

Do you have any recommendations for the same type of genius-style fairy tales? The heroine is not a genius, but she has better qualifications. She has a sect and a backing, and is serious about practicing and upgrading. There are not so many messy stories about love, hate, plots and intrigues. It's so hard to find...

To be honest, it's great to write it like this. Everyone had too many ideas when reading the article, but if you really want to write it yourself, how many people can do it, haha! That's why I'm still a part of the readership circle, so cheers! 👍👍

The heroine sometimes makes me feel quite disgusting and stupid. I feel that the author's writing style is a bit immature and some redundant words make me feel that the heroine is like that. But this is also the author's first time writing a book. Please continue to work hard in the future. I will not rate it.

The biggest flaw of this book is that all the immortal cultivators in the world have less opportunities than the heroine.

Happy belated holiday, I wish you all a happy forever. Thank you for your support and encouragement. Chaocha is writing for the first time, and there are indeed many shortcomings. However, he is learning and making progress every day. I would like to express my special thanks to the book friends who have always supported Chaochao. Without your support, Chaochao would not have progressed so fast, nor would he have much motivation. During this period, Chaochao has sorted out some issues that everyone is concerned about, and I will also give a reply here. First of all, the most common thing is that Qianqian only knows one move in the early stage. There are many cute comments that really made me laugh. One of them is "She keeps shooting stars month after month, and the shooting stars are almost gone 😂😂" She will not have other moves until she experiences the map for the first time, not many. After more than a hundred chapters, if you read patiently, you will not have this problem. This was originally designed by the author, but I did not expect that there will be so many cute reactions, and it is also the author's poor consideration. Secondly, there are many cuties who are also concerned about the male protagonist's problems. There is a male protagonist, but there are definitely not many emotional scenes, and there will be only after Qian Qian ascends to the spiritual world. This article focuses on cultivating immortals. Qian Qian will move forward on the road, so don't worry. Again, there will be some typos in Chaochao, and many little cuties have pointed them out. I will try to avoid them in the future. In fact, Chaochao will check every chapter published, but it is inevitable that there will be mistakes and omissions. I have to thank everyone for their tolerance. Finally, there may not be too many maps set in this article. After all, it is a long story. There will be various characters in the article. Some people like it and some don't like it. It is all personal preference. If the setting of Chao Chao is unreasonable, everyone is welcome to point out and we will correct it. However, if it is an unreasonable attack, the author may delete it because he has a weak heart after all. Finally, I would like to sincerely thank you all for your support. It is not easy to write a book for the first time, and it is even more difficult to get your support. … I have to say something at the end. I haven't updated much in the past few days since I returned to my hometown. I will resume normal updates from tomorrow, four updates a day, and more updates depending on the situation. … There are also some comments that the author can see, but for some reason, they cannot reply. For example, the one posted by the cute little girl [No Brain Is Not Cute] during the Dragon Boat Festival cannot be replied to, and the reward is not displayed. I am going crazy 😂. Chaochao replied here. Thank you little cutie for your continued support. … Forced to give an ending...

It's good to read. I'm more impressed by the female channel's articles. Don't read the comments and read them. If you come to female channels to watch Cultivation of Immortality, the writing style is generally average. The author can describe the grand scenes and exciting plots smoothly, which is very good among female channel articles. Some of the writing is so immature that I really can't stand it. The plot is compact and passionate, and there are almost no chapters from beginning to end. It's very nice.

The heroine only knows one move, Meteor and Moon, but what about other sword moves?

I don't want CP. I don't like love and love the most. Just practice hard.

It seems like a century has passed since I waited for the update😂

I watched it together with Edge, but it was a pity that suddenly there was a male protagonist. It was like the daughter I had watched for so long was taken away. Do you think it was uncomfortable or not?😅😅😅

Is there a male protagonist now? 😏

It's the first time the author has written a book, and I feel it's already very impressive. When I read novels, the first thing I pay attention to is the character of the protagonist. I think the character of the heroine in this article is very good. It suits me very well. She is a sophisticated and capable type. After all, the heroine is a swordsman, a swordsman who kills decisively. Moreover, the heroine is also smart and thoughtful enough. It can be seen in her actions, especially in many fights with the villains. The heroine is very careful and rational in her work, and has a strong plan. Combined with her own strength, she can kill her enemies. This gives people a very logical feeling, rather than relying on the so-called halo of the heroine. Also, the heroine also shows considerable wisdom and skill in getting along with friends, family, and fellow disciples. All in all, I think she is a very qualified and even excellent Shuangwen heroine.

The golden finger is wide open. I was so highly cultivated in my previous life. Are my reborn parents still people who ascended? Can I get hurt even if I bump into a few bastards? Normally, your golden finger would have been invincible before Yuanying. How many good things must a pair of ascended parents leave for their only daughter before they leave? The author has no empathy at all. Without that kind of writing, without those thoughts, just honestly write about a local normal girl's journey to upgrade and cultivate immortality. Now the writing is completely inconsistent with the character, just like a baby👶🏻You said he can lift a thousand-jin cauldron. I know you are talking nonsense and I don't understand. There is no basis for the vernacular at all

They have all become immortals. Or should a man marry a woman? Hahaha

Is there a CP? I want soy sauce CP kind. I've watched a lot of non-CP movies, but I don't like long love stories. I want to try soy sauce CP streaming.

Looks great, please update

I accidentally clicked on it and saw that this book is finished? I understand that the author is writing a book for the first time, but the writing style is too immature and I can't read it without paying. I hope the next one will be better, keep it up (◦˙▽˙◦)

I was so disgusted that I kept saying not to talk about feelings, but then a male protagonist appeared, and then every time I had to describe the appearance of the male protagonist, the corners of his eyes, eyebrows, mouth... (The plot of The Luck Child, you can find whatever you need, and everyone you meet unexpectedly is a good person)

I think this book is quite good. It has a male protagonist, but he doesn't have too many roles. He will appear a lot later... Anyway, it doesn't include fun, so feel free to read it.

In which chapter is the heroine's holiday with the Rong family, and when she confronts the Rong family later, I feel like I have no impression at all.

Enmm, I was watching the previous part. Why does the heroine always use that move and the fighting scene ends so quickly?

I like this book and read it several times.

This is the first time I have seen this kind of novel about female immortality.