Creating the Supernatural in the World of Detective Conan

The story develops too fast, and I am always worried that it will end in the next second... It is a good story, and it would be better if the writing was better.

It is recommended to change the protagonist. Just think that there is a spiritual revival in the world of Conan. There is no difference between having the protagonist and not having him. You are the mastermind behind the scenes, but it does not mean that you don't need to cause trouble.

I have created a fan group, the group number is 929960122, you can come in when you have time, emmmmmmm, I don't know if I am starting a group now, would it be a bit silly?

With such a good subject matter, I don't know why you made it so boring. This is the most boring type of novel I've ever read about a mastermind manipulating a supernatural awakening. The key is that there are no obvious shortcomings in your article, and there are no flaws in the writing. Even the plot cannot be faulted, and the character design has no outstanding points. There is no problem anywhere. However, the more I read, the more boring it becomes. It's so puzzling. How did you do it? It seems like you can't even find room for improvement.

The idea of ​​this book is good, the characters are average, and the protagonist is not good. I originally thought that the screenwriter mentioned by the author should at least have a role, but in fact, it feels like there is no sense of the protagonist's existence, the reader does not have a sense of involvement, and the conflict is not enough. For example, there is not enough conflict between the two death organizations, and the climax is not enough. However, the author is a newbie, so it is understandable, but these chapters after arriving in China feel a bit broken. Especially Qin Xiaoxiao, this one is broken. The setting is suddenly raised. What will you write next, author?

I have read more than 50 chapters so far, and the character of this protagonist is quite likable. Just like you said in many novels, the protagonists are decisive in killing and have double standards. They think they are noble and they think they are reasonable. This kind of protagonist is really annoying. It seems that everything must be perfect. Women want all, and the protagonist cannot lick, cannot Holy Mother, anyone who messes with the protagonist will be killed. From time to time, he will pop up a few things that he thinks are very reasonable to describe what is wrong with the original protagonist. This and this are not good. It is really stupid. His own protagonist is like a dick. He also says that others can't do this and that can't be done

My brother came to see my book. I added the author's name. By the way, the author's fan group is too small. The brother who saw this post came to join the group.

New author, new book, cute new author (//∇//)\, I don't know what to say, I just hope that readers can read it. If there are any embarrassing places, please point them out and I will learn from them. emmmm When each chapter is released, I will listen to it carefully first. There should be very few typos.

Author I'm here again, just like yesterday, tired ヽ('⌒´メ)ノ

Just get a vest for the protagonist!