The Most Powerful Creation in the World

I can't watch it after chapter 21, it's so boring

After reading the introduction, I wanted to write a book review, but I didn't know what to write. 😰😰😰😰😰 Feudal Society I don't know how to complain about these words. Do you think that after 1000 years, people at that time will think that we are a feudal society?

I felt like giving up when I saw that I brought a bottle of oil with me when I traveled through the second time. This feeling is very annoying. I am still a newbie and suddenly I have to take a newbie into another world? Alas! And even if I have to write about taking people through time travel, there is still something wrong with the description. And I feel like this girl is so stupid.

To be honest, after entering the second dungeon, the protagonist's IQ plummeted. The first time he stole money, he was just an emergency. After that, he was still so stupid as to steal a bank. Then the main character had a quarrel with me, and he actually tapped his acupuncture points. Are you kidding me? Later, when the protagonist was investigated by the police, he did not change his mobile phone and wanted to rent a house. . . I can only say that the protagonist stayed there for two years and everyone became stupid.

Is the author a trumpet? His writing style doesn't look like that of a novice. There are few writers who write about infinite time travel with a calmness like yours.

What I think is a poisonous point 1: Does the protagonist travel with an oil bottle? I don't understand, can't I send it back and wait for a while at most, so that it can grow? Don't you know how much you weigh? 2: We have traveled to modern times, there is no system to hide our identity, and we can steal money openly and give it to others openly. In modern times, if you don't have any awesome abilities, why would you imitate others and pretend to be awesome? I was drunk when I had a confrontation with the police. 3: If you're not sure what the other person's character is, can you just casually tell her your own secrets and put a little more emphasis on it?

I stopped reading after reading the preface. What is a reactionary Jianghu sect and social progress? Can you change it alone? Is modern society just fair? Is it bound to be solid in ancient times? You should understand that history is being written.

The protagonist writing an action plan is so damn poisonous. I don't know what the author was thinking. In short, I can't think of why he would write such a low-level poisonous point. There is really no limit to human stupidity⊙ω⊙It is also very poisonous to take people through time travel and not take the practice seriously. We are all ordinary people, and it is normal to be selfish. Your noble behavior is destined to have no market.

The protagonist of this book talks a lot of nonsense and has a weird brain circuit. He can't stand it anymore. One of his own people was beaten to death by the beggar gang and his internal organs were damaged. He only had a year and a half to live, so he just arrested the person and kept mumbling for a long time. He wanted an explanation. The key is that he still has some super powers.

Things were fine before Mo Xiaobei traveled through time, but things changed later. It's just that Mo Xiaobei accidentally traveled through time and exposed his biggest secret to save a stranger. Why don't you like to save people so much and not cooperate with the country? It's too far-fetched for the plot.

After all, this is a person's journey, why should I bring a Xiaobei with me? It is difficult to support a family, and the weaknesses are infinitely magnified!

It is strongly recommended to change the function of this cheat into the ability to only take dead objects from another world. If it is good, you can directly remove this cheat. Because the star realm itself is a bug, how can there be living things and plants alive without the sun? Plants can consume oxygen through photorespiration, not to mention animals?

I just saw Feng Yuxiu, and I wanted to complain, why did I bring Mo Xiaobei with me? Why would you risk exposing yourself by going to an ATM to withdraw money for someone you've only met a few times? And directly help Feng Yuxiu to travel through time? Isn't it normal for birth, old age, illness and death? And they were not very familiar with each other, and they didn't know that Feng Yuxiu was the protagonist, so they directly helped him travel through time. Well, that's it.

Brief introduction: In that era, you want everyone to be equal?

I don't want to watch time travel with people. I don't know why I don't like time travel with people now.

What do you think, and you brought Ran with you?

Take people through time! I couldn't stand it anymore when I took Mo Xiaobei through time travel! Poison

One thing suddenly occurred to me: "Wulin Gaiden" is really, really dangerous. Any tour group there would dare to travel through time and space to meet various Ye Guchengs. It shows that future technology is definitely the greatest among great gods. You have to see that there is a tour group inside, and it doesn't feel like a big deal. After all, he said he was bankrupt. As you can imagine, it is not a large-scale tour group. They can all travel through time and space, and it's probably possible with any technology.

I feel like the author should change the name to a nicer one. It's nice, but if it wasn't a coincidence, I almost wouldn't have clicked on it.

Maybe it's because I can't think outside the box, or I feel like I don't have enough background, and I'm worried that I won't be able to control the plot, so I don't dare to write. I read a little bit of the last book not long after it was released, but I was soon addicted to it. Both books have a common problem, they always want to be more realistic, but what you wrote is about time travel, and according to the movie classification, it is a popcorn movie commercial film! As a consumer, readers take themselves into the role of protagonist when reading novels. Your novel is a commodity and the author is a merchant. As a commodity, the ultimate goal is to make consumers pay. Unless you write a novel for neither fame nor profit, you must break through the problem of too much self-limitation in the book and forcibly suppressing the plot. This book has three worlds. There is no applauding point or plot climax. Your product display period is so mediocre, how can you expect to have good results during the charging period. To describe the current plot of this book in one sentence, it is like flowing water without any ups and downs.

Seeing that I really can't hold on anymore, I'm not talking about whether the writing is good or not, but I just feel uncomfortable reading it. If I want to write about the team, you are like the main god, can't you?

The plot has ups and downs, the writing is sophisticated, and the characters are clearly and impressively drawn. It is really worth reading (required)

I support Yuhua's new book and hope this book will be well written.

It's so good. I finished it in one sitting. It's not enough.

The first book review is mine.

Yes, yes, yes, yes, only development is the way to go. Otherwise, most fantasy worlds will become a pool of stagnant water. It only gets stronger as you move forward, and the back is basically gone.

I'll give it a try, can you post a message? Come on, big big, come on... Have you seen me?

Author, all the recommendation votes are given to you, and I wish you success again.

It's late. Come on, work hard on your new book.

Love it, if you can keep it!