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Let's talk about the advantages first. Great imagination. Various mythological terms based on scientific explanations are also very interesting. The Immortal Cyber ​​​​fully illustrates that the end of science is theology. Likewise, the end of theology is science. The story structure is okay. Nothing contradictory or confusing. Disadvantages The biggest disadvantage is that the author likes to talk nonsense. Maybe it was to make the words I imagined more clear, so I had to explain a paragraph for a long time. Secondly, the storyline is a bit confusing. It feels like a bit of chaos. Compared with the traditional story, it is a little polished and upgraded. The author wanted to cram in too many things at once, causing the enemy levels to jump quite quickly. Therefore no conflicts were arranged. Obviously the protagonist has solved the biggest problem, but it feels like the protagonist hasn't done much. The effect is not obvious. Readers don't have a strong sense of immersion. What worries me the most is that the starting point of Chapter 1 is set too high. There is no bright main line to draw. The theme and concept setting are not obvious. People can't help but worry that it will collapse later. After all, the information that humans can understand is concentrated on this planet. The protagonist is now a planet-level combat power. If the protagonist wants to upgrade in the future, he can only describe it from a mysterious and mysterious perspective. This is already how ordinary authors write in the later stages. If the character destroys the galaxy at every turn, it will make everyone feel less real. If the plot connection is not adjusted later, it will be extremely easy for the writing to collapse. I hope the author can work hard!

This is the most ambitious book with a world view I have ever read Similar to Panwang Zhengdao

It feels okay. The protagonist, as a remnant of the previous era, wants to continue the Taoism through preaching and save the world. This book turns theology into science fiction, which is very interesting.

The introduction smells like Joe, I'm afraid it's cloudy 😏

Only then did I realize that the heaven in the novel is by no means an institution, but a community of destiny with its own characteristics. If China is an illusory and immature community of destiny based on the fuzzy future of the small earth, then this heaven is a purely substantial community of destiny. In this context, the protagonist Our Lady is a symbol of the community, almost equivalent to a national symbol made in China Especially because she has been branded by the Heavenly Soldiers for almost a lifetime and is almost impossible to change. This kind of Holy Mother deserves it

It smells a bit like Madonna's White Lotus.

The definition of mutual support between immortals and civilization is really touching.

I really don't understand. Does this world depend on age? Isn't it about ability? When your ability reaches the point where you are not of the same generation, you become a student. Others are high officials and you are a student. Do you think this is good? The Chinese people are still unable to catch up in scientific research. It's just that there are too many people like you. Geniuses are not given to professors and academicians. If you think they are young and need to learn more, who would want to stay with you?

I like you very much, this is the modern cultivation of immortality.

After reading the first volume, this novel gave me a surprise. I hope that the following chapters can maintain this kind of imagination. I saw this novel in the daily guide. When I saw the name and introduction, I felt that it was another boring invincible novel, because too many novels are simply Long Aotian-style invincible. Then this novel appeared a few times in my introduction, and I got annoyed at that time, so I wanted to read two chapters and then come out and talk about how rubbish it is. I didn't expect Chuezi to be a science fiction cultivator. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I found that he actually had a good idea. It wasn't just a surprise at the beginning, but then it just became a bland show-off. If Dr. Chen's novel has a medium story, but a wide range of imagination, the whole novel is supported by imagination; then this novel has a smooth story, a medium imagination, and a good story with imagination and depth.

It's a pity that a general will return to Dongchang from now on.

At first glance, how did the immortal god who could compress the galaxy be severely injured by a gamma ray burst? Was the Cretaceous dinosaur demon god exterminated by a mere meteorite? Isn't it already fishing through the center of the earth? Is it because the author's setting was out of his mind? 😅

The setting is very satisfying, but one thing is that the latest realm has been updated to this extent. The protagonist's predecessor was just a heavenly soldier, and it is not easy to write about it later. The heavenly soldiers are already so powerful. What realm does the boss want? Maybe I lack personal knowledge and can't think of it, but I feel it will be a problem later on.

The descriptions of the five major gods in Ziezi are very impressive. In fact, their scope of influence is only the Milky Way (not weak in fact), but compared to the giant attractor, they are shattered by a single touch. Then the protagonist is a one-day soldier. According to the introduction, it is an invincible novel. It is estimated that when he died in the tower, he had something to do with Ju Yinyuan. Otherwise, how could the author make him reasonably invincible?

Can anyone tell me where I can find any connection between the title and the content of this book? It might as well be called "I am a heavenly soldier who preaches after the final tribulation" 🤓

I was confused by your book. What is the character of the protagonist? After cultivating your strength, when you meet someone, you feel that you are not good at that and need to learn, and then you get a lot of teachers. Is this a habitual low self-esteem? Do you feel like you can't stand up and have to bow your head? You directly show your strength and use your strength to overwhelm others? If you want to climb a mountain, you don't go up in one breath, you have to grind on the roadside. Isn't there something wrong with that? A typical person who sees big profits and cherishes his life, sees small profits and forgets his life, reputation is small profits

Someone in the comment area said that the Holy Mother? I have always taken the lead When I went in and saw Good Guys, I suggested reading a chapter first Chapter 45 After reading it, think about it. Is this the White Lotus of the Holy Mother? Isn't this a red flag with a sickle and a hammer head? I really want to blast that person who said the Holy Mother

The prologue feels like "noun stuffing"! A lot of words that look powerful but have nothing to do with it are put together to raise the B-square. Maybe many people like this hazy feeling...

The author is going to be in the army next month. This book is not under supervision. It will take at least three years to finish. So I don't need to read it for now.

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Hey, the author can't write anymore. If you continue to write or open a new book, I will definitely support you. Your imagination is great. If it's difficult to write, then just write slowly.