A Platinum Body

Let's talk about the advantages first. Great imagination. Various mythological terms based on scientific explanations are also very interesting. The Immortal Cyber ​​​​fully illustrates that the end of science is theology. Likewise, the end of theology is science. The story structure is okay. Nothing contradictory or confusing. Disadvantages The biggest disadvantage is that the author likes to talk nonsense. Maybe it was to make the words I imagined more clear, so I had to explain a paragraph for a long time. Secondly, the storyline is a bit confusing. It feels like a bit of chaos. Compared with the traditional story, it is a little polished and upgraded. The author wanted to cram in too many things at once, causing the enemy levels to jump quite quickly. Therefore no conflicts were arranged. Obviously the protagonist has solved the biggest problem, but it feels like the protagonist hasn't done much. The effect is not obvious. Readers don't have a strong sense of immersion. What worries me the most is that the starting point of Chapter 1 is set too high. There is no bright main line to draw. The theme and concept setting are not obvious. People can't help but worry that it will collapse later. After all, the information that humans can understand is concentrated on this planet. The protagonist is now a planet-level combat power. If the protagonist wants to upgrade in the future, he can only describe it from a mysterious and mysterious perspective. This is already how ordinary authors write in the later stages. If the character destroys the galaxy at every turn, it will make everyone feel less real. If the plot connection is not adjusted later, it will be extremely easy for the writing to collapse. I hope the author can work hard!

The introduction smells like Joe, I'm afraid it's cloudy 😏

Only then did I realize that the heaven in the novel is by no means an institution, but a community of destiny with its own characteristics. If China is an illusory and immature community of destiny based on the fuzzy future of the small earth, then this heaven is a purely substantial community of destiny. In this context, the protagonist Our Lady is a symbol of the community, almost equivalent to a national symbol made in China Especially because she has been branded by the Heavenly Soldiers for almost a lifetime and is almost impossible to change. This kind of Holy Mother deserves it

It smells a bit like Madonna's White Lotus.

The definition of mutual support between immortals and civilization is really touching.

I really don't understand. Does this world depend on age? Isn't it about ability? When your ability reaches the point where you are not of the same generation, you become a student. Others are high officials and you are a student. Do you think this is good? The Chinese people are still unable to catch up in scientific research. It's just that there are too many people like you. Geniuses are not given to professors and academicians. If you think they are young and need to learn more, who would want to stay with you?

I like you very much, this is the modern cultivation of immortality.

After reading the first volume, this novel gave me a surprise. I hope that the following chapters can maintain this kind of imagination. I saw this novel in the daily guide. When I saw the name and introduction, I felt that it was another boring invincible novel, because too many novels are simply Long Aotian-style invincible. Then this novel appeared a few times in my introduction, and I got annoyed at that time, so I wanted to read two chapters and then come out and talk about how rubbish it is. I didn't expect Chuezi to be a science fiction cultivator. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I found that he actually had a good idea. It wasn't just a surprise at the beginning, but then it just became a bland show-off. If Dr. Chen's novel has a medium story, but a wide range of imagination, the whole novel is supported by imagination; then this novel has a smooth story, a medium imagination, and a good story with imagination and depth.

It's a pity that a general will return to Dongchang from now on.

At first glance, how did the immortal god who could compress the galaxy be severely injured by a gamma ray burst? Was the Cretaceous dinosaur demon god exterminated by a mere meteorite? Isn't it already fishing through the center of the earth? Is it because the author's setting was out of his mind? 😅