The Star God Who Travels Across All Realms

First of all, your introduction is illogical. The Star Gods are pure soul creatures of advanced civilizations and do not have the ability to create the world. The earth is just the successful transformation of many Star Gods. Of course, it is only transformation but not creation. Secondly, your paragraph looks uncomfortable. I suggest you change it. There are also details that need to be corrected, such as punctuation marks. Finally, you posted this chapter before you finished writing it. This is very bad. Looking at you, you should be a newbie, but I still want to support you. Come on, I hope you will continue to do more. Every aspect is relatively immature. You should read more, practice, and hone your writing skills before publishing. By the way, I would like to recommend my own book "Looking for Star God II". 😁😁😁