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I have read this book before, and it was recommended again just now. I read the comments first, and many people criticized it, so I thought, with so many people criticizing me, I wanted to see how bad it is But after I clicked in and looked at the front part, I felt it was too familiar. I have read this book, read the next chapter, and persisted until 2 Chapter 7, I finally remembered the reason why I gave up the book in the first place The author of this book has good intentions. It can be seen that he is imitating the writing method of the author (just give me the most similar one) In fact, this is not a bad thing. It shows that he is willing to imitate. At least he is really studying and writing a good book, but the shortcomings are also obvious, that is, the writing is not enough The substitution of the first few chapters is actually okay, but the transition is a bit stiff and has a bit of a novice atmosphere, but it is still readable It can be used as a way to kill time during the book shortage. Category C substitute (personal classification abcde five levels) This kind of book is quite satisfactory, but it is easy to fall into Category D. After reading it, I also found some obvious problems, such as the description of the fight is not detailed enough, the plot is slightly blunt, and the foreshadowing is not well buried. It is so deep that it can only appear in vernacular, and there is no sense of surprise But it is not without its good aspects. The author gradually got better in the later period, and his writing style improved slightly, but there are also some places where the description is extremely poisonous, too routine, and silly 😅. In the next chapter, it is again The normal writing style made me feel like a pig took a dip in the roller coaster, and the roller coaster spun around too fast and landed on my head Only when I got off the car did I realize, oh, it turned out to be just Coke. said Having said so much, the summary is actually very simple. You can read the book, but I don't recommend recommending it to others. This book is more about the author testing the waters and practicing his writing. Maybe the writing style will be better in the later period, but the persuasion in the early and middle stages has determined that the status of this book will not be high I hope the author will continue to work hard and be able to write in this book. I have developed my own good writing style in this book. If it improves, I will order all of your next book As for this one, I decided to test the water by ordering half of it first, and then I will consider ordering it in full after seeing your writing style in the future. After all, after the grain and grass have been eaten up, it is not unpalatable to eat the grain and weeds that grow together and become inseparable.

Too little, not enough! ! !

Author, your title is obviously a cool article, but when I look at the content, I think it is half fantasy system and half horror novel (actually, there are more people who are afraid of noon)

My wife-to-be died at the beginning. . . Moreover, the title of the book seems to be very impressive, but when I look inside, I can only say that it is an ordinary system. But I don't see much. If you think you can, you can see if it suits your taste.

I think this novel is okay. I hope the author will write more, and I will reward you when you finish.

I think it will be difficult to keep it exclusive at this time, but it may be possible to share it with other forces.

I don't understand. You can catch bullets with your bare hands. How fast do you have to react? It actually gives people a chance to shoot when they are close.

I don't understand why I got a 404. It's strange. There's nothing prohibited.

Although it is well written, many people are envious, jealous, and hateful. More than 1,000 old readers passed by. But it is a pity that there are so many investors, and the real number of subscriptions is directly proportional. (There is a Chinese saying that goes well, those who watch the excitement are more yes and no more)

There is no level to get out of here, just learn to get out of here. Didn't learn the essence, just a lot of rubbish

Sword Three Saurons was defeated by the protagonist 1: I lost, I humiliated the One Sword Style. 2: Defeated? Yes, you were indeed defeated by me, but I want to ask you, what does it mean to be invincible in a sword style? 1: Use victory to create the belief in invincibility, thereby achieving the true meaning of invincibility. If I lose to you, the road to invincibility will be cut off. 2: No, I don't think so. I thought about it with a normal person's thinking. The true meaning of invincibility should not be so superficial. If the way forward is cut off due to several failures, then the true meaning of invincibility with this sword should actually be changed to the true meaning of smooth wind. After all, success can only be achieved by smooth sailing. 1: You... What do you mean? 2: What I mean is that the true meaning of invincibility should be created with the will to never give up. Losing is not terrible, the terrible thing is losing the belief in defeating this "failure"; of course it is a good thing to keep winning smoothly, but if it is because of a few times When you fail, you lose the courage to move forward. That sword flow is really... Sad 1:... You are right, invincibility does not mean using others' weakness to achieve one's own invincibility. In the past, I could always win because others were weak and I was strong. And now I lose because others are strong and I am weak. It is inevitable to lose to the stronger one because he is stronger than me. And the Yiken style definitely does not rely on bullying to create the true meaning of invincibility! My true intention is fulfilled today! Saurons, a swordsman, please enlighten me! 2: Okay! Giant Bear Liu Tangwen is here! Come and have a fun battle! Ten thousand victories are not enough to get the true meaning, only one defeat will reveal the right path. One sword reveals the true meaning, and then it comes true.                 ——

Isn't that the only way to convince people with force? The river crab mythical beast is so terrifying.

As soon as the protagonist is born, his parents must die first. My talents are astounding from ancient times to the present, and I can do everything. There was a fiancée who came to break off the engagement. The protagonist is unconvinced and bullies the young man into being poor. If you go out to study art, you will definitely have the opportunity. There must be a story about becoming a disciple of someone so-and-so, and being a disciple was jealous of others, and all the senior brothers were dissatisfied. The protagonist is slapped in the face, and the senior sister comes to help. Advise him to be patient for a while, and a chance will come. As magical weapons and magical skills come, so must the magical beasts. Once the magical skill is mastered, the enemy will appear. The two of them are like fire and water, and someone must come to persuade them. The sect held a grand competition and got the top three in revenge. The master invites me to meet you and go out to travel around the world. There are beauties in the world, and beauties have troubles. The protagonist comes to help and the trouble is solved. Then she told her origin, she must be a daughter of aristocratic family. The family then arrives and the beauty must leave. The protagonist wants to find her, but the power gap is too great. The auction house will definitely gain something later. Then find your teammates, who are beautiful women. When you leave the city and change the map, you can get air every second. The beauty is found, and the head of the family comes to test her. There is a strong enemy in the test, and the protagonist has to solve it. After all, the clan members praised me for being so awesome.

The setting that the god will die when the Kingdom of God is destroyed is a failure. If I were a new god and just became a god, I would separate the particle clones that can be separated, one particle at a time, disperse and hide them, and then increase the strength. Why do you want the Kingdom of God? Give yourself a weakness. Without the Kingdom of God, you will not die by relying on the clones. Isn't it good to slowly increase the strength next? In fact, you can change the setting, and the particle clones will all die when the main body dies, but not vice versa. The Kingdom of God can enhance its strength. If it is destroyed, its strength will be greatly damaged, but it will not die. This is better. It feels like the setting of the particle clone leads to the setting of the Kingdom of God. With the clone god, it is difficult to kill, so it gives a weakness setting of the Kingdom of God, but it is unreasonable. Smart people will not want the Kingdom of God at all, but create clones, and then they can be lazy or lazy, as they like.

I'm still reading a new book, why have I lost contact now? What happened to the last book?

The data is too confusing, isn't it? One bone costs more than 10,000, but a complete skeleton costs 60,000? ? Don't be so obvious if you want to overpower the protagonist. Moreover, this is not a data error once or twice. There is a king between gods and ordinary extraordinary people. As a result, the two powers are about the same. I don't want to write it accurately, at least to fool it a little. Now, let's just treat the readers as fools.

6 Monthly passes, is there any extra content?

After reading three chapters, it turns out that this is such a rubbish book. The protagonist is hallucinating at one moment and overthinking at the other. The heroine is dead at the beginning. I don't want the heroine to have such a role. It's also poorly written and trash.

The book itself is an invincible text, and the result is that it is written with the same ink as a classical Chinese text. The updates feel like they are all just for fun, so you can keep reading even if you skip it.

In fact, I just don't understand why the author keeps emphasizing that guns are very powerful. As a result, even the more powerful guns are useless when attacking the enemy. The protagonist has beaten all the enemies, and the protagonist is very afraid of guns. It's an endless loop (just to put it simply, the book is still very interesting).

I don't know when this book was fully ordered. I checked it out yesterday. Then I kept skipping to watch it. All I can say is that this book is really rubbish. Various hydrographies. Various matryoshka dolls. As soon as you level up, you'll immediately meet someone of a higher level. Then upgrade and encounter a higher level. And every time I get beaten up in my hometown. The protagonist will definitely appear last. Infinite loop. Moreover, the description of the realm in the book is also messy. I threw up. It cost me more than 20 yuan.

I feel that the author is just... A bit watery. Although the plot seems to be complete, I still feel it is a bit watery. I skipped many of them directly. I can almost tell what to write next by reading the first hundred or so words. After reading a few more chapters, I can form a complete plot. Well, that's it.

Just plunder one of the four super worlds of Tongjie and leave? Also, in the world where there was a previous feud with the Blood Council, could the author be more rigorous and thoughtful?

Reading cool articles, you can finish it without thinking. After reading this book, I still thought, it's very good, at least I must be mentally retarded! Otherwise, if you pick a random book and read it, you must read it to the end, and you can be persuaded to quit after 10 chapters.

It's getting worse and worse. A world that has just been promoted to the super world can still promote several high-level worlds to the super world. Bad review

To be honest, the theme setting is pretty good. But the story is really hard to describe in one sentence😂. It was quite good at first, but then I felt bored after watching it. Just guess how he will improve when he encounters difficulties, and then defeat the enemy🐶

The previous mage secrets were quite good. This novel is too crudely written. You can read it in Shu Huang. The maps are all broken. There is no lawful camp and no strong relationship with the protagonist. It is too fragmented and has no sense of picture.

The kingdom of God in the novel is destroyed when it is destroyed. It is indeed a failure. It should be seriously injured but life can be saved. The plot of the novel is really too hasty and there is no leisure and the influence of the protagonist on the world after becoming stronger - the pretense value is not enough! It continues to exceed the limit in a short period of time, and then not many people in the world covet its secrets... It's really illogical! The plot can only see continuous escalation and beating enemies, alas :-( I hope the author can improve it in the next novel.

I invested 10,000 principal and it's all over! Why hasn't it been returned to me yet?