Immortal Species

I read Chapter 7 and have withdrawn. Leave a message to future book friends Benevolence is in the eye of the beholder and the wise see wisdom. It only represents my personal opinion The male protagonist is a person with logic problems and the collapse of the three views. Time traveled and possessed a tuberculosis and only had one year left to live. The original body was treated by an old Taoist priest and his life has been extended for four years. Then the protagonist traveled through time and still survived for one year. The old Taoist priest asked for the Millennium Tianshan Snow Lotus to refine the life-extending pill. It can extend one's life and completely cure the protagonist's tuberculosis I haven't given it in the past four years, saying that I can't find it (I didn't explain, I just said it's hard to find, maybe I really can't find it), so the old Taoist priest keeps treating the pig's feet for free Then when the pig's feet saw that he was going to die, he went to the old Taoist priest to see if there was any way. He chatted and learned that the old Taoist priest had a longevity skill. He was 70 years old and couldn't tell that he was so old. Let the protagonist tell his family to pay more attention to Snow Lotus and then ask the old Taoist priest for the immortality skill practiced by the old Taoist priest. Then he wants to use the golden finger to practice it directly to the great success to treat tuberculosis. During this period, there are all kinds of ridicule. If this skill is fake, you will be dead. Normal people can feel Qi after practicing for more than 20 days. The protagonist has already said in Gold Finger that he has learned the Immortality Kung Fu, but he has not started to practice it for a month. He comes over and threatens the old Taoist priest, what is going on with this Qigong? Is it fake? Do I have to take it out ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? I'll help you cure your illness and prolong your life regardless of reward. I'll give you exercises to help you prolong your life. But you're ridiculing, threatening, and asking for secrets? ? ? This is the first time I have seen a protagonist with such crooked views in a novel. Repaying kindness with revenge is natural. The key is that a large number of readers help to clean up the floor. What is said is that the person who is saved is the original character, not the protagonist, so it is normal for the protagonist to repay kindness with revenge. Anyway, I feel that I am as far away from such a person as possible. Dear book friends, please take care of it.

I hope the author will pay more attention to this later. For example, the peak of external skills. Can live 150 years. Practice. East one will be promoted for three months and one year. From west to west, promotion lasts for one year or two. Then upgraded again. Got some longevity money. But what you deduct is deducted. Your deadline is 150 years old. I hope the author will pay attention to this aspect later.

The author listens to your brother-in-law, you are not the person to eat this bowl of rice, quickly find a solid job.

Logic genius, unable to complain, First of all, the protagonist got tuberculosis in ancient times and was basically dead. Then a Taoist priest came to his door and said that he could extend his life, but the condition was that the protagonist's family collected the medicinal materials for refining the life-extending potion. The protagonist did live an extra three to five years. When the protagonist travels back in time and talks to a Taoist priest, and the Taoist priest asks him to help collect medicinal materials, the protagonist thinks that the Taoist priest has ulterior motives? Are you saying that this Taoist priest is deceiving his father? Um? ? ? What's wrong with equivalent exchange? Is it called cheating if someone helps you extend your life? 🙂 What's even more ridiculous is that after the Taoist priest taught the protagonist Qigong and successfully suppressed tuberculosis, the protagonist actually became more convinced that the Taoist priest was an old liar! What did they lie to you about? ? ? Qigong and life-extending medicines were obtained from Taoist priests together. The Taoist priests helped the protagonist to extend his life, and Qigong helped the protagonist suppress terminal illness. Then the protagonist would rather die than believe in the life-extending medicines. It must be said that it is fake and deceptive 🙂🙂 Sorry, it's too poisonous.

It's quite fun to read without thinking, but there are so many loopholes that I couldn't stand it anymore after more than 150 chapters.

I don't want to say more, what I wrote earlier is terrible. Even if you are a *si, especially a *si, if someone saves your life, you will thank her immediately. This is a normal reaction. Successful people will socialize first and then think of other ways or And the protagonist is really , a pure white-eyed wolf, I don't know why you still think you are a liar after hanging your life for five years. Secondly, even if you explain a lot of nonsense in the later stage, it has nothing to do with him. If you don't have health-preserving skills, you are a piece of shit. You will die early and be born early. You don't want to watch it later. Is the plot of abandoning your wife and children very interesting? If you can't write with warmth, why don't you write? It completely breaks away from the plot. The funniest thing is that I was very sick at the beginning, but then I started to show off and slap you in the face in the third chapter. I can always use the same routine, and it was written so well. That's it. I left, and I didn't have to reply whether I liked it or not. I didn't like it, so I left, it's that simple. The last word, I leave this sentence for the newcomers who are reading the book, don't get addicted, that's it.

I haven't seen such a cool novel in a long time. I give it a thumbs up.

Well written, I'm optimistic about you👍👍👍

After more than 100 pictures, I started to be inappropriate again, as if I was joking, disgusting.

I have seen a lot of trolls, and I look at the merits. I see that now, I can say that the author is making continuous progress. This book is just for fun and fun. Zhuxian is not as good as writing, Doupo is not as good as skill, Douluo is not as passionate as Douluo, so don't worry. Potato is just a Doupo classic. Maybe he can accumulate a red book after writing dozens of books. It is fun to read, and it is also an artistic conception to watch the author grow. The pictures are cheerful, at least a little bit. Can you persist like the author until now? There are two reasons why I subscribed and added votes. First, the author's artistic conception is improving, and the organization of the narrative language is better than before, although the progress is slower. Second, being able to persist until now shows that the author is a perseverant person with good perseverance. Finally, if the author sees this post, I suggest that the author focus on digging into the characters and fighting environment during the development of the main plot. If you don't want to add holes in the front, just explain them directly. Add details and materials to the momentum and aura. Add some emotion in chapters three to five. Chapter ten and twenty will solve a hole. The ultimate villain should have foreshadowing in this time period. I look forward to Instinct having one main character and multiple assistants, running multiple lines together, and a real red book An old reader who has no time to write a story, personal opinion, don't like it if you don't like it.

Is this plain water? White and watery. I thought that such a name would have something to do with IQ. In fact, after reading hundreds of chapters, the setting is very outrageous. I have only heard that practicing hard kung fu will leave behind hidden injuries and shorten your lifespan, but the article said that it can increase your lifespan and greatly increase your endurance. This is obviously the effect of practicing internal kung fu. As a result, practicing internal strength only increases strength and strengthens the body. It can cure lung diseases, but it cannot increase life span. . . And some of the psychological activities and behaviors of the protagonist reminded me of the assembly line fantasy novels I read in junior high school. The writing style is very retro😒😒. Forget it, the other chapter is only about ten pages. Sometimes half of it is a panel describing the system. There are only a few martial arts. You have to read the panel every time you practice. It is really like the water god. . .

This is because I think everyone has the same IQ as the protagonist, making us book friends look like fools. 🔪🔪🔪🔪🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨😆😆😆😆

This book gets more and more ink as I write it, and does the author always treat the protagonist as a mentally retarded person? The protagonist has already fought against the master (the king, the god and the demon), and the god and demon emperor, but he still doesn't know his own strength? The protagonist is mentally retarded when he arrives in the bright world. He has always been weak. He has only been an adult despite the short training time. When the author writes this, I personally feel that you can cut it off and stop writing it.

If you practice one foreign skill, it will be more difficult to practice another one? What is the principle? Shouldn't it be simpler? It's like it's more difficult for you to use teacher's packing after you know how to push a cart. It's simply intellectual. In a novel, logic is the most important. Everything without logic is poisonous. Many authors don't reflect on their own problems and always think about soaring into the sky 😵

I finished reading it in less than five minutes. I'm going to store it. After a month or two, I should be able to finish it.

I have read several books written by this author. The first ones are okay, but the later ones are basically upgrading and killing monsters. The stories in the second part are too uninteresting. It's basically a copy and paste of the previous chapter, just with a different name. The recommended level is food and grass level.

The ending is not good; the origin of the superpower is not explained clearly!

There are too many people writing about this, but yours was blocked because you didn't spend money to gain connections. The author is still popular, so it is possible that some people are suppressing the author who can become a god.

Read the whole book. Overall it's okay. It's just that the style changes too much between the early and late stages. The previous part is pretty good. The protagonist keeps practicing for longevity, doesn't show off, and is very accurate in positioning his own strength and that of others. In the later stage, the protagonist completely acted like a show-off, and the protagonist actually had a confused expression on his face. I was really worried about the protagonist's IQ. The protagonist is very simple to practice one step at a time, he can master the exercises after practicing them, and he even teaches others. Why doesn't he think that he relies on plug-ins to practice, and even with so many lifespans using plug-ins, he still has the nerve to say it's simple. If you have the ability, you can announce your own powers and see if you dare to say that cultivation is simple.

It's the change in the protagonist's mentality when he upgrades to the Tao realm. He breaks down the so-called invincibility barrier and looks directly into his heart. From the beginning, the protagonist is just afraid of death.

Where is your third update? Two more shifts and I still take it off

Although there are some flaws, it still looks good

The five monthly votes have been cast, and the six recommendation votes have been cast, but they are not for Boss Yue! ! ! !

The book is good, but updates are too slow. Not as fast as it was in the beginning. Can you give me some semen?

I read a total of three books by Lao Yue. The mysteries of the mage, the genetic martial arts, and the seed of immortality. Lao Yue's book made me feel like he was super good in the early stage, but fell apart later on... I started to change maps in a routine way. Actually, Lao Yue's book is quite enjoyable to read. But I still hope that Lao Yue can improve in this regard in the later stage. For example, I personally feel that my favorite part is not the beginning, but the part in the totem world. That part is really fun to watch. Actually, I'm a little embarrassed to say that, speaking from personal taste, I think it would be extremely cool if Lao Yue's Seed of Immortality were replaced with a map in the form of the Mysterious Journey book. Just a personal opinion. I hope Lao Yue can continue to make progress in the future. If the problems in the later stage can be improved, I think it shouldn't be a problem for the master. Lao Yue should stick to refreshing novels. I have been reading novels for ten years (a full ten years). Now I occasionally read some meaningful ones, but I still read mostly refreshing novels. After all, life is hard. I wish Lao Yue can become a god in his next book.

I couldn't stand the first few pictures, the main character was too blind. Even though he was a charlatan, he at least gave him another five years of life and taught the protagonist his own skills. But the protagonist sounds like an old guy and a liar. Even if someone saves the protagonist just because of the exchange of interests, it is a life-saving grace. This is just like when you go to the hospital to see a doctor for cancer, and the doctor gives you chemotherapy for five years. It is normal for the hospital to charge you money, but in the end you are not grateful and still scold him.

Nowadays, readers have read enough novels in which the protagonist deliberately hides his strength, but there are still so many authors who are going against the wind. I have to congratulate them. Sooner or later, the headwind will kill them! If you want to be popular, you have to write a book like this. Since I have shown my strength, I don't have to pretend to be B. Pretending is enough, and everyone is smart, which is very good!

It's really good. I'll give you a reward of 10,000 points, Lao Yue! !

Monthly ticket,,, recommended ticket, give it a boost 🌹🌹🌹🌹

At the beginning, a Taoist priest helped him extend his life for two years, and then the protagonist asked the Taoist priest for a book of exercises. Turning the remaining life span into nine years. Finally, the protagonist comes to the conclusion that the Taoist priest is a liar. Lie to him here.