I Can Go Back in Time and Save You

I stopped commenting when I saw the two-chapter section about a little girl acting that was a waste of time... It's obviously a good setting, and the protagonist's actions are also very coquettish, which should be double the joy. Why do I feel uncomfortable watching it... 😓 I feel that the biggest problem is that the characters in the novel are not three-dimensional enough... Especially a few supporting girls who forcefully appear in the scene, and the interaction with the protagonist is like an unscripted plot with a low word count, and is not as useful as Tian Gou, a cross-dressing boss. Personally, I feel that the description of the protagonist's mentality is a bit abrupt. Suddenly he says that he is scolded when he saves people, and he always feels depressed. Suddenly he says that the protagonist will be psychologically shocked when someone dies in front of him... This kind of feeling is like creating a character by relying only on adjectives. Without enough plot support, it feels a bit out of place. I don't know what happens next. Is the author getting better and better as he writes?

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What a miserable school

Very nice

This novel is very strange. After reading more than ten chapters, I have no desire to read it. It is not watery, and the plot is not without explosive points. However, it is in a Schrödinger state of interesting and uninteresting superpositions. It makes people feel "Ah, the setting of this novel is so novel", and then it is gone. After thinking hard, I finally have a little idea. The key is that the character of the protagonist is not likable and full of life. I understand what kind of male protagonist the author wants to create, a so-called "no desire and no desire" person who takes everything indifferently after experiencing countless time loops and death loops. But the problem is that if the male protagonist does not have a lasting core driving force to promote the plot, he will look good. If you are forced to advance the plot, the reader will seem very tired (the reader will be very excited during the key plot, but the key characters in the book are neither hurry nor slow, nor sad nor happy nor worried, so the reader has the feeling that I am running hard, you are walking, and I am actually slower than you, which is very interesting). In fact, there is no such character. To support such a character, there must be a supporting role who takes the initiative. Most people will not actively use their brains when reading online novels. The author has to lead readers to use their brains through words. There can be people who are not sad, happy, worried, fearful, and unhurried, but just like Sherlock Holmes needs a Watson. If the reader is anxious, even if the emperor is not anxious, there must be a eunuch to accompany the reader. The urgency should not be blind or hysterical, but the urgency should be reasonable, measured, and the timing is crucial. When the plot develops to the point where the reader becomes anxious, the character becomes anxious, and must be anxious with feedback, otherwise it will give people the feeling of being blindly anxious, incompetent and anxious. Eighteen chapters, there is no such permanent supporting role, and there is no feedback. Imagine a scenario. A mystery story with clever settings and impeccable plot logic. The reader's curiosity and mentality are completely aroused by the story. In this story, the great Sherlock Holmes was reluctantly forced to go to the scene of the crime by Sheriff Lestrade. Although he had no initiative, he once again understood everything clearly. With an expression on his face that said, "I already know the truth, so boring," he effortlessly brought the criminal to justice. Excited Watson: "Oh, my dear Holmes, how did you discover the truth? What is the criminal's method, can you tell me?" Excited reader: "Wow, Holmes is so awesome, how did he find out? What is the method?" A few words never Sherlock Holmes, who was neither happy nor worried, fearless and unhurried, walked out and said, "It's too simple and boring. I have handled this case countless times. I have no obligation or interest to tell you about it. Just guess for yourself." That's how I felt when I read this novel. If reading is a dialogue between the reader and the author, then the author is very thoughtful and the language is very appropriate. But he chatted to death. Bind guessing that someone said, "Don't read if you don't like it. It's so disgusting with so many jabbering words." I wish you will encounter Taobao customer service like you.

Chapter 6, I read it... Even if the setting is the protagonist's secret and others can't tell it, it will turn into nonsense, but a person who hates eating dog meat turns into a person who eats dog meat with tears? What does it mean? Punishment for manipulating thoughts? And I don't like the character of the protagonist. These are my personal opinions. If you don't like it, don't comment 🙂

I got it from a pirated copy (I have given a reward of 1,000 coins to save my life), I hope the author can keep writing 😊

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When the author comes on the shelves, I will definitely order all of them. Jesus can't keep me even if I say so.

After seeing you say no to the harem, I really want to hit you. It's okay if you don't tell me. But once you tell me, I can't stand it anymore.

Let's pass it on(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

Now I really hate the appearance of characters like Nian Xiaoyu in novels.

It's okay, but the memes appear too frequently and I'm tired of aesthetics. Also, there are too many negative energy stories happening to the protagonist, which makes me feel uncomfortable. It would be great if every time I rescue someone, it ends with a heart-warming and positive story. In this case, the book will become popular, and it may be picked up by Tencent Video and adapted into web dramas and animations.

Isn't that a pig's trotter character? After Pigfoot got rich, Green Tea's ex-girlfriend came back. Pigfoot not only forgave her for cuckolding her before, but also treated her well. Thank you, my eyes are burning.

We went on a blind date just after the college entrance examination. The girl was brought here by her father, which was a bit of a drama.

I watched an anime today, The Street I Am Not Only, and found that the setting is very similar to this novel.

If the protagonist works in a hospital. . . How long is this life? . .

I can't stand this kind of people who are obviously rich but live in slums.

The dog meat plot is really disgusting 😅

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