Soccer: One Hand Shrouds the Sky

I persisted for 173 chapters and quit. Summarize the major points that repel me. The first is the collapse of the character. 1. The character design given to the protagonist in the first few chapters is hardworking + ambitious, with crazy hobbies and practice. As a result, during the offseason of the first season, I could even play for three months in the summer to pick up girls without any training. 2. The protagonist is ambitious and is still grateful despite being deliberately put on the bench by the head coach? 3. It's actually okay to join a Korean female artist, but when she has a vacation, she flies to both Korea and Europe. Please check how many hours the flight from Europe to Korea takes. It takes more than 20 minutes to go back and forth. How do you behave like a player who is competing for the main force in the rising period? Secondly, the supporting characters are empty. 1. What does a new agent do? Has she helped the protagonist negotiate a contract? As an agent, has she helped the protagonist plan a career path? During the transfer period, did you use your own resources (the character is the daughter of the predator Mendes) to increase the protagonist's worth? 2. What are the protagonist's teammates doing? I read Chapter 173, but I didn't see a few chapters that talked about the communication between the protagonist and his teammates. During this period, it was written that a teammate planned to pursue the protagonist's agent, but was tricked by the agent. Then this teammate actually had no follow-up? Please, I spent a lot of time writing before that this is a genius, "Cristiano Ronaldo II". Secondly, the rhythm is messed up. 1. The protagonist spends more time picking up girls in Korea than on the court. Why not change the name to "Korean Entertainment: I am a Goalkeeper in Europe". Finally, it's a matter of personal senses. I can accept writing about Korean entertainment, and I also pursue entertainment articles. However, the domestic description in the article is that the amount of money earned from accepting various commercials is reported in one lump sum, while the Korean description is that of appearing in variety shows, engaging in ambiguity, and being a licking dog. Is the romantic protagonist just a fake stick who plays football in Europe and uses the country as a cash machine to take sponsor money and lick it in Korea? ?

It's okay to go to South Korea as a goalkeeper, but he can play in the five major leagues. Delaying your writing of Korean entertainment articles

It's almost impossible to watch if it contains Korean entertainment. Don't mess with the dirty entertainment industry, let alone Korea. Those who abandon books will start walking away.

Let's write more about Korean entertainment, please. 😁

Korean Entertainment's I Want to Be a Bangzi, the whole story pretends to be a grandson licking the stick, and works tirelessly towards the goal of becoming a stickman in the end.

The author's protagonist is no different from a Korean star. He works in Europe and returns to Korea during the offseason. He only goes to China to make money and shoot commercials.

I was wondering, isn't writing books just to make money? Now I dare to say that as long as Korean entertainment is removed, the performance of this book will definitely be much better than it is now.

There are a few authors at Qidian who refuse to repent. They knew that adding Korean entertainment would lead to poor results and never changed.

Really, author, if you like the Korean entertainment industry, writing about Korean entertainment may be more suitable for you, but it is really hard to accept adding such a thing to a football article. If you find a European and American model or even a domestic female star, it may be better than the Korean one.

Well, in chapter 55, I haven't played a few games, and a guy who plays in Europe wants to be with a Korean. Author, do you want to transfer to the Korean league?