Shi Ji Zhonghua Ichiban

To be honest, I think this book was written by two people. When I wrote about the dark cooking world at the beginning, the protagonist was not so crazy, so I was polite. Opening a store is not so crazy. After Yuanyue, the protagonist Guangfeng is boundless. It feels like he is just crazy for the sake of being crazy, without any courtesy, and openly flirting with married women. Such a disgusting person. I really feel that Pig's Knuckle's personality is like a brat. His last life was in vain, he has no basic etiquette, and he doesn't know how to speak. There is a section where asking someone to enter Yuanyue is like you owe me money. It's as if you're being dragged down by 2,580,000 yuan. I'm the commander-in-chief and I'll tell you to get out of here. You've never experienced a beating from society, right? Was your last life in vain? Or was he too crazy and beaten to death in his last life? This protagonist's character is toxic.

The writing is pretty good, but it's too little. Come on, it'll be better (ง •̀_•́)ง

You can add some detailed descriptions, expressions, body movements, psychology and scene descriptions, and even characters from other animations can also make guest appearances in life stories. If you don't understand, I suggest you check out works such as "Rebirth of Japan as a God of Cooking", "Shokuji: The Fake Master", and "Shokuji: The Super Cooking Master". Without ups and downs of the plot and descriptions from various angles, it is difficult to write a good-looking novel.

Is it because I have read this book recommended to me by the fake Little Master? But it's not very pretty

If you don't know how to write plots, you can try something funny. Check out Shigan: The Unparalleled Dragon Chef next door. It will be much smoother than you think!

Keep writing in your own style, it's great! !

It is recommended that the slow-burning format is better. For example, some daily plots, psychology and other plots can be described in more detail. If you don't understand, I suggest you watch "Rebirth of Japan as a God of Cooking", "Shogun: The Super Cooking Master", etc.

A big flaw in the third chapter is that the protagonist stares at the female character's breasts like a string, and his eyes light up, and the protagonist's image suddenly becomes obscene and low-key.

I didn't expect that all the book friends would be so disgusted with Totsuki's enrollment in the end, but I promise that I won't follow the classes like those students, thank you! ! !

Attention everyone! When I write this admission, I don't really ask Teacher Yueyue to teach the protagonist. I will not know the strength of the protagonist in my own novel. I just want to better promote the development of the plot, and why not choose a teacher? The protagonist is a good cook, but he will never be a good teacher! ! I'm very sorry if it causes any trouble to you, I'm sorry! I have carefully read every suggestion you have. .

This is to scare the Japanese cooks to death. 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄

There are too many poisonous points, and the character of the first protagonist is not likeable. So far, when the protagonist sees a female character, he basically goes up to tease her, but the female character's relatives and friends don't react at all. In real life, such people are basically sent to the police station. The second thing is that the dishes in the book are basically copied from Little Master. When I started writing the book, I knew Magic Mapo. Chapter 50 or 60 passed and it was still Magic Mapo. I only copied animations. Why should I read your novel? The third point is that the villain is too superficial... To sum up, this book is not suitable for old bookworms. Newbies who have just started reading online books may like it. But it doesn't deserve a recommendation at all.

I just saw 37 pictures and let me tell you what I think is the poisonous point of this book. First of all, the character of the pig's feet feels like a weak pig-faced licking dog who was slapped by Erina and did nothing. Then when he sees a beautiful woman, he looks like a pig. See the rest for yourself. Then I don't know what the point of opening a restaurant is. Do you have a mission for affordable restaurants? I am so busy that I don't have much income. Anyway, I feel very frustrated.

The character of the protagonist is simply too unpleasant. Not to mention obscene, he is also extremely disgusting. It doesn't matter that he is a waste who only relies on the system. However, he also has an inexplicable arrogance. He looks down on this and looks down on that. All he can say is, what the hell.

Shoji + Zhonghua? Has anyone seen Shoji: The Fake Little Master?

It's really beautiful, but updating is always a big problem. It's updated once a day.

Help: Can anyone help me change the cover of my novel? Some people always think of my novel as a Kamen Rider. Please help!

Just stop calling it China Ichiban. Rename it to Shokugeki no Soma 2. The whole story will follow the main storyline of Shokugeki. Just call the pig's trotters Yukihira Xia Tian.

I originally planned to keep it, but I really didn't have the time to look at it, so I looked at it first. Although the introduction is well written, I did not read the so-called fusion of the two worlds of the dark cooking world and the Shokuki world. It is too abrupt to directly write that the dark cooking world wants to occupy the Shokuki world. And as the boss-level boss in the world of Shokuki, is Nakiri Senzaemon too weak? After writing this, the whole system collapsed.

It's a bit poisonous and I can't resist anymore. The main character is a pig brother. He licks a dog and licks Yuanyue to death. He coughs and coughs when he sees a touch of white. He's a 25-year-old adult. He's still an innocent little virgin. He blushes and retreats out of style.

From reading the introduction, I feel that the author's creativity is quite good, but it is still too little now. I will read it again after I gain some weight. Come on, author! Don't let me die with another book 😭 It's so difficult to find a good Shoji fanfic…

After reading more than seventy chapters, I really can't stop reading. There are two problems. The first one is that I took the Yukihira route and didn't have anything of my own. The next summer, this person clearly remembered the original plot and went to the bathroom to watch Tadokoro take a bath, and became intimate with many female characters. The background was modern but not ancient, and he played the Alexandre Dumas route, which was disgusting. The most disgusting game was when he molested Leonora Nakiri, a married woman, and her daughter and father-in-law were there. I read Shokuki novels, not pornographic novels. The author, tell me, you are a pervert. The character he created, Xia Tian, ​​is arrogant and has a vulgar personality. As a villain, he is very successful and makes people sick and disgusted at first glance. You can tell whether this novel is good or not by reading and subscribing.

I found that the protagonist's style suddenly changed when he saw a woman, and he turned into a wretched man. He also engaged in some awkward chatting... I wanted to see a style like that of the Little Master, but you are disappointed.

A top chef might as well enter as a teacher if he goes to school. Forget it, this book is not suitable for me, I say goodbye and keep working hard!

Are you writing about Shiji? It feels like the protagonist is completely relying on the system to repeat the plot of the little master! Then what's the point of arranging the food halberd? My cooking skills are totally inadequate! There's no point in pretending to be B unilaterally

In fact, I think there is absolutely no need for the protagonist to participate in the Shokuki World's Pastry King Competition. There are two reasons. First, the cooking skills of the Chinese chef completely overwhelm Shokuge World. Second, for a chef whose cooking skills are at the top of the Shokuge World, is there any point in participating in the competition? Moreover, the power of the world of Shokugeki is simply too small. The author may have wanted the protagonist to get closer to the characters and life in the world of Shokugeki, but instead he neglected to mention that the strong never take sides with the weak. After participating in the Pastry King Competition, the character of the protagonist who was originally created by the author to fight against the dark cooking world suddenly collapsed, leaving no mystery at all. Seeing this, my mood for subscribing has been halved.

Am I the only one who doesn't like Erina?

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The protagonist has a bad personality and is completely an evolved version of Chinese Ichiban Shiro. The content of the work has nothing of his own, and the food he makes is all copied. Also, the Golden Ratio Shaomai lost to the Universe Big Shaomai. Your Golden Ratio can tie with the Four Gods Steamed Buns. This is not as good as this. Let's just watch the original works of Chukka Ichiban and Shokuki again. Since the beginning is strong, Shin Totsuki can choose to teach others. When you enter, you compete with various people and show off, and then follow the plot, introduce dark cuisine and belittle Totsuki, and then continue to show off. Then because Yue Tianjian planned to leave Toyue, I didn't read it later, but I knew the chapter name and still hung out in Toyue. While I looked down on Toyue, I couldn't live without those plots, otherwise I wouldn't have written it, right? I read other comments that only the protagonist Dark can do the glowing, right? Then you still have to do it? If it involves Totsuki and belittles Totsuki, then don't write Totsuki's plot, just go to war with the dark cuisine, and the cosmic shaomai in the Chinese version. I saw how to make that kind of thing, how dare you beat Sishen Seafood, it's almost pure meat, just different parts. In Totsuki High, there are also those female characters who are attracted to the protagonist. There are all kinds of growth in Shokugeki. You almost directly amplify the dose of the medicine and inject it directly, right? Without guidance, you just rely on talking dirty, being lustful, and cooking like Shiro to attract people.

I originally thought it was a behind-the-scenes flow, manipulating the dark cooking world to compete in the arena, but it turned out to be a show-off style. It's okay, but there are too few plots in the dark cooking world.