This Is My Heaven

I took a rough look at it (I didn't finish two chapters), and it turns out that the setting is a skin-picking system. No hair is given, only tasks. You have to experience the two worlds by yourself and the protagonist group. The third Jackie Chan adventure speeds up the plot. After sealing the Holy Lord, he directly recruited his father, Xiao Yu, to become a dragon. Now he is in Marvel. Are you planning to take the Guangzhengwei route?

Take others with you through the world. Junk novels

This Xiaoyu is really, at best, lively and active, at worst, uneducated.

Daily poisoning, well-deserved...

Scratch your head, scratch your head, scratch your head! I still don't understand the logic of the protagonist's behavior, but the influence... Is forced to interact and is forced to be inserted into the plot. In fan fiction, I can only say that this novel can only be rated as third-rate. In the plot of Iron Man 1, apart from setting up the character of a scientific wizard and pretending to be cool, it doesn't matter whether there is this protagonist or not at all. The same goes for participating in Kama Taj, wearing a demon vest and going to fight with Gu Yi? What's the point? Tell Gu Yi to know that the protagonist is a big boss? The plot of Iron Man 2 is the same. The protagonist has such a deep relationship with Tony that he just watches the plot develop and just follows the plot. There is no new plot in the fanfic, it's just a piece of shit. Even the Jackie Chan trio who traveled through time, their role was not reflected. Apart from helping the protagonist and having more reasonable contact with other plot characters, their own charm is not reflected. It is a failure to stick to the plot. The protagonist group has such big butterfly wings and can start a new plot. You don't have to look for things yourself, you can come to the protagonist group for things. The plot before the reunion can also be briefly mentioned. Think about the Battle of New York, when Xiaoyu stormed in with a talisman and a group of elementary school students, how exciting it was. Dad took the dried gecko and puffer fish and killed everyone in Kama Taj. It was so exciting. Jackie Chan is flexible in his positioning and can open at 55 with anyone. How is it better than Captain America? The protagonist is dressed in a magical costume and asks who else is there? Aren't these more interesting than trying to show off in the plot?

From the perspective of daily poisoning, this book is indeed a bit poisonous and worth it, but I'd better give it up.

Very nice, I hope the author can be faster😘😘😘

The writing is better, the writing style is also better

Also, the Black Shadow Corps should be integrated and not turned into ninjas. It would also be good to merge them into one that can be changed. It is best to convert the abilities into your own.

I don't know why I take NPC through time travel.

Recently, the protagonists are called Li Ang, Bai Ye, Russell and so on 🙂

Is the protagonist physically traveling through time? It's normal to take people through time travel. Many novels take people through time travel.

I feel like the previous one was better, about fighting wits and courage with the Holy Lord. This one is indeed a bit poisonous and not as classic as the previous one.

Came in by name. I thought this name was an article about the creation of the heavens. Who knows what the hell this is?