The Imperial College’s Little Chef

The author's language is so poor that he writes like a primary school student. After reading more than 180 chapters, the plot is probably about ten chapters away. The food is not attractive at all. I feel like I am reading an ancient cookbook 🙂 Speechless.

The article is a bit outrageous. . . The heroine's golden finger is good, but it exposes too much. She almost keeps adding things that are not originally available in the kitchen, and some of them are very expensive. . . This can only rely on the people you meet now to be kind and have good character. . . If I still use it for making big pot meals in the future, how can I explain the source of so many? Moreover, it is outrageous for an orphan girl to have so many good things. If she doesn't keep them all, she will be targeted by powerful people. This is the first time I've seen Goldfinger used so openly. . .

There are a lot of repeated sentences and vocabulary, as if to emphasize that reading is a bit tiring. When making spicy and sour potato noodles, it is always spicy and delicious, but there is a new word at the end, spicy and sour, but it looks the same. When it comes to desserts, it is sweet, sweet, sweet, and the white tofu pot.

You have to read this book without thinking

Still want to make some comments. 1. There is really no need to use the same adjective so many times. For example, in the previous chapters, I have said it many times to describe the heroine's ethereal voice. Fortunately, I finally stopped mentioning it later. 2. Many descriptions, including psychological activities, really don't need to be detailed, and there are many similar descriptions that seem to have no freshness and just want to turn the page. 3. Although it is a food article, the way of describing food is relatively simple. It mainly focuses on a person who has never eaten it before, and the dimensionality reduction attack of the time traveler. Perhaps the author can refer to the way of writing about food in other popular food articles to write a more fascinating food part. I don't know if the author's idea changed in the middle or something, but the setting at the beginning was quite interesting. The heroine traveled to the girl in the book whose biological mother's identity was somewhat doubtful, and her parents were no longer there. She defected to the house of her uncle who was an official in the Imperial College, and there was also the original male protagonist in the book who was eyeing her... Then once Golden Finger opened, the original male protagonist of the novel, and the villain that the female protagonist was most worried about basically lived in the mouths of all the supporting characters. The next step is to use the advantages of the time traveler to create various things, get promoted to a higher position, and fall in love. The next step may be to marry the royal family, reveal the mysterious identity, and reach the pinnacle of life? It feels like the original novel is no longer important. In fact, I didn't work as a cook in the Imperial College for long. It was mainly just a springboard for the beginning of the story? I don't know how the author positioned this article. Is it a casual daily food article interspersed with the main plot, or something else? I'm not very interested in reading the last dozen or so chapters, so I'll save them so that I can follow the plot except for the repetitive descriptions... I sincerely suggest the author to simplify it a bit. If there are too many similar scenes or even the same adjectives, I really don't want to read them.

This is a sweet and soft novel. Before the evil character has a chance to dance a few more times, he is paired up with the powerful characters in the protagonist group. The protagonist, the little girl, has a gentle and intelligent personality. She cooks good food. The lives of her family and friends have become better because of her presence. The important thing is that everyone has a good mouth and there are no inexplicable misunderstandings. The protagonist of Er Qian's article is different from the previous ones, and the writing style is softer and more lively. The corners of his mouth will unconsciously rise when he reads it, and sometimes he will laugh, and his heart is full of warmth and happiness. I hope the characters in the book will have a good future. (Except evil characters)

Only one chapter per day is pitiful😭

"Pounced on the face" is used from beginning to end... In fact, there is a rhetoric called "pounced on the face". However, no matter how good the rhetoric is, it will be really uncomfortable if you keep using it.

I didn't really like it, so I read it from chapter to chapter. The plot was too slow. If you like food, you might like it. The characters are not distinctive enough. People who grew up in the palace should not be so stupid.

Food stories that travel through ancient times also need to be equipped with a system of high-tech products. . Well, I really appreciate the system text, especially in an antique environment, paired with high-tech products full of modern features, the golden finger is unnatural and nondescript, and it is like obsessive-compulsive disorder to abandon it again and again! Although it is difficult for everyone to adjust the issue of preference, I still suggest that when labeling books on the copy page, please add a "system". I think it can directly filter out some non-target readers and reduce negative reviews.