Fast Traveling Plane Black Technology

After reading the free part, give the author some advice. It's good to have more costumes, and the story is attractive, but there is too little ending. The author may always think that the story is complete and can start a new one, but in fact many people like to see the ending of each character in the story. Just like those biographical movies, it is always necessary to explain the character's experience after the story, whether it is good or bad. Nowadays, the endings written by the author always give people the feeling of ending in a hurry. After reading a rich story, people can't see the end of the story. Although everyone can guess it, this feeling is different from writing it for people to see. I believe more than one person said this, and I have seen other comments with similar views in the comments. Maybe the author thinks that this will make people feel eager to watch the next episode, but this is different from a TV series. A TV series is a continuous story, and the break in the middle will make people want to follow it. But this is the ending of a story. Not telling the ending will only make readers lose the excitement and will not increase the desire to continue reading. Instead, they will feel that they cannot see the ending every time, which will lower the rating. The author can imagine how uncomfortable it would be if "My Love from the Star" ended after the two went to the island for vacation, and if Harry Potter ended after Voldemort died without explaining the subsequent life and everyone's situation after the war. This is how your novel feels to people now. The story is obviously well written, relaxed and relaxed, and has no poisonous points, but it just doesn't explain the ending of the characters, leaving people feeling like it's stuck in their throats or they find it tasteless after eating half of the meal. . . I hope the author can read this book review

There is so much nonsense in this book. It's just one chapter with more than 30 chapters talking about the heroine going to school to study and do her homework. The writing is extremely detailed. Who hasn't been to high school? Does it need to be written in such detail? It's like a running account. I didn't see the point for a long time and gave up.

How should I put it? It just feels like every story in this book is often very detailed at the beginning and an outline at the end, and it is also extremely simple. Every story ends with Xiao Qi opening and closing her eyes, and Qiu Yao still repeating the same thing. . . . How should I put it, repeating one thing all the time is a very scary thing. In fact, I can understand Xiao Qi's mood, so it is actually difficult to accept the endings of these stories. For example, the first world is about medicine. I think we can expand it a little bit and talk about what has been researched and what impact it has had on mankind and society. Then I think we can also write about merits. After all, although the protagonist is a migrant, he is also an identity obtained through normal transactions, so if it benefits human society, it will also have merits. And if merit can be obtained, and merit is part of the transaction between the client and them, can I understand that merit is useful to them? If it is useful, then why is there no merit? Is it because it is not traded by the principal? Does it make any difference? Or let's talk about the main point – transaction? And in that internet celebrity's story, emmm, I always find it very baffling. . . I don't know what's so strange about it, but it just feels so strange. The only feeling it gives me is that the author is indeed a real mother. Although it's a bit bad to say this, I think it's okay to say it (right)? I have also read the author's last book, and I think it is much better than this one. If it weren't for the fact that that book wrote a lot about the 45, 6, 7, 89 (? I can't remember clearly) 1980s and so on (look at the table of contents), I might have followed it (I don't often read the final book), so I don't know what it will look like in the end. Maybe the author wants to change his style? [Then I seem to have nothing to say] I don't know how you feel, but I just feel like the ending of every story in this book is stuck in my throat like a bad ending. Although it is acceptable, the same ending makes me a little scared. Life is inherently dull, especially for me, a homebody who has no hobbies except novels. When I read novels, I appreciate and imagine each different life, different story, and an ending that is completely different from the world I live in and everything I have experienced. So, I'm really a little scared.

First of all, congratulations to Erqian for the first update of his new book "Quick Travel: Black Technology of the Plane"! I am very happy that after the completion of "The Black Red Envelope Group of the Goddess of War", another fast-travel novel can appear. 🍡🍡 "The Black Red Envelope Group of the Goddess of War" is the daily life of the interstellar Goddess of War! The heroine is a heroine with high IQ, high strength, and upright views! There is sweetness and ambiguity, but now? I don't think there is a single CP who always has such a straight waist! The emotional intelligence is negative! She is a straight woman as straight as steel 😂 Dongshu was accidentally pulled into the smart black bag group. Dongshu found that if there are points in the group, black bags can be issued. People who click on the black bags will travel to different small worlds to complete tasks. After completing the tasks, they can accumulate points. Originally she was just waiting and watching, but unexpectedly she clicked on the package and was transported to the famine era. Dong Shu actually wanted to see if this black gang would help her because she wanted to save her brother. The heroine in this article has a brisk writing style and an explosive IQ and a strong sense of strength. She is a woman with a cold personality. She never engages in ambiguity and is never tempted when facing suitors. Even if there is no cp, the plot is still quite exciting, and it does not affect the reading at all In short, this is a bit confusing and very interesting, welcome to join the trap —————————————————————— Anyone who has read Er Qian's articles knows that Er Qian is a writer who never stops updating, and does not delay updates. The usual update speed is also very fast, and can reach ten updates at most! So, with such beautiful writing and such stable speed, why wouldn't you like it? 😁 Come and join us and read Er Qian's new book! (Erqian↖(^ω^)↗)

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​: It's not that I don't know what to say, it's just that I'm lazy. Coming from a dark shop, I watched the birth and end of east, west, north, and south, and then watched the beginning of spring, summer, autumn, and winter. I was full of things. When I first read Xiluo, I was addicted to the sweet love between Xiluo and Ji Yan. At first, I didn't really want to know the author. Later, I checked the book review section and saw that this author is so warm and will reply to almost all book reviews. I tentatively posted a book review, and then I was very happy after receiving Qianqian's first reply. It was so cute! ! ! ☆Starting from Xiluo Baby Xiluo is my original intention. I love Ji Yan, Nan Zhi, Bei Yu, Dong Shu, and I also like Qiu Yao now. But Xiluo is different, different from all the heroines. She is Bai Yueguang. Without her, there would be no "Zeng Zui" who has been following Qian Qian now. Because of Xiluo, I have found my home here in Mobile QQ Reading. I have friends with whom I can chat, and I also have an author I like [Er Qian]. Makes me want to stay here and leave footprints here. Therefore, she is the most unique and the most beautiful. Xiluo's own charm is undeniable. She is beautiful and generous, powerful but unassuming, warm and bright. Why does Ji Yan like Xi Luo if he is so good? Because she is equally good. I never believe that those who have nothing will get the love of an extremely good person. Only good people can gain the attention of another good person. So, become great. Ah, I accidentally said too much, but as for Xiluo, I will always love her. ☆Nan Zhi's cameo Regarding Nan Zhi's little fairy, when Nan Zhi's book first came out, I was always looking forward to the appearance of my guest character "Gu Chen", but I always forgot to see the charm of "Nan Zhi". Because I had a guest role that was not very prominent but was still very important, I only focused on this role and did not think about Sister Nan Zhi's unique personality. I don't think I will ever think about playing a more important (male number 4? Or number 5?) Character in Erqian's book in the future. I will at best be a junkie (?), Because I am afraid that I will only have eyes for that guest character again. ☆My Dongshu God of War Dongshu is a special character, not only to us, but also to Erqian. It was the first time Er Qian wrote such a long novel. I was actually quite shocked at the time. It was also the first time Xiao Huang Qian wrote a novel without CP, the first time he wrote about fast travel, and the first time he tried various world backgrounds. But I think she has done a good job, and I hope she will become very good. It seems that I am no longer an ordinary book fan, but a book fan and a career fan (?). I know that many people know Er Qian because of the book Dong Shu, and then follow her to where she is now. I hope she can stay longer and longer, write better novels, and be liked by more people. The current small goal is to make our book fan group full. Dong Shu is really special, she is strong and excellent. I was really lucky to have Dong Shu accompany me through so many days and nights. I still remember the first time I wrote a long review for Sister Dong Shu. At that time, I was looking forward to it but also very scared. I had never read any articles without CP, but Sister Dong Shu told me that there is no need for a male protagonist, she alone is enough to attract our attention. Erqian will be even better! ☆First time video I have no experience at all and have never tried it. At that time, I thought, so I did it. Crazy Sister, Wuchen, Yanyan, Yangyang, Drunk, and many, many people gathered together because of Qianqian. We made the first video just for Qianqian. In fact, I was very nervous. I was particularly afraid that no one would participate and the event would become obsolete. Because I proposed it myself, I really value it. Although the last video was not very good, after all, it was our first time to try this, but it showed Qianqian that everyone liked her, and I think this is enough to make me happy.       ，，，， To all the babies who love Qianqian together, I love you. To all the cuties who work hard together for Qianqian, I love you. The future is still very long, I hope we can go see it together. ☆Meeting Qiu Yao for the first time Sister Qiu Yao arrived much earlier than I thought, because Er Qian had to pay attention to his health, and I couldn't help but want to read her new article, but because of my little sister, I couldn't urge her to update more, which is harmful to human suffering. Before Sister Qiu Yao came, I had always been sure that Xinwen would be a sweet and light city. However, the reality told me that this is your sister Qiu Yao's world. But I love sister Qiu Yao so much. I like her just when I see the name. Qiu Yao Qiu Yao, what a nice name. It doesn't matter if you don't have CP. It's not super easy for Sister Qiu Yao to support a novel by herself. But I still want to say that Er Qianqian must pay attention to his body. The body is the most important! I will accompany Sister Qiu Yao from the beginning to the end! I will also follow Er Qian from east to west, north to south, to spring, summer, autumn and winter. Dongshu is the end of one, and Qiu Yao is the beginning of another. I will never leave. ☆About me I seem to have been with Erqian for a long time, from Xiluo to Nanzhi to Beiyu to Zhongli to Dongshu to Qiuyao. Of course, I will stay with Er Qian for a longer time, and I hope everyone will accompany Er Qian on this journey too! It's best to give Qian Qian a full subscription (poke secretly)! Our book club group always welcomes you ~ and we also have our Lengqingqingchaohua and Weibo groups ~ I am Gu Chen, I was Zeng Zui at the beginning, and I have been with Er Qian for more than three years♡ The promised long reviews will come sooner or later. "The light in the world is not as bright as the stars and moon in your writing" As long as you continue to write, I will always be there. I don't know if a 2,000-word long review can show you my sincerity The above is from classmate Gu Chen. I have been reading at Penguin, and I am very happy to meet you, my friends from Qidian. I am Gu Chen♡

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😭😭😭It feels like it's gone before you even watch it. It's not enough.

Two reflections. First, this article is particularly long-winded. The author has to use dozens of sentences to write something clear in two sentences. Therefore, the whole article is suitable for skipping reading. Anyway, those annoying words in the middle will be omitted, and the plot of the article will not be affected at all. Two, it's too bland. She is a heroine, but she is actually very Buddhist. She basically doesn't slap her in the face or abuse her, and just lives her life in a low-key way. Even when I pick peaches with others on the show, I am afraid that I will pick more than other guests, so I carefully control it to the same level as others. I wrote many chapters about this kind of content on the show, just about how she tried to stay moderate. I was so pissed off.

Coming, coming! We love our family Er Qianqian very much!

The heroine seems to be very awesome, but it is of no use. She is very low-key, so low-key that others don't know how awesome she is. The whole story is anecdotal, not exciting, not exciting.

From 17 years to 20 years, I can't live without Bai Yueguang until now. The first time I read Er Qian's writing, I really liked it (mainly because of Er Qian's writing style). Then I saw the book club group and immediately joined it (this was my first book club group). I was called boss when I first joined the group. I was very panicked at that moment (I thought: Oh my god, why are you calling me boss? I am a newbie who just joined the group!) Hmm. Because of everyone's enthusiasm, I quickly blended in with everyone (Hey, hehe, they are all very easy to get along with) Yeah. The first person who impressed me deeply was General Attacker (this is her nickname, she is not offensive at all!). At that time, we were playing chicken and discussed in the group, and then we formed a fixed teammate with General Attacker for a period of time. Then there was Zui Zui (this person often changed his nickname, and he couldn't find anyone at first). Zui Zui was a very warm little cutie. His super profound words were, 'Winning or losing doesn't matter, I just want to play with you. I didn't believe this person who claimed to be a boy, but now I do. Well, I hope you and Wuhen are not allowed to leave each other until they have a child. Hehehe Hmm. Then there is Gu Xiaochen. The first time she noticed Gu Xiaochen was because she and Lao Wang discussed the issue of attack and reception, and then the two of them formed a cp inexplicably. Ah, there are also their articles in the group (it seems to be Wenba?) There are also words. Because Yanyan can play the guzheng, my first impression here is that he is a big boss. Yanyan is really a sweet little cutie. Then the voice is very impressive, and Sister Qun Huabin is also a lot of cuties Of course the pinnacle of my life is the guest appearance! That's right! I have a cameo! It's still a worthy cameo! Ah! I absolutely love it. Hmm. The main thing is Er Qian, we all met because of Er Qian. Now that I have a little sister, I may not have as much time, but that's okay. What's important is your body, and your body's health is more important than anything else. From "Online Games: Youjian Black Shop" to the current "Quick Travel: Black Technology", I have always been there! Er Qian. As long as you keep writing, I will always follow you Love you!

This is a fast-travel female science fiction novel based on the heroine's soul traveling through thousands of planes and the theme of collecting the wish energy of characters in the planes. The entire text is composed of various world stories. It can be seen from the story written in the first plane that the heroine has a procrastinating personality and cannot make a perfect clean break when dealing with things. Maybe it is because female creatures are more sentimental?                                                                                                    Before the story began, the heroine was a female cultivator from the Xuantian Continent. Due to the double betrayal of her Taoist companion and apprentice, she was trapped at the bottom of the cliff of the Nine Netherworld Abyss. Her body was destroyed, leaving only a trace of soul consciousness. She could barely form a shadow. However, she was also a blessing in disguise, and obtained a system that called herself "Plane Trading Artifact Spirit". The so-called plane transaction is to obtain world coordinates by locating different planes and different clients, enter the corresponding world, fulfill the client's wish, and then harvest energy. The question is, why do we need to obtain energy? As the original article says, the heroine wants to reshape her body and take revenge. The system is to repair itself, and its greatest wish is to return to its own era. If this is the case, does it mean that there should be a plot of the heroine's revenge and a plot of the system world in the follow-up? It's really exciting!              ，，， The heroine and the system are like a pair of happy enemies After meeting, teasing the system has unknowingly become a daily routine, and caring for the host has also unknowingly become a habit. She is often big-hearted and indifferent to what is happening around her, and she is worried about this! She is very kind. Even though she spends her hard-earned wish energy, she still wants to help people who are desperate due to illness. Finally, she develops a unique medicine and becomes an unshakable boss in the medical world. She is both angry and distressed about this!                                                                                                                                                                                                             "The energy of the wish, which was obtained after a great deal of effort, is not used to re-create the body, but it is only used to study medicine, and save the world!"              ，：，，                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       "                                                                           This is purely a sudden whim of Xiaosheng, because the systems of most system novels will disappear or be sacrificed in the finale, so I want to see an alternative ending. Summary The end of the story is too hasty. For example, the first story only describes the heroine who developed a new type of medicine and became a big boss in the medical field, but did not write the story of what happened after becoming a big boss, and did not complete the story. The supporting character Feng Shen was crazy about the heroine after learning that she became a big boss. In the original text, the author chose to mention these two issues in one stroke, giving people a feeling of beginning and no end, which caused the mood to plummet when reading. This will only greatly lower the scores and evaluations of the book in the minds of book lovers, so hope for the best.

This is the most unlucky young lady I have ever seen. She suffered such a huge setback during her first time traveling.

Qianqian, I'll come back~ I'm taking exams this year (I'm in the third grade of junior high school), so I can't chase him. There were signs of fire before he left. It's very powerful. He is already a level 5 writer. To be honest, I don't really watch fast travel, but the short stories are also very interesting. Qian, please try to write better, more interesting and meaningful stories. The next time I come back, it will be the day I regain my starting point! Come on! You have all the votes and I have all the votes~Er Qian will explode tomorrow~ I just gave my father~Oli!

I have invested 10,000 points, so don't stop updating!

After watching several worlds, it's a bit poisonous. The protagonist is too Buddha, the writing is too watery, the whole story is just a running story, not a scumbag or a slap in the face, the author also made the supporting characters very disgusting, too disgusting. The whole article has no passion or plot. The protagonist lives a dull life, and the fate of the best relatives is not written out. They are not punished, but live a good life. The ending of each unit is hasty, just like... Ah, it feels like it is over after I finish it, boring, boring.

Is this really the same author as the black bag group? There are too many differences😥😥

The long-awaited "Quick Travel: Black Technology of the Plane" that little fairies have been waiting for will be on the shelves on June 1st! Please support Erqian on that day and cheer for Shouding!

This author talks a lot of nonsense, and the two of them insert many sentences in between one sentence. There are only a few sentences in one chapter and they talk to each other.

It's another day when I want to send a razor blade to Er Qian. Even though it's updated at 9 o'clock, I always click on the book to check it again and again! Is this considered obsessed 😂😂

Ugh! After reading Er Qian's new book "The Black Technology of Quick Travel: The Plane", Zhi Xu once again sighed, there is actually no cp~ After reading the straight female Dong Shu written by Er Qian in "The Black Red Packet Group of the Goddess of War", don't you particularly hope that Qiu Yao this time will be a master of love! However, if you read the new article, you may be disappointed! There is still no cp this time, and the character of the heroine Qiu Yao is currently unknown. Zhixu, who is looking forward to CP, thought of a good plot, and asked for a recommendation vote for Er Qian's new book! (The following plot is entirely created by Zhixu, don't criticize if you don't like it! I hope Erqian likes it💕)———————————————— The moonlight is thick, and some unknown things are going on in a certain room...        ，，:"？？"        :"，"         "Tch, if you want recommendation votes, just tell me earlier." Qiu Yao stood up. ———————————————————— Finally, I want to ask for some improvement! Mwah! Come on Erqian↖(^ω^)↗

Warm reminder:Currently this book is not on the shelves. If you want to support Qiu Yao and Xiao Qi, you can send gifts to Qiu Yao and Xiao Qi~ If you send gifts, the author will get a share, the characters will have star points, and you will have fan points. Kill three birds with one stone! ! ! I don't know if the little cuties who are still raising articles have noticed it, but you can show your feelings to Qiu Yao and Xiao Qi! ❤️❤️❤️ Star level privileges: ✨Sixth level star Required star value5000 Writer who meets the conditions You can obtain permanent vest permissions for the character and open topic creation permissions ✨Fifth level star Required star value12600 Once the conditions are met, you can establish Character Dot Circle ✨Fourth-level star Required star value32000 If you meet the conditions, you can customize a character gift ✨Third-level star Required star value80 000 If you meet the conditions, you can customize a Character Q version avatar ✨Second-class star Required star value200000 If you meet the conditions, you can hold it once Character birthday event ✨First-class star Required star value500000 Once the conditions are met, you cancustomize character cards, unlock limited extras/audio/characters, etc. How to increase the character's star value: 🌸Compare your heart: once a day (note: watch the short video and you can add it twice a day), each time you compare your character's star value +1, the character's personal contribution value +1 🌸Gift giving: For every 10 points of value gift given, the character's star value will be +1, and the character's personal contribution value will be +1, with no upper limit (Note: a. Gift coins cannot be used for gifts b. Every time you send 1 point of coins to a character, you can get 1 fan value of the work) c. Character gifts can be included in the VIP upgrade consumption amount d. Character gift income is included in the writer's reward income) 🌸Tag: Add a character tag, the character's star value +10, and the character's personal contribution value +10. The number of likes for this tag is >99, the character's star value is +10 (a single day limit is 1000), and the character's personal contribution points are +10 🌸Memorial: For every new character memorabilia, the character's star value is +50, and if the submission is successfully passed, the character's personal contribution points are +50. If the memorabilia has 99 likes, the character's star value will be +10 (the upper limit in a single day is 600), and the character's personal contribution value will be +10 Additional points: 🌸If the character's new contribution points on the day are ≥500, the star value will be +500 🌸corner If the cumulative number of people sharing the color on that day is ≥100, the star value will be +500 So... In addition to voting for recommendation and water circle contribution points every day, everyone has another task: to show your love for the character! ❤ Dear little darlings, we will try our best to hold a birthday party for Qiu Yao and Xiao Qi❤

Recommend this book! This is the author's third book so the author is very experienced in writing books! Add some quality!

Erqian, Erqian, you have to work hard! Waiting for rewards to be put on the shelves! Do not interrupt the update, otherwise I will send you the blade

It feels a bit long-winded. I talk about one thing over and over again. I just talked about closing the toilet and there were people walking around outside the door. I actually wrote three or four natural paragraphs.

It does feel a bit long-winded. Quick travel means that the plot develops faster. This kind of quick travel seems a bit unpleasant.

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The ending of every story is not exciting enough

Why is it over? What about black technology? Where is it dark?

Ah, this...255, Why are you putting your own clothes there? The third prince obviously despises the original owner. . . It's great if dog bites dog,,, uh😅😅😅