The Black Pack of the Goddess of War

I read the first story and gave up because I couldn't stand it. First, the setting is to use the black bag sent in the group to quickly wear the mission, which is equivalent to soul wear. This setting is quite rough, a simplified version of the male channel chat group mode. Moreover, the setting still requires the heroine to guess the wish of the client, and she is unable to complain. Of course, I have seen more outrageous ones, but I still accept the incompetence. Second, the heroine is set to be the strongest female war goddess. It is normal for the interstellar spirit to be strong, but the first story is Jiang Tiantian, the background is rural, and it still favors boys over girls. The heroine is described very beautifully. My family is from the countryside, and I have never seen anyone who does farm work have tender skin. What a novel! Not going into this. But as soon as I passed through, I had the strength to kick the man 5 meters away. Is it normal? I haven't read that novel in which the soul is still worthy of force. A little girl who can't eat meat and has thin arms and legs can only be said to be the heroine! Third, as a sweet-looking girl, Jiang Tiantian can scare so many people with her cold eyes. Didn't his parents and brothers suspect Jiang Tiantian's sudden change in personality, including his strength? The halo of the heroine is so amazing! ! She said she was with a man in the first story without cp. Will Jiang Tiantian like that man? Why should the heroine meddle in other people's feelings without authorization? What's more, she's a scumbag. Han Zhao likes the heroine, not Jiang Tiantian's personality. Han Zhao can still like her when the original heroine comes back. They are two different people! Are the people close to you blind? Alas~ Now I find that as long as the heroine of the novel is not silly and sweet, has a normal outlook on life, and gradually becomes stronger, she is much more beautiful than someone who can scare a group of people to death with just one look!

I feel like the heroine is a bit of a scumbag. Every male protagonist is so good and loves the heroine so much, but the heroine doesn't fall in love with them. Since the heroine doesn't love them, don't write about the hero being so affectionate.

Can you write some extra chapters for each mission world in the Goddess of War's book, which will be about the development of the heroine after she leaves? Otherwise, it always feels a bit confusing, and there are many people who want to read the comment.

To persuade people to quit, the author wants to catch readers who like non-CP and romance. Unfortunately, it will offend both readers at the same time.

Isn't taking possession of a person's body primarily for revenge? I don't even remember the script, and I feel like the heroine is very lonely. While emphasizing that the heroine has no feelings, at the same time it is written that the heroine has admirers. The heroine carries the God of War persona purely by her eyes and force value. If two or three people look at each other and gain admirers, everything will be solved. After analyzing every little thing, I can't find any practical results. The golden finger is scratchy, and the plot starts and ends smoothly. Fortunately, many people recommended it, but I can't understand it.

Talking about my personal opinion, although the heroine's heart is set to be hard, I think it is very soft. Of course, I personally don't really like this kind of twist. Moreover, in the first two stories, there are men who like the heroine, but the heroine cannot have feelings for her, and then the man pursues her hard. Oh my god, I can't appreciate this kind of plot. Although the heroine is cold and tough, she "inadvertently" shows a hint of softness to the person who pursues her, and then the man likes her even more. Not to mention limited tasks, just try your best to give the heroine a love story. I really hate the situation where other roads are blocked and I can only follow one road in the end. If the heroine is really moved, she can like her freely. There are many infatuated men in every world, and they are all clean. I always feel that falling in love is quite uncharacteristic, and when I fall in love, I turn into a little boy. I don't know if it's because I've seen too many routines or something, but I have no idea at all. Isn't it great? Or should we start from the first story? Or is my aesthetic taste different from that of ordinary people?

I have never seen a female video, but since I accidentally clicked on 🤓 ~ I don't say much, but I will shed tears if I say too much (´△｀)

Erqian's writing has been a bit rough recently and feels very weak. I hope the author can work harder.

This book is barely okay. Generally speaking, some settings are quite novel, such as asking for wishes, and there are prompts, but I feel that the characterization is not very good, and it always feels soulless and a bit rigid. I think the image of the heroine is not plump enough. I always feel that something is missing. Furthermore, there are a lot of things that are unreasonable and do not correspond to each other. For example, the heroine is obviously very good at writing code, but she has to relearn high school mathematics. This is very strange. There is also the part about the world of cultivating immortals, maybe because I usually read most of the novels about cultivating immortals, and then I felt weird when I read this part. The setting of cultivation level and age, the male protagonist and his harem group talking to the female protagonist, etc. I thought it was very strange. In fact, there are still some things that I think are not very good, but I don't know how to express them. The Chinese is not good 🤤🤤. Maybe this article is not my cup of tea. I read it during the limited time. The author is still better than many people in writing. Keep up the good work 👍👍

It's so good to see it explode ~ It's just a matter of waiting for better results! ! ! Please give me more updates. I hope there are more stories and don't have an ending. It would be nice to see me grow old~😍😍😍😍

I finished reading it intermittently, and also took a look at the new books during the period. How can I put it, The Devil is still good-looking. Personally, I think this book is the best among similar books. The three views are relatively positive. Nowadays, most of the fast-travel novels are not plagiarism or plagiarism. In terms of three views, there are basically those who dress up as younger brothers. She said how wronged Voldemort's sister was, she said how bad Voldemort's wife was when she was dressed as a husband, she talked about her daughter-in-law when she was a mother-in-law, and she scolded her mother-in-law when she was a daughter-in-law. When defining a villain, he used his own unhealthy outlook on things. After watching it for a long time, it makes people feel that Bai Lian who is the biggest is the author. Er Qian did a good job in this! Secondly, the reason why this book has become a god in my mind is that I am a man. The reason why this book has become a god in my eyes must be the biggest attraction of this book, skin! ! ! So I still agree with the three words Pi Piqian. Yes, the style of this book is leather. I have read less about the fast-traveling genre before. The first one I came into contact with was the anti-routine fast-traveling book that was blocked by conscience at the time. Is it good to read? In fact, the sincere routines all rely on copying, but I copied my own style, and it is very fresh in the male channel and has a rare male protagonist. I was attracted by this kind of subject matter. After that, I came to the female channel to read this book. Pi Piqian's book has the qualifications to become a god because it is so skinny! ! ! However, the subsequent books have deteriorated and lacked soul. In short, they are not skinny enough! Having said all the praise, I would like to express my personal opinion. This book, which is regarded as a god in my heart, has persuaded me to put it down no less than ten times. As for fast food online articles, I can vouch for it. If I read this book by flipping through books, without reading the comments, I would read eight out of ten and leave. Not to mention that the golden three chapters are not attractive. The starting story completely persuaded me to put it down. In the book, in order to let the big devil To hone my skills, I have taken on many stories from 708090. It is not enough to attract the public. It is mainly to hone and strengthen my own stories. However, at the beginning, it is not attractive enough and will discourage people who are new to the fast-travel genre like me back then. Those who persist have not yet tasted it, because the length is too long, and it has to be charged. The second is that when manpower is limited, there are too many stories. After all, we are humans, not gods, and many common sense problems arise. What's more embarrassing is that as a senior foodie and third-rate chef, it's hard to understand the food explained in such detail in the book. Just look at the ingredients and recipes and you'll know they're unpalatable or even poisonous. I can't imagine the drooling scene. Maybe it's because men and women have different tastes? Then there are game-like stories, emmmmmmm! Emmmm! Forget it, I'm afraid of saying it badly, in short, the game category is completely irrational, illogical and unbalanced, especially when others say you cheat but don't admit it, it's so embarrassing! Emmm Maybe it's because I'm a man and play a lot of games? Anyway, it's embarrassing as hell. The key is that I paid to read this embarrassing story word for word. Why? Because I am skinny enough. In one word, my faults are not covered up. One word "skin" covers everything. One word "skin" makes the big devil shine brightly. One word "skin" makes the big devil become a god in my heart! Finally, I couldn't stand the final story after reading a few chapters. Could it be because I'm a man? Didn't you watch the big devil being a courteous dog? So in my eyes, this masterpiece starts with strep throat and ends with appendicitis. Also, I would like to ask how many people want to watch the Carp Spirit episode instead of the shabby second prince. They want to see the Turtle Spirit ascend to search for the Carp Spirit! ! ! Emmm Maybe it's because I'm a male and have different appreciation points. Not only did I have no feeling after watching the episode about the Second Prince, but it actually ruined my impression of Carp Spirit! Stop it, I hope Pi Piqian gets better and better! The reason why I don't post new books here is because I have read all the new books. Pi Piqian has fallen and is not skinny enough!

How can the author have so many ideas?

What I like most about this book is the world of Carp Spirit, but it ends too quickly. That's when you tell me you're done? ? ? So confused!                                                                                                                                                                                                                             ''''''''''''''S' run-of-the-mill conflict could be avoided if too many words collide with the characteristics of the world. The characteristics of the characters could also be strengthened. This is it after following more than a thousand chapters

Seriously, such a novel, which has neither common sense nor literary talent, is actually the number one bestseller in the science fiction space? No wonder men say women can't understand science fiction. You deserve to be laughed at by men, good content is expelled by this bad currency.

Er Qian is the most diligent author I have ever seen

I have been reading books for more than ten years, and this book is one of the few. It is updated quickly, the content is exciting, and the author is diligent, making people look forward to the follow-up of the story.

Although I am a person who reads pirated copies, I still have to shamelessly support the author, because this article is the most interesting of all the fast-traveling articles I have read. I laughed until my intestines knotted. Looking at the author's writing, I can imagine that the author is a very cute baby. His imagination and sense of humor are unparalleled. Ah, mainly for people who are stressed, reading this article is really super stress-relieving. I don't like to read abusive articles, because it is too inhumane to torture my heart when I am so busy every day. After reading this article, I feel that I feel extremely comfortable. Not much else to say, thank the author, thank you for bringing joy to people, cough! The painting style suddenly seemed wrong, like a farewell ceremony. Anyway, come on, author, I love you.

The first review I read said the setting was rough, but actually this is the highlight. If you like to read stories that tell you everything from the beginning and are slapped in the face, then go read the kind of cool and refreshing novels. This article is about setting the self-exploration mode. All you have to do is keep watching, take your time, use your brain, and of course, wait and see without using your brain. I think it's quite interesting. I've seen it once before on another website, and I'm interested in watching it a second time. It's in progress!

The author can be called the conscience of the industry. Update the leverage.

Quick Wear has cured my resistance to house fighting and palace fighting, which is amazing. To rank my favorite scenes in this book, the first is the countryside from the 1960s to the 1990s. Although the vision is limited by the times, the days are full of life, and the occasional struggle between parents and the family is actually very interesting. Perhaps the main reason is that the protagonist is very awesome from the perspective of God and it is refreshing to win every time, but the charm of this era background is also undoubted. It's a pity that I have already written three or four of these, which is already a lot. The second one is those who cultivate immortality. It's still my personal preference. Those who purely cultivate immortality will be a bit monotonous. Although there is a plot to support it, it is a very common plot after watching it too much. The cultivation of immortality is very interesting with the addition of novel settings. For example, the carp spirit who loves food and the handsome He who is obsessed with cultivating immortals all find it very interesting and impressive. The third one is Western fantasy. The protagonist An Luoning, whether he was divorced, then awakened the dark priest, and then had skills such as being able to make milk, cook, make medicine, forge iron and remove cpc, these settings are very good, but it is a bit anticlimactic. It is a pity that the underground world was not explored, and the protagonist's mother was not found. It is also a trap. The plot only revolves around the male protagonist, which is a bit thin and it is a pity to go through it quickly. Other scenes are actually great, such as singing in the entertainment industry and working as an actor and model, being an Internet celebrity doing live broadcasts to draw ghosts and catching ghosts, surviving in the apocalypse, eating and drinking, and recruiting underlings, being a system-abuse host, women dressing up as men and acting as bosses, nonsensical lines (2 seconds of silence for poor special assistant Tian Rui), going to the interstellar to sell fake medicine (not (ー_ー)!!), Etc., Are all very interesting. I think, special mission scenes +Interesting character setting + reasonable plot flow, but some plots need to be pinched, and there is no need to wait for many years before leaving the mission world. In short, it seems that I can't get out of this trap for the time being, and I won't be bored by the long story. Keep up the good work!

I read 300 chapters today (Er Qian, I still have to go to class), from Little White Flowers, Fighting, Little Wolf Dog in the End of the World, Eating Chicken, Hot Searches, Xianxia to College Entrance Examination. Because I read it continuously, the impression left by these three hundred chapters is relatively complete. Although it is not as amazing as the first time I met it before it was released, but... But... I am so sleepy, so I will just write it here.

After reading this article, I especially hope that Carp Jinglian will have a cp

Big! Can you give Shushu a cp once in a while? It's so pitiful, it makes me feel sad Σ( ﾟωﾟ；

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What I like the most is your arrogant expression at every turn! Because there are more updates every day, I am so arrogant!

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I'm waiting, waiting, waiting for updates!

I wish the lady who wrote this book: In the new year Luo Yan sinks fish, orchid heart, bright eyes and white teeth, beautiful face, clear words and beautiful sentences, clear words and beautiful songs, Qihua Yaocao, curved eyebrows and plump cheeks, green head and moth eyebrows, water and wood Qinghua, refreshing and pleasing to the eye, natural beauty, heavenly fragrance and national color. I feel pity when I see it. Warm color and light, apricot cheeks and peach face, majestic, fragrant and jade, apricot rain and pear clouds, jade foam beads, Yan Chi's likes and dislikes, fish sinking and wild goose falling, suitable for anger and happiness, beautiful scenery, distant mountain hibiscus, peerless beauty, Yuxia Chengqi, suitable for happiness and anger, jade buried incense, bright purple demon red, red lips and white teeth, the daughter of the Zuo family, Zhangtai willow Gillian's golden house, the flowers are shy of the moon, showing off their beauty, the warmth of spring, the fragrance of flowers, the garden is full of spring colors, the spring is as deep as the sea, the colorful clouds are easy to disperse, the colorful purples and reds, the beauty and magnificence, the beauty of the beauty, the beauty of the beauty, the beautiful eyebrows and the white teeth, the beauty of the country, the beauty of the moon, the beautiful woman's natural beauty, the wisdom, the orchid heart, the beautiful appearance, the secret fragrance, the full sleeves, the flowers that are shy of the moon. Falling fish and falling wild geese, overwhelming the country, gentle and graceful, charming and graceful, countless manners, incomparable beauty, the beauty of the country, the beauty of the country, the beauty of the moon, the bright eyes and white teeth, the light sweep of Emei, the elegance and beauty, the fragrant skin and jade skin, the beauty and unparalleled beauty, the graceful manners, the graceful wind, the beauty of the world. Looking forward and flowing, clear silk entangled, walking lightly, as beautiful as a fairy, as beautiful as a heavenly being, delicate and elegant, as beautiful as all the flowers, with water-cut eyes, stunningly beautiful, jade bones of gods, charming, beautiful and beautiful, peerless appearance, like a flower, a graceful lady, elegant temperament, beautiful, small cherry mouth, quiet as a virgin, active as a rabbit, pleasant as a bird, considerate, bright eyes, good at gazing Delicate and charming, exquisite and clear, jade fingers like green onions, skin like gelatin, eyebrows like a crescent moon, flowing eyes, small cherry mouth, pink makeup and jade, peach cheeks and apricot face, slim and charming, virtuous and virtuous, beautiful and delicious, watery and delicate, Xiaojiabiyu, flawless, shy and cute, graceful, beautiful, human face with peach blossoms, willow eyebrows and almond eyes, gentle and elegant. Bright and moving, a natural beauty, hibiscus like a face, astonishingly beautiful, the most beautiful woman in the world, peerless elegance, peerless beauty, beauty of a generation, beauty of a generation, stunning beauty, Chang'e in the moon, as gorgeous as peaches and plums, peaches and apricots shy Happy New Year to the boy book lovers: Happy New Year.

Nice! I finished reading it all in one night 😱 and then I began to wait anxiously for the update... Should I look for the author's previous novels and read them? 😭😭 Why is there only more than a hundred chapters? I am anxious!