Quick Travel: My Host Is My Father

When I read this book, I subscribed to it in full. From the beginning, I thought the writing would be better. But now, the only thing that attracts me is the experience of the original heroine at the beginning of each story. (I was so angry after reading it that I couldn't help but keep reading. The idea is indeed quite good.) But the heroine in the back is After the main game came, it wasn't that good. It was a bit watery. I just glanced at one page and finished it. I really didn't have the urge to continue reading. I have accumulated a lot of disappointment after chasing the game for so long, but I still hope that the game can make more progress (please don't criticize me 😭). It is true that I like the character of the heroine, her strong, calm and a little bit arrogant, and I also like the cuteness and innocence of the pink duck, but there is really no need to have so much psychological interaction between the two, and there is no need to have so many superfluous words that can obviously be omitted, which makes me see the greatness of the author. DaDa may not want to show the character characteristics that are not in line with the heroine, which made me watch a little bit, and I lost the desire to watch. In addition, DaDa wrote the IQs of the supporting characters in each world (regardless of the decent and villains) slightly lower, which made me feel that except for the heroine and Xiao Nuomi, there is no one. A person's IQ is online. This does not mean that I don't like the heroine's powerful golden finger. On the contrary, I like it very much, but I can't stand using everyone's lack of brains to reflect the heroine's advantages I hope you can read this long review I wrote. I really hope this book can Continue to update, and get better and better, and be loved by more readers (I also hope that readers who have always liked this book will not criticize me, this is just my personal opinion) This is the first time I post a long comment on football. Please do not criticize 🥺🥺. If you really want to criticize, please click lightly.

After reading it, the writing is actually so-so. Some of the themes are okay, but it's just so cool. The details are just so-so. It's cool. Sometimes it's quite boring to read. Of course, I didn't see the chapters after the charge.

When will it be available? There are too few now. It's not enough to see. I don't dare to click on it. I'm afraid it will be gone after just a little bit.

This book has a lot to brag about as one of my favorites. In fact, I wanted to talk to Shuiyue Dada, but Shuiyue Daddy ignored me and cried. . . I think I like the style of this book and the character and style of the heroine. The three views are very upright and thought-provoking. I don't have to say much. It's really good and I can't get enough of it! The counterattack method is also very reasonable. In one word, it's cool!

The heart of the tyrant, this plot is not about rebelling with the women in the harem, and then the officials in the court are all from the harem and their natal families, right?

No more, no more, no more! Keep up the good work, I really like the heroine's crisp style

Love, love, we will be together forever haha

It's so good, the author should keep updating it, don't stop updating it!

One of the four books I've been following. The moon is shining brightly, come on! Take good care of you! Compared with other quick travels, this quick travel book is remarkable. Although there is a system, the original system is just a mascot with a soft and cute character; there is also a captive system with a cute and intelligent auxiliary character. Although he is a quick traveler, Chu Yun is just a helper, and the rest of his life is still lived by the original owner. Although it has a bloody plot as the background, it cuts through the mess quickly and the narrative is completed in one or two chapters. It is refreshing! The next step is for Chu Yun to show off his skills ~ and the bloody plot is also very interesting, isn't it? ! Although she has a golden finger, Chu Yun prescribes the right medicine in every dungeon. You won't know how she will solve it! And, most importantly, Chu Yunchun is very powerful! The water moon is big, please give me some advice! ! !

Do you have any recommendations for books without male protagonists? Can there be a few female videos without male protagonists? I am a fucking boy, and I look depressed. Wherever I go, there must be a bunch of men around me. Can't I just fight on my own?

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In fact, the heroine's character is okay, but the author's writing of the male and female protagonists is too brainless. Can he write a slightly smarter one? I don't believe that someone who can be the chosen one of the male and female protagonists just feels happy for love balabala, which is a bit boring.

This quick-travel novel is the best I have ever read. It has no cp. It is meant to solve problems and watch the protagonist's halo disappear (too many people like the protagonist's aura to forcefully explain everything). A bunch of other quick-travel novels are all for men to travel, and men and women wear them together. The male protagonist finally gets a boost, and everything depends on the man's background.

What's the use of adding those two people for no reason? They are men after all. I only watched it because I didn't have CP. Adding it made me feel uncomfortable. I have fully ordered it since it was launched. Occasionally, I will give it every month with the monthly pass. Now I don't really want to watch it.

This book is called "Quick Time Travel". Each time traveling does not exceed about 30 chapters. The plot is concise and powerful without being sloppy. Every time I read that kind of fast time travel and write 50-80 chapters at a time, I feel sick. Isn't speed the solution?

I recognized the way the protagonist cheated all the way to crush the enemy and reduce their intelligence, and I thought it was a mindless read. I really can't stand the next part of "The Crowned Harem". After accepting the task, the protagonist does not regard the host as a human being at all, modifies other people's wishes, does whatever he wants according to his own ideas, and then forcibly collects the reward. . . It really made me vomit. If you don't want to take this mission, you don't have to take it, it's not necessary.

When will the heroine's thatched house be bigger? Also, when can I confront the Lord God? ………………………………………………Restore strength? Should we wait until the end?

First of all, I would like to thank Mr. Cabbage for teaching me a lot of books, such as: Don't be a scumbag, otherwise Brother Cheng won't be able to laugh; (details of all the "male protagonists" that have appeared so far, named Li Hua (harem system)) No You have to be a little white flower, and you would rather be a green tea than a white flower, otherwise Mr. Chu Yun will personally teach you how to be a human being; (Details of inventory of all "female protagonists", special mention of the sister in "I am the biological one" ₍₍ (ง˙ω˙)ว ⁾⁾Now The second roll call of the harem system has found pig teammates. After thousands of years of being a junior system (scumbag), but this time I finally got it.) Don't pretend to be cool, otherwise... Your family is gone, your company is gone, and you are gone! (Take stock of all the male domineering CEOs, focusing on the guy from the "Movie Queen System". You are not the only one who has the king Liangpo) Don't make trouble, when you dance happily, maybe the boss has come to you and arranged everything for you. Be a good man, maybe you will be given a love live broadcast (name and praise the second male protagonist in "The Queen System" (the straight man who is the best actor)) Hold your thighs tightly and don't let them go, it's okay to have sex occasionally (name and praise the one in the end of the world) Sister, the funny girl in "The Movie Queen System" (the fiancée of the first male protagonist)) Even if you can't hold the thigh, don't push it, don't risk death and don't give up the skin, otherwise no one will collect the body if the skin is dead (the brother in the first world of Whip Corpse) Don't act like a drama queen in front of Mr. Chu Yun, otherwise there will be no choice in the crematorium (name the white flowers in various worlds, and the scumbag boyfriend in the "Actor System" (that is, the one who pretends to be a maid)) One of the few Thunder point, Both male and female protagonists have extremely touching views, so shocking that my throat was filled with blood Every time the person asking for help was dumbfounded by the opponent's manipulation, but was unable to resist (below the line in IQ + deep emotion), and then asked the boss to help. I beg you to strengthen your IQ. I am a little embarrassed by the IQ of all parties... The wisdom of the harem system has been initially reflected. I have to say that after living for a thousand years, you can't just be a coward. If you want to be a licking dog and get the upper hand, you might get everything by accident ( Kick down the pink ducks with similar abilities😏) I hope the boss's books will get better and better! The above is probably the overall summary. If there are people who have the same opinions or even laugh, welcome to report. If there are friends who disagree, please don't criticize (🐶Save your life)

The more I watch, the angrier I get. Every time, the female protagonist is worse off than the male protagonist, but you try your best to abuse the male protagonist. The male protagonist's problems are always blamed on the female protagonist. Author, your idea is disgusting.

The first one was really speechless. It's not that satisfying either. First of all, it's full of female rivalry, not to mention the issues between the heroine and the original heroine. Let's talk about the girls in the company. Every assistant has an affair with the heroine's brother. Even very capable girls' dream is to sleep with the heroine's brother. It's so disgusting. As for the means of revenge, it can be written in more than one chapter "He doesn't drink, and she doesn't drink either", but the commercial blow is not mentioned at all. It is very simple to say that the former male protagonist called the police. The rest of the chapter is all about the original male protagonist seeing the original female protagonist in a panic. How disgusting she looks. The whole article is just a description of the appearance of different girls. There is no description of the inner self-cultivation, or details of character, ability or conduct. I really doubt that the author is a male author, or a female author.

The book has been read. Just a suggestion, regarding typesetting, there is no problem with the mobile version, but if you use the computer version, there is a slight problem. Each paragraph is too short, resulting in a paragraph only occupying one line and not filling up the whole line. The whole typesetting is really not good-looking. The first requirement for adding a book list is to have three correct views. What this book list requires is that the heroine will not kill innocent people easily and must have a basic moral bottom line. Ps: Killing is okay, as long as you don't kill innocent people indiscriminately. The second point is that there is no cp and no male protagonist. (This is particularly important) The protagonist does not have a tendency to be danmei or lily. It is better to have no ambiguity. No male protagonist not only means that there is no cp in the ending, but also in the plot. As for Kuai Chuan Wen, there can be no ambiguity even during missions. Basically, it's the above two points. If it fits this book, add it to the book list. Please give the author a reply.

There's no need to forcefully subdue one's wits. All the villains in it are just like idiots. I was really stunned by the second world. I've seen weird parents, but does Fukai Hyou, who insists on pampering his adopted daughter and not loving his daughter, really exist? I was really convinced. It was so uncomfortable to watch. I gave up. It was obviously a problem with the adopted daughter that had to be brought up. How mentally retarded can you be so blind to right and wrong? It's like being hit by a magic bullet. And what about the system? What kind of peerless white lotus is this? Her parents treat her like this and she still hopes that the heroine can save her. Fukai Hyou

Why do they abuse women but are so tolerant of men? Author, do you discriminate against women😡😡😡

Several stories contain female rivalry plots, which make me suffocated.

This writing style really looks like it was written in 15.16 😅

Baicai, don't say I'm heartless, I'm just so pertinent. The writing style has its own style, which is good. At the same time, it still has a relatively obvious middle-class atmosphere, which may not be a big problem for female channels. This kind of segmented writing is currently somewhat popular but still relatively rare. It's a skill if you can apply it flexibly. But in fact, this makes your novel more obvious like a fast food, which is good and bad. The good thing is that it meets the basic definition of online writing, but the bad thing is that it is not conducive to long-term development. In some plots that are particularly special and require repeated description, the effect achieved is incomparable with ordinary paragraphs. Moreover, this type of writing method is very restrictive, and lack of ability will leave some basic descriptions blank. Then, I won't say anything about the plot, but it may not fit the category you chose. This cannot be changed, but I hope you will pay attention to your own definition and creative direction in your future creations, and you can do better! ——Your dear old wet

The problem with this book is that the story is good, but in the later stage, it turned out that after passing the game, it would be crushed in one turn, and the opponent's system would be confiscated. As a result, it was not interesting, and the character was not maintained. I can't figure this out. The original owner still has to come back, won't he be eliminated as a monster? If you can use less crushing, it would be better if the opponent has a system and has to last for two or three rounds. If it is always like this, the author will probably have a headache thinking about the story. After crushing is over, the readers will be confused. Don't limit yourself to a setting that requires 30 chapters to be written. The story can be played for several more rounds. Many stories feel like they are just finished in a hurry.

This novel is so great, it whetted my appetite. I haven't seen a novel that suits my taste for a long time! This is really enough to make me happy for several days, hahaha

The heroine and the duck went to challenge the main god (the source of the world system, in order to steal the power of the planes in each world). They did not fight, and ran away after being seriously injured. The heroine can go back in time, and the duck can travel through space. They go to various worlds to help the supporting character cannon fodder fulfill their wishes, obtain the power of the soul to restore their strength, and by the way give the main god a stumbling block (the owner of the attack system). That's the situation.

It's a very good book. Don't listen to other people's nonsense. Everyone has their own hobbies. You will know it after reading it. It's a lot of fun.