Red Chamber Celestial Master

Personally, I felt the part about the protagonist's break with his family was written too abruptly. The old lady's intelligence seemed a bit low. While I don't think she'd act like the protagonist, it shouldn't be like that. I think the old lady knew the Xue family was in the wrong, but she would have tried to downplay the situation.

The writing is quite good, that much is acknowledged, but what's your direction? Martial arts? Immortal cultivation? Ghost hunting? Business? An industrial revolution? Are you also going to study Western theology? You need to prioritize. You're mixing too many things together, Western theology and Eastern immortal cultivation, it's a hodgepodge. Are you trying to write something with a punk era feel?

It's supposed to be a retelling of *Dream of the Red Chamber*, but did the author even read it? Jia Rong and Qin Keqing call Jia Rui "Uncle Rui"?? Jia Yuanchun is Jia Zhen's sister? Passing the county exam makes you a scholar, then you get a magical treasure, the *Mirror of Love and Lust*, and instead of practicing magical arts, you practice martial arts manuals? This is truly mind-blowing! It's ridiculous! Unbelievable! Bye!

I thought it was a cultivation story set in the Dream of the Red Chamber, but it turns out the author hasn't even studied the novel, at most just read it. The characters in the Dream of the Red Chamber are all self-righteous hypocrites, and the opening scene with a free magic weapon is ridiculous. The writing is too simplistic.

As I wrote, things got messed up. Earlier, you wanted to cultivate immortality, so Jia Dairu died and you left the Jia family to sever your ties to the mortal world. Now you want to build a harem, so you want to inherit the Ning family. The main plot is all messed up.

Actually, the chapter predicting Jia Yuanchun's promotion to imperial concubine was a bit mindless! In ancient times, she would definitely have been executed by the emperor! The emperor himself might not even know his wife was being promoted to imperial concubine! I'm truly impressed! Also, write less about modern things; writing more about ghosts and monsters would be much better than focusing on industry.

The author's skill is amazing; this is a truly excellent piece of writing.

The betting plot is incredibly annoying. I didn't want to watch this kind of thing ten years ago, but it still happens now. Failing to pass the exam is what makes a masterpiece.

It's so good! It's a pity the book is too short right now. I'll add it to my favorites first and read it later when it's more complete!

Will the author update ten times?