Soul Travel of Death

The content and plot are acceptable and not toxic, but sometimes the punctuation is messy.

The content is acceptable, but the writing style needs to be improved. Also, I beg the author to add some punctuation. There are not even quotation marks in the dialogue. I can't understand it.

Please add the chapter number 😅 before the chapter name. I just read a chapter and thought it was related to the work.

Please give the poor author an idea about the protagonist's Zanpakutō abilities. If it's good, the author will copy it directly.

I finally finished writing the Zanpakutō chapter. I'm sorry to post the unfinished parts in order to avoid missing time. I've finished them now.

To be honest, after reviewing the Hell arc, I personally didn't like it very much. How should I put it? One of the charms of Bleach is its handsome fighting, but what about the Hell arc? Do you still remember how Ichigo teased Byakuya for the first time? In the Hell Chapter, there is no difference at all between Ichigo and Mankai, he is still frustrated. As for the bull head who had high hopes, he has completely lost the awesome power he had when fighting Xiao Wu, and he no longer uses the Hibiki, Zanpakutō, and everything else. The whole story is just a crazy Tiehanhan mindless flash. What's even more exciting is that the golden skin appeared inexplicably and then killed the big boss? Except for adding some golden special effects? Finally, Heidao really has no personality charm. Also, there is Zhu Lian's group. It's obvious that the wanderer has been caught. Wouldn't it be nice to threaten him directly? Why do you have to do that set of operations that Hualipu Shao has no use for? I can't bear to look at his IQ. So writing the Hell chapter was, firstly, a foreshadowing for the previous chapter, and secondly, there really wasn't much to write about, it was just a bit superficial.

It's not bad, but without symbols it's like watching TV with mute. Uncomfortable.

I just watched a short section, and the world view is well constructed, but I feel that the beginning is a bit rushed, and the scene changes are a bit abrupt, which makes people feel a little confused. I hope the author can pay attention to these! I will continue to read this book. Come on, author!

Author, please sort out the paragraphs, it looks too messy, and. . . Can you use punctuation marks? ! !

The die-hard fan came here uninvited, the author is a girl🐴?