Reincarnation Catastrophe

It's well written, I'll try it out later.

It looks great, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Come on＾0＾~, let's take a look first

After reading the beginning, this book is okay. It cannot be said to be hardcore science fiction, but it is much better than the average newbie. The story flows very smoothly and the writing is of average quality. If you like this theme, I recommend you to join it. Then, I put together a few suggestions: 1. In terms of introduction, you can make slight adjustments and respect the market as much as possible without touching the bottom line of creation. 2. The punctuation marks in the text need to be revised more. Many paragraphs in the first chapter end with commas or even no punctuation. Although it is an online text, it still needs to be more rigorous. 3. The main focus of post-apocalyptic science fiction is setting. Novel settings will be more popular. Of course, one cannot blindly pursue novelty and thus forget logic. (Just a suggestion, no need to take it seriously)

Thanks. I will read it carefully and have received and reviewed it.

Come on (*'▽'*)♪

Very good, metaphors are used in many places, keep up the good work

The concept is exquisite and the writing is good. I like this book very much and look forward to the update.

Already collected, cheers (ง •̀_•́)ง

Come on, it can be more tense and exciting!

It's really good. The writing is very good. Come on.

Very good. I only read the first few chapters. The metaphors are used very well and the sentences are very smooth.

The writing style is actually quite good and the imagination is very rich. But here are some suggestions. After you finish writing, you can read it. After reading the first chapter, you found that some of the language has some problems, and the punctuation has not been corrected. This is just a personal opinion, I hope you won't be blamed if it's wrong.

I've read two chapters, it's good, keep up the good work

After reading 5 chapters, here are my thoughts briefly 1. The writing is very smooth and the overall look and feel is very good 2. The setting is very interesting, the beginning is very attractive, and the subsequent development and the introduction of the power system are also very fast 3. The description of the details may be more, such as the post-apocalyptic scene, which may be more immersive 4. Overall it is great, collected, keep going