Nightmare Tower

I have read the whole article, the writing is very smooth, and there are some humorous jokes interspersed in the article. I personally think it is quite good. The style is a bit biased towards Western Fantasy. I haven't watched Western Fantasy very much, but I felt pretty good after watching it. The creation of characters, Zhao Ping, Zhou Lingkui, and Hong Yao, each has its own characteristics. Each character has his own experience, and the image is very vivid and distinct. I couldn't help but complain, the protagonist is the most rubbish... It's a pity that such an innocent girl like Hong Yao died like that, but judging from the foreshadowing, it seems that she will be resurrected. But it also reflects the cruelty of survival in the tower from the side, and... It's really cool to use one's own arm as a gun... It makes me confused This tower, the rules of the game. Pick up supplies, grab airdrops, and run drugs. In the end, only one person can survive. It's like eating chicken. There are some minor issues. First, the entire world setting feels very small. For example, does a city have a population of 90,000? The worldview gives people a very narrow feeling and is not grand enough. Secondly, the sense of anticipation is not very strong. I just feel like I am constantly fighting and killing. There is nothing special about it if I watch too much. Come on!

The writing is very good, but the opening should be better. For example, putting the appearance of the God of Nightmares first. Starting with this is better than introducing the protagonist's life background, because this identity and background does not constitute too much of a contradiction, and the sense of substitution is a little worse. The review is finished, and I would like to recommend a good book

Very simple, without any logic, and extremely conflicting. Please review it carefully. It is recommended that the author write the six characters "reasonable, reasonable and legal" in front of his article every time he writes. It is not meant to be insulting. I just want to give the author some suggestions. Thousands of miles of ice does not freeze in a day. Come on.

Overall, it is well written and gives people a strong sense of expectation. I will give you a vote tomorrow, like it!

The writing is good, the ideas are great, the subject matter is novel, let's work together, I feel you will be popular ۹(･༥･´)و ̑̑

I have never read this type of novel, but I have seen a lot of anime with openings like this. The writing is quite good, but there are probably not many people who like to read this type of novel. I hope you can help me, and you can also read mine. Although the writing is not good 🤭, it has been collected

Write quickly! ! ! I want to see the follow-up, ah ah,

What was said above is very thorough, so I won't go into details. I recommend you a book about fierce players and similar genres. Let's see what others wrote.

The subject matter is novel and I like it very much. Of course, it may not be easy to write about this subject matter, but it is very innovative and the introduction is very good. I will add it to my collection 🌹

Dragon Building Recruiting characters, there will be more characters appearing in the next article, maybe the character names you send will appear😘

Already collected, encourage each other.

Does the author have nothing to do? You just want to become famous. Those comments don't matter. If you care about these, it's better to finish the book as soon as possible.

Once you see it, write it down, but you still have a reader.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Everyone, I would like to apologize first Because the author is a junior high school student, the frequency of subsequent updates will be slower. It is expected to be updated once or twice a week But after the high school entrance examination, updates will resume

Write well, I have invested. Although there is no money, it is my last chance. Revise well. A big revision is necessary. You have a good brain, but your thinking is immature. This is your weakness. Check after you finish writing. As a bystander instead of a single reviser, you can write well to support you. It is not to make extra money. You must know that you still have readers who will read and invest, so write well.