Under the Pirate's Holy Light

Both the plot and the writing were acceptable at the beginning, but after Robin fell into coma and the protagonist turned dark, the whole plot became weird. I even wonder if a gunman was replaced in the later period. The plot collapsed, the combat power collapsed, and I even felt that the character's personality had a big change. This holy light... Hey...

The front was fine with food and grass, but there was a point where Robin started to be poisoned after being comatose and couldn't stand it anymore. What kind of double devil fruit powers, and there were more and more girls on the boat, so he had no desire to stop watching.

I think the author can use a Mom Fruit in the later stage, with the ability: Your mother thinks you are hungry (maniacally stuffing a lot of Devil Fruit-flavored food into your mouth, don't resist) Your mother thinks you are cold (adding hundreds of millions of layers of thick clothes and long johns to hinder your movement) The rest is for later comers and the author wants to By the way, the author added a bonus, after all, I also ordered them all 🙂

To be honest, the first few chapters were too sensational and overdone.

I found that in all One Piece fanfics, the heroine is basically either Nami or Robin. Can you come up with something new?

Suddenly I felt a sense of déjà vu. I lay in bed and thought about it for a long time, and then I thought of a possibility, Say! ! Did you follow the outline of Water Margin, and you just had to replace the pirate flag with Xingdao for the Sky? Hahaha

The most enjoyable pirate fanfic to watch! If you don't accept it, do it!

Flowers and childlike fruits, an invincible existence

What is it written about? The protagonist went crazy for no apparent reason. He really couldn't understand what he was trying to write, and he kept banging his head here and there with a hammer!

It was a waste of time for you to give the Thunder Fruit to Robin. Wouldn't it be better if you killed the sugar and found the childlike fruit for Robin to eat? Directly invincible.

The protagonist of the One Piece novel has a steam fruit ability user under his command, and this subordinate even infiltrated the navy. I forgot the name of the novel. Does anyone know?

There is too much nonsense, the word count is too low, and one thing has been repeated so many times. Do you think I have amnesia?

It felt awesome, but the fight turned out to be unfinished. That's how I felt. I was a little speechless when I saw Chapter 39. I fought all the way to the Navy Headquarters, but not a single hair was lost.

(ง •̀_•́)ง, Invested

To be honest, I lost a lot of interest after reading a few chapters. In time-travel derivative fan fiction, the protagonist's growth adventure in the early stage is a highlight, but this novel keeps jumping in time, 4-5 years at a time. It's so boring. In less than 30 chapters at the beginning, a couple can fight against Kaido, and there's even a thread in the later stages. Fighting is also very boring. The opponent will attack with one move and then rest, rest, rest, jump, jump. That's it, it's no fun at all

I listened to the book and listened to Chapter 6, which successfully persuaded me to quit. 😂 After reading the intermittent words in the whole screen, let alone listening and reading, I was also persuaded to quit.

As soon as I entered the book review, I was as deep as the sea, and the book shortage stayed with me forever and slipped away.

This book is either unreadable, or there is too much nonsense, and the writing is not up to par.

I just have one question. Does our book have a book club?

Seeing the blackening, people are stupid. Together with this fighting power, you will be invincible, and you can kill all kinds of people.

I've looked at a few of them, but I'm afraid that there will be a harem in the future. Can anyone tell me if there will be a harem in the future?

Chapter 34 The Holy Light goes berserk. There are countless episodes in which Robin was put into a coma. Groove to say. I was poisoned and died only during this period.

I died of poison when I read Chapter 5. . . Farewell.

I recommend it to little bookworms, it's quite enjoyable to write.

It's outrageous that you don't exercise even though you know it's Robin.

To be honest, there are too many complaints. There are only two or three chapters of the 5th chapter where the complaints are too much. I often jump too far.

So much nonsense! From the natives? Keep Robin after the first meeting? Looks disgusting