Little Sword Fairy in the Sky

My personal suggestion is that you can slightly adjust the many large paragraphs in your chapter and divide them into two or three small paragraphs, so that you will not be so tired.

I'm not discouraged. After all, this is my first time writing. I have no fans, no popularity, no recommendations, my writing is average, and my plot is average. Just smile. "Flowing water flows freely, running away the sorrow and leaving people with sorrow." The limericks picked up from the mouth are not bad. Come on, little Ai Ai

I seemed to want someone to help me promote it, so I thought about it carefully! 🤭

I finally signed a contract, but the newcomer ranking list is gone, which makes me heartbroken 😭

1. Judging from the title of the book, it is quite satisfactory and is more interesting for beginners. At first glance, you might think that the protagonist was written as a child. 2. Judging from the introduction, there are still highlights. The protagonist tends to be unrestrained and unrestrained, and the sword fairy is free in the world of mortals. 3. In terms of characters, the protagonist himself is well portrayed, quirky, but also innocent at heart. 4. In terms of content, the writing style is quite good and the plot is also very good. Come on (✪▽✪)

Yuer·Zino Zino and Zinuo are all like bubbles. Wild geese fly, wild geese fly, they know the cold and return. Ziyan Ziyan, the words to care for children. Swallows fly, swallows fly, and return knowing the warmth. You know my heart, you know my hurt. Sadness is like a flying goose, joy is like a swallow returning.

I'm ready to invest. If you can sign it, sign it as soon as possible 8

The characters' personalities are very obvious, and the article is very comfortable and leisurely to read. However, it is a bit too leisurely, and the pace of the article is relatively slow, so it is suitable for reading slowly. Personally, I think the rhythm could be adjusted a bit, maybe slower or faster, maybe that would be better? Collect it and read it slowly later.

Starting from today, one chapter will be about 3,500 words for the time being. I need to change the details in the front and think about the content in the back. I don't want to write too much. Sorry

Follow you on Douyin. The little dinosaur is me.

I'm here to warm the book again 😊

Xiaoyun Xiaoyun~❤️❤️

I wrote this book for myself. I never thought about signing a contract, and the results were not good, so I will only write it slowly and write a novel that satisfies me. That's it. Forget it, no one probably cares about this comment.

Great book! Collected👍👍👍

The chapter is so long. I was a little tired after reading it. Some of the sentences were slightly wrong, but the storyline was good.

It's too short, let's raise it for a year and a half first.

I don't know why, as soon as I opened it, you were already on my bookshelf 🤭 (I exchanged too much)

There is a surprise at the end of the first chapter, welcome to troll the author!

You are not allowed to vote for recommendation, otherwise I will be in trouble with you! ! ! !

Come by invitation! It's really cool 1. Daai's introduction, the words are ordinary but have a unique charm, there is freedom and pride in the ordinary, I really like this introduction, please give it a like first. (Don't be proud) 2. The article is also vividly written (mainly character description). But personally I feel like it's a bit of a mouthful (it's okay). "Life" means there is a bit too much description of the environment (a little bit) 3. Except for the introduction, which I really, really like, the content of the article is a bit too slow and bland. It kind of feels like the usual routine of Xianxia, ​​but your description is better than many others. 4. As a bookworm who often fantasized about cultivating immortality, when I read your article based on this, I still feel that something is missing, which is very subtle. 5. As for other details, readers have already leaked them to you. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง 6. Looking forward to the follow-up, seeing a different path to immortality and a different author. Dream for the sake of dreaming. 7. Encourage each other

After reading Chapter 10, I have already seen the change of the protagonist Ye Xiaoyun. From the beginning, he was confused and lived only for food and clothing, and even went to steal. Through a series of small details, it can be seen that the male protagonist is a small gangster at this time. But it is understandable, after all, living is the foundation of everything. Cooking for an old couple, it can be seen that although the male protagonist is a bit of a jerk, he is still kind in his heart. Later, when he met his master and got an opportunity, the first thing Ye Xiaoyun thought of was that he could become a hero in the future, great! It's a very good book. Although I don't usually come into contact with male videos, I was still very interested in reading it and will continue to follow it! Another small suggestion is that there are a lot of typos. I hope the author can check it before publishing! Come on!