The Only Savior

It's a good book. I have read all kinds of books over the years. There are not many books like this that allow me to always see the author's updated positions. I haven't updated it in a long time.

I feel like your setting of the dark energy particle sequence is a bit forced. I'm afraid you won't be able to hold on to it later.

It's very good. You must finish it ✌️✌️

Big cheers for the author! The writing is still very nice!

To be honest, I looked at such poor results with the attitude of being a eunuch at any time. I didn't expect that I could persevere until now. Yes, at least I am responsible for my own work. The plot is okay, the writing is not delicate enough, but I can see that it is gradually improving. Come on, I'll keep an eye on you.

This book is okay, it's pretty good in this genre. I've been watching behind the scenes for a long time, and I'm definitely qualified to say that the subject matter and content written by this author are okay, but the writing style is too poor. However, such poor results can continue. No matter what, I admire you very much. At least you can be responsible for your own novels. I hope you stick to it Come on

Original drawing of Starry Eyes.

I don't know how to express my feelings about this book. At first I thought the protagonist was just killing monsters with foreign objects, and then he occasionally got skills, and the result was a percentage increase, even at a very low level. The protagonist has a purely ordinary physique, so it is roughly equivalent to a bunch of seemingly useless skills in 666 (more than 140 chapters later, I haven't seen much highlight in these skills. The strongest skill is given to a dog, but as far as I can see, the dog has done nothing). Others said it was watery, but I thought it was acceptable at first. Especially when I perfected the new system, I felt that the book was getting better. But I don't know why the author didn't work on the gangs and the protagonist to improve the system. Instead, he went out all day to pretend to be sexy, and the pretense was not in place. The important thing is that the plot hardly progressed... Until around chapter 130 to around 140, about 15 chapters were about discovering monsters and killing monsters... Fortunately, I still watched it continuously. I can't imagine how broken my mentality would be if I chased it day by day. Only from this moment did I realize that it was real water... The fact that this subject could be written like this made me collapse. I think it was a matter of rhythm and plot control... Forget it, I won't pursue it anymore 😭

Everyone should read this book for the imagination. To be honest, the imagination is really big and quite novel. However, the writing style is a bit poor, and the people in the book are not very intelligent. It just feels a little inexplicable. I don't know what is strange. I just feel that the book The people are not like real people, and this kind of imaginary book is to constantly promote the plot, so the protagonist's hammering here and there does feel a little bit watery, and with such a huge world view, establishing a system early or cooperating with the government can greatly promote the plot. It was a bit dull in the early stage, I don't know if it will get better later on.

The protagonist doesn't know how to improve himself when he has time. Go and practice free fighting or shooting. Even if it's not good enough, you can also improve his physical fitness! They are all planning to establish an organization! There must be a set of basic training methods and training plans, right? But this book is like playing house! I was really speechless when I saw it. Moreover, it feels like those skills are all dependent on the system, not the protagonist's own abilities. Instead of doing this, you might as well just give the equipment and let the equipment have its own skills! 😅

There are too many flaws... I feel that the author's writing is very messy. He wants to write everything, but the result is nothing. Moreover, the protagonist gives people the feeling that his IQ is not online, and the supporting characters are also forcibly reduced in intelligence. When I read Xiaobai's novel, it was too watery, and Shuangwen's novel couldn't feel good either. It was grinding and whining.

It's really tasteless, and it's a pity to discard it... The settings are still attractive. It's just too watery... I wanted to see something about attracting people and cooperating with each other, but after n chapters, it still didn't exist. I wrote n chapters about a monster, and I kept flipping through it without even reading it, and it didn't affect the rest of the story at all. I wanted to see the setting and plot behind it, but I was too discouraged to watch it. Really tasteless.

The book is okay, but the pretentiousness and deception are a bit stiff and not very smooth. The author could go and watch the ferocity of the natives in Real Trouble, which is quite comfortable in terms of pretentiousness and deception.

The subject matter is good, but when it comes to the actual implementation, the layout is a bit too small, and a good thing is written in a cowardly and wretched way... Come on

Can anyone tell me why the protagonist's nonsense turns out to be true? This makes the world feel unreal and very disappointing.

Pretty awesome, just a little awkward, maybe not a little bit

Author, you are really good 🔨, please give me some advice! You have been unable to sign before because you are too inexperienced. The climaxes are also few and far between. Generally speaking, novels first suppress and then expand, but if you suppress and suppress and then suppress and expand again, this is going too far. Moreover, the explosive point in the climax is not enough. It has been suppressed for so long. It stands to reason that you should give a strong explosive point to let the readers release the previous foreshadowing emotions. However, in the first one hundred and forty chapters, except for the explosive point where the protagonist goes to treat Su Fu's son for the first time, the following climax points are not well controlled, giving people a feeling of anticlimactic. In fact, these are all minor problems. After all, the author's writing style is relatively green at first glance, and it will get better slowly. The biggest problem is that it is too watery. Many dialogues and the protagonist's inner monologue have no effect on advancing the plot or foreshadowing. They can obviously be written in one sentence, but they take up a lot of space. In fact, if you don't want the main plot to advance too quickly, you can open some branch plots. There is no need to lengthen the story with too many useless dialogues. For example, after Li Xiang follows the protagonist in the wild, you can open up Li Xiang's perspective and describe how he encountered an unexpected situation while helping the protagonist investigate strange events, accidentally discovered some interesting and useful information, and provided the protagonist with some information gaps that need to be filled in. Of course, if you don't want the character Li Xiang to appear later, you can replace it with other important supporting roles that you arrange. This not only advances the plot, but also adds branches, and can also flesh out the personalities and images of the main supporting characters. Let readers relate to this supporting character. Of course, I am just giving my opinion. I will continue to subscribe and read the novel. I hope this novel will get better and better. Come on, author! !

When a world needs a person to save and be a savior, then the world is sad

Recently, I feel that my writing is getting better and better. The author will continue to work hard and never be a eunuch.

After reading more than 300 chapters, I can't stand it anymore. This is not a salvation, but a game... I can't see the so-called disaster. In fact, every time it comes out, there is no protagonist at all. The official can gaoding and forcefully pretend. There is absolutely no feeling of needing to save the world 😥

Author, I call you brother. I just finished talking about the entertainment industry's pretense to reduce intelligence, and then I read dozens of chapters. Today I saw how it got to 298-301 and it's the same thing again. Maybe you think it's fun to keep up with current events, but your subject matter is not.

Behind the scenes It writes about controlling everything, and the fate of all things is at your fingertips It writes about laying out the world, and changing the rules out of nothing It writes about deceiving mankind, setting off a craze of the times It writes about the struggle for hegemony, but it is all about moving things in the middle It writes about the front and backstage, everything is just a play It writes about thousands of changes, and there is no fixed class.

No, the writing is too messy. The author is very perseverant, but the protagonist created by the author is not good, and the progress is too slow. I got an orange gift bag, which can only be used by dogs. I am speechless when I see this. In my opinion, many people read the introduction before reading. What they want to read is that the protagonist is invincible, not that there are so many chapters without a skill and can only rely on holy water. I understand what the author means. He wants to depict the growth of the protagonist, but it is too slow and there is not even a thing for self-defense.

It looked flawed but not bad at first, but after using the World Tree to fight the Emperor Vine, I suddenly felt that the design of this dark energy point was too much, or that the skill consumption was too high. After two shots, it withered immediately and could only be slaughtered by others. It also had to arrange the dark energy reading bars like a magician. The magician can also use a small amount of his own energy to drive natural energy when using skills, but it feels too weak here.

This book was not detailed enough in the early stages, but it got better and better in the middle and later stages, and the plot and world view continued to unfold. I really thought it was good, but the updates were too slow, almost every two months.

After reading the first few pictures, I can't help but sigh, if Zhang Xiaoman is the only savior in reality, then we are doomed (I haven't seen the later stage, so I lament the early stage, don't criticize)

Can the author update 5 times a day?

No, after I fully ordered it, my fan score was ranked 55 This book is obviously very good.

The author has opened a new book, Alienated Frontier. After experiencing the growth path of the first book, the quality of the second book has been obviously improved! 🌹🌹🌹 {"TopicId":"1111509215040372736","TopicName":"Alienation Border"}

The nonsense is repeated over and over again, but it does not advance the plot. You can draw a skill to gain one chapter, and you can sell sushi to the stall location to gain one chapter. It can be called the first level book in the starting point 🙂