It Is Impossible to Cultivate Immortality in the World of Cultivating Immortals

After testing the poison, tell me what you think of this book The writing is very good, the story unfolds slowly, and the main mission begins. Side missions have also begun to roll out. I think the main story is the key to attracting readers. How the author designs and unfolds it is great so far. Side missions, including the protagonist's words and deeds, and characterization, will test the author's skills. Whether the story and characters are fleshed out are all important. At the same time, the depth of the book and the suffering and struggles of the people in the story really test the author's experience. So far, it's starting to unfold, but it's not too much. I'll write a review later. But so far so good. Compared with several other books The first is "Lan Ke Qi Yuan". The style is really similar at the beginning. The appearances of Bi Fang and Lao Long are very similar to the story. If the standard can be maintained, the story unfolds slowly, and people's hearts are divided into good and evil, then there is hope for becoming a god. But now the world framework of "Lan Ke Qi Yuan" is so big, the chapters have reached 700, and the main plot is still a mystery (saving the world, creating the world??) Now Ji Yuan is like an aunt bargaining with merchants in the vegetable market. She has to think a lot and calculate for a long time to buy something insignificant, but in the end she buys a melon (the melon is not sweet yet). The author is probably Kavin. The framework is too large, coupled with my own insufficient experience and insufficient literary background, the result is that the content of the current article is a bit disorganized and the layout is confusing, with hammers here and there. So far, the author of this book has introduced a series of literary works such as "The Classic of Mountains and Seas", "The Romance of the Gods", "Liao Zhai", etc. As background, but he has also forgotten that there is always a difference between immortals and mortals. The protagonist is not strong enough, let alone the gods, aliens, monsters, and ferocious beasts in "The Classic of Mountains and Seas" that can destroy the world. The protagonist of Fox Cave alone can't handle it, let alone some hidden bosses. If you don't have the strength, you still have to take the place of the saint?                 ––，，，，，， At the same time, the author has made full preparations. Various allusions and words in "The Classic of Mountains and Seas" can be picked at his fingertips without any sense of elaboration. He only requires higher literary literacy of the readers. "Tao Xing", the author of this book has a profound foundation in Chinese studies, and explains the three schools of Confucianism, Buddhism and Taoism very thoroughly. If the author needs it, you can refer to it. It is very in-depth and requires readers to have certain knowledge of Chinese studies, otherwise they will feel sleepy. "Mysterious Resurrection" is a horror novel with strict logic, clear main line, and unfolds slowly. The character of Yang Jian portrayed by the author is vivid, and the main theme throughout the text is "holding the body of an evil ghost and doing bodhisattva things." Some chapters deviated from the main theme due to the pursuit of horror, but later the author revised it and it was much better. It is a masterpiece. "Cultivation of Immortality Begins by Drilling Wood to Make Fire", the writing style is very good, the characters are also well portrayed, but the development is a little slow, and the update is also very slow. The same goes for "Lan Ruo Xian Yuan", the update is too slow, but the story of this book can be regarded as original and unique among many "Liao Zhai" articles. The author can learn from it, but the depth is limited, and it is a bit pale in this aspect. "Two Thousand Years of the Poor Man" is a rare book with rich depth and experience. In short, I personally feel that the novel should not be too watery. 1,400 Chapters is the limit I can accept (one chapter that is particularly short does not count) and I am not writing a series, so there is nothing I can't finish. "Lan Ke Qi Yuan" is now developing in the direction of "Jigong's Travels", extending infinitely and without an end. . . In addition, it must be updated on time. If it is not updated, please let the readers know. It is not good to keep everyone waiting. A little advice, I hope the author will work harder!

Does anyone feel that the chapters after they are released are incomprehensible? Maybe my education is low. I can't understand these pictures. Is there anyone who can't understand them? I will deduct 1.

I am a 7-year-old bookworm and I feel very comfortable. It is a fairy tale similar to "Lan Ke Qi Yuan". The writing style is very good and the framework is clear. If the standard is maintained, I personally think that the level is still higher than "Lan Ke Qi Yuan". After all, Lan Ke's later writing collapsed and it was a complete mess.

To be honest, being immortal and being a mortal forever will definitely be captured and studied by the big guys from all sides. Anyone who has watched Emperor's Domination knows the story of Li Qiye who was made immortal by the Immortal Demon Cave and then tortured for millions of years.

People say that this book is very similar to Lan Ke, but after reading the first three chapters, the writing style is very different from Lan Ke.

After watching a little bit of the beginning, it is indeed very similar to Lan Ke. The only thing that feels wrong is the change in the protagonist's personality. It is indeed strange that a young man who pursues excitement through bungee jumping suddenly turns into a particularly calm old man.

The main character's name is my only fault, Fan Ren, a mortal, but it's actually easiest to think of him as a criminal. Very unhappy. Others are perfect

The immortal ones are not mortals but saints. The immortal capital cannot be immortal.

The subject matter is quite good, but I feel that the writing is a bit lacking and it looks a bit awkward.

Although I am a poor student, I must read the original version Thumbs up if you insist on the original version 🙂

See you today. I hope everything will come true for us.

I just looked at the character list and there is no female character. I like this one. I like this kind of novel. I love it. The author is so awesome!

It's okay, but the update is not good enough.

The writing is very good and the author's writing is very strong. I hope you will think about it carefully and try to update it as much as possible. What a great book! Don't collapse.

The subject matter is good, I hope the author can stop being a eunuch and write better, so he can become a god

As light as water. Different from today's fast food articles, it is also a good book, but it is not excessive enough to be natural.

After so many years of reading, this is the first time I cast a monthly vote, and I am filled with emotions. First, I am in my twenties and can already make money on my own. Second, this book means something extraordinary to me. In June last year, I had nothing to do, and the dream of being an author deep in my heart was surging, so I started my vigorous journey as a writer. Unfortunately, the temporary passion in my forehead and the long career of coding were destined to be incompatible. In the end, the dream of being a writer came to an end, leaving only a folder with a collection of street stories lying on my computer desktop, which is a kind of souvenir. The author wrote a book with me at about the same time, and it has been more than half a year since. As I watched this book come to this day, I have always had the illusion that it was written by me, and always regarded it as the carrier of my dream as a writer. Although it was successfully published, but with few achievements, I still insisted on writing. Although it was updated from time to time, I was still writing. This kind of spirit of persisting without stable and substantial material rewards is something I have always wanted to have but could not get. I came here to take a look again today and found that the last update was four days ago. I hope the author will persevere and continue to finish writing. Before, you said in your post that the outline of less than one million words has been sorted out, but you can't let it go. At the worst, you have to give a past ending to wrap up this story. After all, this is not your dream alone.

The author restored and updated 👴 Youth is over