
One-Punch Man in Journey to the West
一拳超人在西游
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 220k Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Mythic Cultivation
- Updated
- 6y ago
- English
- Request a translation
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88Chapters
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Don't hide the protagonist's power, otherwise there won't be any satisfying moments. Besides showing off, what other satisfying moments can Saitama have? Can you write about Saitama's unintentional showing off and his slightly silly (nonchalant) feeling?
Brother, that's quite a leap! One minute you're writing historical novels, the next you're writing fantasy novels.
I wonder how strong Saitama will be in Journey to the West. He won't be invincible with just one punch, that would be boring.
Sometimes I may not fully understand Saitama's personality, so I ask for your guidance so I can make adjustments in later chapters to better reflect Saitama's character.
I think it could be set up that Saitama and Tang Sanzang share the same destiny, and since like repels like, only one can exist in the same world. Therefore, Tang Sanzang died, and none of the gods and Buddhas could tell that Saitama wasn't Tang Sanzang.
Congratulations on your new book! I love One-Punch Man fanfiction.
Teacher's characteristics: He will only take action against strange people if they are hostile, have murderous intent, or are attacking him, rather than foolishly taking the hits and then fighting back.
You've changed Sun Wukong's personality too much, and you've weakened his strength so much. When did you increase Nezha's strength? Has the author watched too much *Ne Zha*? When has Nezha ever been stronger than Zhu Bajie? So I'm sure the author has watched too much *Ne Zha*. I don't even want to talk about Sun Wukong anymore; he's been weakened too much.
Please let us know when you change locations.
Dawdling It's that kind of feeling—like you're doing mindless, slow-paced math.