Start Being the King of Swords Today

After reading the first chapter, I feel that I can add a preface to describe the background and pave the way for the whole book, or do a close-up of the protagonist to pave the way for the follow-up. After all, a good beginning is half the success. The structure of the world of the work should be more delicate and complete. You can mention the framework in the preface and slowly unfold it to prevent The structure behind it cannot support the strength of the protagonist. If it collapses, it will be difficult to write. The first chapter is not very detailed. I hope the author will continue to work hard. The wooden sword at the beginning will appear. I look forward to what the plot will be next. (I secretly guessed that it should be from simple to complex, mainly upgrading one of the swords, martial arts, and levels)

Well, after reading the update. I also read the beginning of the previous book Dandy. The author is quite diligent, although the book is not interesting. The strange background. Judging from the types of weapons in the book, it should have entered the Iron Age. According to the scale of millions of swordsmen mentioned in the book, the population should exceed 100 million. It should be the late Ming Dynasty, the middle and late Qing Dynasty, and the Republic of China. Combined with the rumors of gold mining, it can basically be determined to be the Republic of China. In fact, the author could directly set the background to the Republic of China, which would give a stronger sense of immersion. Make a strange alliance, well, I can't understand it, the author is very profound. The plot is curious, and every moment someone comes out to pretend, and then gets beaten. The middle-class dialogue was a bit embarrassing. The silly and sweet woman advances the plot. It is recommended to watch an old movie "The Swordsman of Two Flags" and copy it according to the above background, plot, characters and dialogue. It will be much better than the fantasy you are racking your brains now. If you search carefully, you should be able to find the original script. I remember that the content of the original script is richer than that of the movie. Well, the above is all nonsense, please ignore it, after all, this is a serious book review. That's what I see now. The background setting is barely passable. The character setting is barely passable. The plot design is barely passable. Rhythm control, qualified. Conclusion, a qualified upgrading and passionate novel. PS: As long as the rhythm of this kind of writing is up to standard, the background, characters, and plot are not important, as long as it makes sense. I recently carefully read China Literature's new contract dated June 3. I wonder if you signed Category A or Category B? Have you seen the frequent net profits? Personal opinion, please delete if you don't like it.

Well, I read the next five chapters by the way, and found that the author added detailed background narration at the beginning or middle of each chapter. I like this, it is a bit similar to a short story, and it feels a bit like the first hundred levels of the anime Naruto. It expresses the previous key nodes in a recalling manner, and uses the reverse order method to move out the protagonist master and subsequent plot clues. I look forward to reading the subsequent chapters, and voted for the recommendation (PS: I am following Tomato God's book first, this is a good one, I will read a few chapters every day).

Overall, it feels good, and the rhythm is still very exciting. However, I personally feel that there are some unreasonable small things, 1. The trap for horse bandits Sheng should be a reclusive figure who concentrates on swords and killing. It is understandable that he is keen on killing intent and the smell of blood. However, the caravan following him should be an experienced team, and there should be a lot of people in the rivers and lakes. Sheng should not be as quick as the caravan when he discovers the abnormal living conditions in the small village, and can be discovered by the caravan in advance; 2. Wu Qingcheng's death Sheng discovered the murderous intention of the teahouse owner but hesitated, which was inconsistent with his own insistence. It can only be said that he is a new lover and does not know how to protect, and needs more experience (ps. Look at my plot to kill - a certain author said 😏🔨🔪). Then I didn't feel Su Moran's murderous intention, and I didn't notice the killing of Tianlang Hou or the back stab, so I still need to practice (PS, yes, it's still a plot killing--a certain corpse said). It is estimated that Sheng will regret it to death and work hard to get better (PS is right, everything is for the plot--a certain skeleton will-o-the-wisp said) (Tang Youyou from the love apartment passed by and said that she can actually save her again and become the heroine 😤) 3. (Diao Chan, crossed out) The city lord is on the way here on horseback (Yes, he is riding a stone horse)The city lord and his army cannot catch up with the caravan that just left (it is still necessary for the plot~~I said)

Well, I finished reading it... I couldn't help it. How can I put it? First of all, the author wrote a little bit, but the rhythm is really tight, the main line is clear, the side details are trimmed very neatly, and the progress is very fast. In many other novels, the parts that can be described and modified in detail are just brushed off. I wonder if the author is confident, and the plot will be more important later, so he will describe it in detail , the style is still the same, such as the part where the boy and girl go shopping, the inner drama of the girl after returning home and the reaction of her family, the whereabouts of Swordsman Su and joining the caravan, the gathering of horse bandits, the competition with Uncle Ming, etc., I feel that they can all be added, and they can even steal a bride in the city before leaving 🤭, continue to follow the author to unfold the plot, after all, it has just begun...

Li Murong Good at using a spear Invincible on horseback Killed while fighting on foot with the protagonist

Qingcheng is dead, I won't watch it anymore, goodbye👋🏻

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The writing is very interesting, a wooden sword, sword fighting in the world, reminds me of Wen Hua, but it is a pity that Wen Hua is garbage and does not have such a good life. How to say it? Personally. I prefer that. There are countless top players in the world that people look up to. Should the author put more effort into laying out the background of the book?

It looks good. Keep it. When will it be put on the shelves and when will it be slaughtered?

Four small tickets are not respectful Martial arts is not easy, everyone encourages each other

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Shi Yi, a disciple of the Gun King, is an orphan in the desert. He has been with wolves since he was a child. He drinks wolf milk and eats flesh and blood. He has brute strength. He is familiar with the habits of prairie wolves and has a withdrawn personality. One day, the Gun King went on a trip. At sunset, the afterglow reflected on the grass and the grass was covered with clouds. A young man was riding a wolf king, looking around. The Gun King was moved. He killed all the wolves and ordered the young man to become his disciple. The young man was furious and fell to the ground to fight. Fate, before the Gun King moved, the young man fell to the ground. Unwilling to give in, the young man got up again and again more than a hundred times, but the result was the same as before. Finally, he fell to the ground with all his strength. He still raised his head and roared, the Gun King stepped forward: If you want me to die, become my master. The young man bowed his head to the ground, fainted from exhaustion! That year the boy was eight years old. The King of Guns took the boy back to the king's tent. When the boy regained consciousness, he ordered someone to teach him human etiquette! After three months, the young man was given a stone spear, which weighed ten jun. He was ordered to swing the spear a hundred times a day, and the number increased day by day until it exceeded 10,000. The task of the day has not been completed, whipped until fainting, treated with good gold wound medicine, continued the next day, the number of times that day was added to the number of unfinished times yesterday! After two years and nine months, the young man succeeded. The King of Guns ordered his disciples to find samurai, equipped with swords, guns, clubs, and eighteen kinds of weapons. He ordered one person to fight the young man to the death every day. If he killed the young man, he would survive, and so did the young man! In one year, the young man had killed 365 people. His eyes were red and he was filled with murderous intent. The gun king was satisfied, so he accepted him as his disciple, named him Shi Yi, and taught him martial arts with all his heart! Five years later, the young man succeeded. The two of them fought. The young man was defeated. His skills were mature and there were not enough kills. He was ordered to go down the mountain, clothed in civilian clothes and straw sandals. The young man carried the gun and went down the mountain, heading northwest!

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The eighteen types of weapons are: knives, spears, swords, and halberds; axes, axes, hooks, and forks; whips, maces, hammers, and spears; sharps, sticks, spears, and sticks; spear, and rake. The sword is strong and heavy, and is the commander of hundreds of soldiers, such as the Qinglong Yanyue Sword, a three-pronged and two-pointed sword; The spear pursues swiftness and power, and is the king of white soldiers, like a phoenix spear directed by a hundred birds; The sword is light and elegant, and is the king of hundreds of soldiers, like the Shadow Sword; The halberd can be used in one method and a variety of ways, and is the leader of a hundred soldiers, like Fang Tian's painted halberd. The above is pure nonsense😢😢😢

A sword is a weapon. It has a double-edged blade with a straight and pointed head, which can hurt people horizontally and vertically, and can penetrate armor with its stabbing blow. Extremely dangerous, born to kill. (Martial Arts)————The sword is edged on both sides, with a straight blade and a sharp tip. When dancing, it is lethal when used on both sides. Attacking with the tip of the sword can easily penetrate armor. It is a very dangerous weapon and often puts people in danger. It is a weapon that exists solely for the purpose of killing people. Sword, one of the ancient weapons, is a "short weapon". Known as the "King of Hundreds of Soldiers". Ancient swords were made of metal, long in shape, with a pointed front end, a short handle at the back end, and blades on both sides. Now used as a fencing sword, the body of the sword is a slender steel bar with a small round ball at the top, without an edge. Swords, in the early days, were dagger-style daggers, which were the same as swords. The only difference was single-edged and double-edged. The sword is also called: "Qinglu", "Jinglu", and "Changchai". In the late Spring and Autumn Period, long swords became popular. Most of the swords with fine quality come from the south, mainly from Wu, Yue (Minyue), Chu, and Bashu. When the long sword comes out, the short sword is not useless. The history of swords is ancient. The long sword is convenient for fighting, while the short sword is good for protection and can also be used for assassination. Jing Ke assassinated the King of Qin, and the knights Wang Yue and Shi A in the late Eastern Han Dynasty are a typical example. This is actually a parallel import post😜

Zi Feiyu🐟 A yellow-flowered girl, unknown personality (appearing calm) Introduction;Behavior is often not guessed by others, loves to speculate (98% of which are often confirmed, theory is often less than practice), and will not get herself into trouble (often putting herself into trouble) (((*°▽°*)(*°▽°*)))♪) To a certain extent, she is lucky (she can benefit from it, but she doesn't like it ╮(＿)╭) Her wishes are unknown (she always changes herself inadvertently) Plot insertion (thinking)

The writing is very good, but not enough.

The heroine is not the Qingcheng, emm, what a pity