The Sound of War

Although this work is not very popular, the author perseveres in writing, which is very admirable💪

The plot often jumped inexplicably, and several times I thought I had missed a chapter.

The first is the title. For plots with a lot of dialogue, there is no need for him or her. You have to use people's names. It takes half a day to identify who said which sentence. The second thing is that the scenes were cut too fast. The first time I saw a village invasion, half a chapter was finished, and the plot was over before I could react. In 10 chapters, you can start from writing about time travel to explaining the background to the death of the lord to the arrival of the doctor to the invasion of the Holy See troops. Your speed is no longer like that of a human being. Are you writing a stage play or an outline? I also don't know why the doctor brought a container but didn't write anything in the container. At the beginning of the game, a person was anesthetized, and then the scene cut to an old man in the village. I didn't mention how he knew this family. What equipment the protagonist has on him is not explained, nor is the setting of the necromancer. Ironwood materials and traps are also mentioned by the lord in one sentence. Then the lord died and the followers surrendered. After that, the followers had no role to play. No wonder no one reads this 177k words.

There is something wrong with the classification and introduction. Even if I click on it, I have no desire to read it.

Toyo-chan~ Is there a female protagonist in this book? (:[___]←Waiting for reply

I really like war, it's beautiful and the graphics are strong!