Dewa Mountain

Support it, it's well written. The lord treats him like a nobleman of the country, and all the noblemen of the country are always dead. In history, all the state officials did die, and the author was sinister

There are not many readers of this book, but it is rare to have a few who stick with me. First of all, thank you. In addition, I am quite busy at work, so I always find time to write. Although I can't update it every day, I promise that Dewayama will never be a eunuch! The outline is all written. The story is very complete, I just want to present it. Maybe due to the writing style, I cannot express it as wonderfully as I want, but I will definitely finish it. Thank you very much for everyone's support.

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The contract was officially signed on April 1st. Please support 😁 and strive to keep updating this month. . .

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This is a classic, unique, slow-burning, suspense-filled fairy tale novel. According to my understanding, there should be both immortals and knights. The protagonist should not be a machine that fights monsters and upgrades to seek immortality, but a young man who has experienced in the world of mortals. Classical or ancient, it is different from most popular styles today (this is by no means denying these classic schools, they are popular for a reason). If you are tired of the same routine and trendy articles, you might as well give this book a try. There are always mysteries and reversals that you can't guess. In this book, the settings are rigorous and progressive, complete and self-consistent (I say this with confidence). Everything from spiritual energy and true energy to divine will and destiny will eventually have clear explanations, origins and rules. In this book, the system of cultivating immortals is redefined and will not be copied from other novels. The Fund-Building Pill Yuanying is only one of the eight gates of the Great Dao. Thousands of methods are connected to the Great Dao, and it is not just a name change for the same level. There are no golden fingers in this book. The protagonist's opportunities and adventures are all shackles and calculations he was born with. One day he will recognize everything, jump out of the cage, and break free from the control. In this book, the protagonist is born into the whirlpool of fate, but he does not want to be respected in the world. He is just an innocent young man, a "blank slate". His life's journey is just about solving his own problems - who am I, where do I come from, and where am I going. In this book, not all supporting characters are backgrounds or stepping stones for the protagonist. They each have their own desires and desires, plans, and rules of conduct. If you don't like the protagonist's character, you can read it as a group portrait and guess everyone's identity, experience, plans, trump cards, and their final destination. In this book, becoming an immortal is not the only destination, nor is immortality the only pursuit. At the beginning of the story, the world was ruled by a country established by the descendants of the gods. The world of immortality had its own order, and it was not a jungle law society that only respected strength and ranked seniority according to realm. In this book, the author has conceived a complete and grand story framework and buried a lot of suspense, foreshadowing and hidden clues in ordinary places. Book lovers are invited to have fun solving the puzzles. But when the truth is revealed, you will find a lot of foreshadowing, and you may have a different pleasure if you read the previous article again. In this book, the pace of the prologue and the first few chapters is very slow (the author is not a mature writer after all). However, the core characters in the book have quietly appeared, affecting the whole body, and it is difficult for the author to modify it. I hope book lovers can endure it until around chapter 50 and get better. At the end of the first volume, the style and purpose of the book will be roughly fully displayed. Generally speaking, this book is not a mature commercial work, but an exquisite story written with care. It won't be a big hit, but it can be a good book that stays on your bookshelf. ——As long as you have the patience to read on, you will definitely gain fun and surprises~

👏👏🏀🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢It's so slow, only eight of ten chapters in two months

Niucha, from the name, I thought it was a martial arts, but I didn't expect it to be a fairy! Good looking ￣ ￣)σ

The author writes well, don't be careless

Very interesting, it just needs to be divided into better sections.

The protagonist's role is too little, appearing in one or two chapters in 20 chapters.

OK. The master of the protagonist is Sun En, who is said to be the originator of Chinese pirates, and his historical reputation is not very good.

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Here come the nitpickers, come here from Shuhuang Circle. As an old bookworm, I may be picky, but don't get discouraged and only read the reviews of the first three chapters. I took a quick look at it and found that it is generally good. There are too many explanations (environment descriptions) and the paragraphs are too long to be comfortable. If you don't believe me, look at the rankings and they are all short paragraphs. Anyway, don't use the segmentation method you learned before. The character settings are okay! It is better to have only one line in the early stage. Come on, keep at it.

It's good to explain these old things clearly at the beginning, otherwise it would be annoying to keep talking about conspiracy theories and black hands.

Jiao Meier is going to take the male lead first 😥

The first part is pretty good, but the second part is really not flattering. Killing the golden elixir in Tiandu Peak really makes me want to vomit. I have never seen such a stupid golden elixir. A golden elixir with a treasure like Lingxiao Pavilion can be killed by three foundation builders head-on. I really admire your obscenity. Ability, the main character thinks he has no ability other than being self-proclaimed. He is greedy for money and lust. It's really disappointing. He doesn't have the temperament of a classical fairy at all. No wonder so few people read it. Some of the articles are stinky and long, and the background introduction is often based on ancient sayings. It's boring.

The book is okay, and the writing is not bad. If you write it well, it should be popular. Unfortunately, the author is too lazy, and updates are like a snail. If this continues, how can you read it?

Duke Zhou actually updated it continuously? What happened. . .

I used to admire "immortals" very much, but now I realize that immortals are just oversized people with endless desires and selfishness. If they are poor, they can only do their own thing and if they are prosperous, they can help the world, instead of looking at mortals like ants. Therefore, it is destined that there will be no real immortals, and it can only be a delusion.

The writing is very good, but why do immortal cultivators want to get involved in the struggle for power among mortals?