Set Forth, Hero

This is the first time I've written such a long story. I have a lot of plot ideas and characters waiting to appear in my mind. However, the transitions and plot connections were not handled very well, so it felt a bit like a diary entry. Moreover, the current story perspectives are all focused on the protagonist, and there is little writing from the perspective of supporting characters. I'm already studying hard, and I hope everyone can stick with me until the end. I will improve!

This is my first time visiting your space. I'm eager to read your work and support your determination and perseverance in striving for your dreams. Keep it up! I'll come back tonight to savor your masterpiece.

Why did I switch to the female-oriented channel? I can't even cast my daily recommendation votes anymore.

So far it's going well, hopefully keep it up! 🙂

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I was really getting into it, and then the ending was another disaster! It just ended like that without explaining anything? The people chasing her just let her go? I can't understand it. In my mind, the protagonist should strive to become stronger and kill that scumbag's father and heir before the pursuit stops. That kind of ending would be more convincing.