Seal the Mountains and Seas

Recently, some book friends have been reading the book, and some have given wonderful reviews, letting me know that I am not alone. At first, I planned to imitate the Mortal style, but later I found that after giving many settings and plots, I couldn't follow the Mortal style. I will work hard. If you have any suggestions, you can feel free to mention them. I will take them seriously 😰

After reading the first part so far, I feel that it is a very conventional fairy tale novel. But fortunately, the writing is very solid and the rhythm of the plot is pretty good. After reading the previous part, I feel that the setting of time travel is not useful in any way. If time traveling is not mentioned in the later stage, it feels like a very redundant setting. Let's talk about the beginning. The beginning is relatively mediocre. Although the protagonist's strength is briefly explained, it still feels like it's not there. This is because I have seen less of it myself and cannot make a good evaluation. Overall, I feel that this novel is quite good, but there are too many immortals and many kinds of routines. There is nothing too eye-catching. I recommend that you try to design more characters, increase the interaction between characters, and enrich the characters. After all, most Xianxia are single protagonists. Come on!

I'm pretty good about this book, but the main character hasn't left the novice village yet, and I kind of want to complain about it, and it will take decades to advance.

Ah! Author, please promote it yourself!

Thank you to all readers for your attention 😁, I hope you will be satisfied.

The word "la" is really used too much

What can I say? It's okay, but the writing is too general. A lot of it has been mentioned in one stroke, but I always feel like I left it a little too busy. Wouldn't it be better to have more words?

Congratulations on the release, I'm fully pre-ordered and only have two chapters!

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Does auctioning a qi training tool show financial strength? It's very poisonous. I have to go against the foundation-building monks. I'm speechless.

By the way, why hasn't it been updated in two days?