I Suddenly Became Invincible

I hope the author will think carefully about what he wrote? The subject matter of the article should be mainly focused on the protagonist, but the author's subject matter is basically placed in the surroundings or other places.

This is my first time making such a comment! First of all, there are many typos, but this is not the point. The most important thing is that the plot is so **, I didn't read several pictures, only the first few. I really can't stand the plot of Yang Dan. It's already 2020, and there are still people writing this kind of plot? I'm really convinced by this halo of wisdom, and there's someone behind me. You can't kill me. I'm really convinced by this plot

How to put it, everyone knows that it is difficult to write, but the performance of the protagonist can greatly reflect the author's own creative quality. The most important thing about the protagonist's invincibility is not the flashy skills, nor the exaggerated rhetoric to describe how great he is, but the direction of the plot and his inner growth (after all, from an ordinary person to becoming invincible all at once, there should be a psychological process, and you should not use brainless villains too deliberately) Aren't villains with brains more capable of making people grow (ﾉ_ _)ﾉ, especially the first villain, my god, am I traveling back ten years ago?), In a word, author, you have a lot of room for growth (ʘ̆㉨ʘ̆)

I just want to say that the protagonist, what can I do now? I think this novel would be complete without you. The protagonist is redundant. If you take most of the good things to your home, you won't do anything. Don't always say that you have affected the development of the human race. You are like a temporary addition. How will it help this book? If you are not a transcendent person and develop slowly, no one knows. I may understand why the seniors or Golden Finger will give a medium-sized novice gift package. From childhood to adulthood, the more new book gift packages are given, the better, and the protagonist will be more like this. But it will always be better than now

It's a very good invincible novel, but it would be better to add more plot to the protagonist. Then we can talk about the protagonist's strength later. It's the kind of strength that can destroy an entire universe with one palm, or it's another kind of strength. It's better to express it.

Can you give the protagonist a little more role 😥

Update two pictures a day, otherwise there won't be enough to watch.

The protagonist is transcendent, but his mentality is still that of a diaosi. There is no such mentality as a master cannot be humiliated, and those who humiliate him will die.

What is there to write about the transcendent realm of Earth?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

It's pretty good, but there are too many typos

Chapter 3: Shouldn't that be wolf meat and wolf skin? Why did it become beef and cowhide?

High-level novice, strength persuades you to quit

I just want to know that the protagonist is invincible. What is the system? Isn't the existence of the creation system more invincible? If the creator of the system comes out and slaps the protagonist, the protagonist will be invincible. What's more, if the system one day gets sick and runs away, the protagonist will still be a novice or invincible 🤓

Not bad, pretty good, come on, old man

Author, are you invincible? It's my fault that I don't understand appreciation.

Although I didn't ask for the protagonist's virginity, I didn't want to watch it when I saw the protagonist casually killing people in a haunted house without trying to save them.

This work is about a super transcendent person who can even create a perfect world. He is like a half-step transcendent Pangu. I think it is very ordinary, and then it collapses.