I Arrived in the Journey to the West a Thousand Years Early

Very creative. Writing: Is the protagonist still strong when he travels back in time and faces the pressure of a severed finger and a blood-written book? Afraid of losing your mind? Obviously inconsistent with the original character. What's more, because of this incident, I feel indifferent and have no sense of belonging? Go on missions to other countries to show off your intelligence. . It's even more impressive. You can really treat people from the Spring and Autumn and Warring States periods as ancient people. A weak country went to an enemy country to show off their IQ and operations. Are you the best in the world? Think about the time when Ying Zheng's father was a hostage in Zhao State. At that time, Qin State was stronger than in the article, right? His father is more and more low-key. There is also the previous dialogue with the system. It's so simple. The more I read, the more uncomfortable I feel. Whether writing about ancient times is a fiction or not, you have to bring in the thoughts, world background, cultural background, and the details of Huanzhong's behavior and speech. Otherwise it is poison! Poison! ! Poison! ! ! It's okay if you have some problems with speaking, but if you think the IQ of ancient people is not as good as that of modern people, then just wait and see. Modern people at most have more information than ancient people. If you send someone who only knows about dynasties but nothing else to go to ancient times and see if he will rise? (It is estimated that if someone sells it, you will have to pay for it)

The author has published three books in a row, will nothing happen?

The writing is messy and mixed. The cultivation system seems to exist, but in fact it does not. The article looks profound, but is actually plain. The protagonist has been emphasizing immortality, but in fact he has been seeking death. To put it bluntly, the author's main plot is unclear and he doesn't know what he wants to write. On the one hand, he must follow history, and on the other hand, he must take into account the immortals. Moreover, the description of the pre-Qin period is too weak. To be precise, it describes a world of Chinese martial arts, without any atmosphere of apotheosis.

Travelers have no family ties at all! One moment he invited himself to leave the clan, and the other moment he had a deep brotherly love and worked hard for the rise of Qin...

The author has gold-level ideas, silver-level writing, bronze-level protagonist's emotional intelligence, and black-iron-level protagonist's character. The portrayal of the protagonist was extremely failed, and a major debacle occurred in the sixth chapter. People always want to meet their needs. I feel that Qin Xiangong can't help you, so I have no sense of belonging and indifference. If you have Nezha's temper and cut off your bones to repay your father and your mother, I will admire you.

I don't understand that you are a young master of the Qin Kingdom. The king's younger brother is responsible for sending Gongsun Du back to the Wei Kingdom. How do you show off your IQ? Are you afraid that the enemy will not know that you are smart? In order to prevent the tiger from becoming a problem, kill you first? It is okay to show off your IQ in the enemy country, but there are two conditions. First: You are very skilled and are not afraid of open and covert attacks. Second: The forces behind you are much stronger than the enemy country. You don't even have a protagonist, so you still show off your IQ? As long as the enemy has brains, he will definitely find a way to kill you or put you under house arrest. Personal comfort and honor and disgrace are secondary. I'm afraid that this meal will end your IQ show. To change history, the enemy felt that it would be safer to destroy Qin first. That would really show off the sky. And the daughter of the Tian family, who is the successor to the head of the first intelligence agency in the Central Plains, has such a low IQ? You can't even tell who is talking about "far away in the horizon and right in front of you"? And the protagonist stops talking and is so anxious to let the protagonist say who it is? There is no stability or city at all, are you kidding me? Seeing this, I really can't stand it anymore

What do you think, author, that the medicine used to buy a pig's trotters for one year's lifespan includes century-old ginseng that can add one year's lifespan, and then the finished product can add half a year's lifespan?

This protagonist is really self-righteous and thinks he is awesome, but in reality he feels like a loser.

This system is intelligent, capable of dialogue, and even mocks the protagonist. Do the big guys think you should quit?

The first few chapters are okay, but later you should keep a low profile and pretend to be cool if you have nothing to do. If you don't buy useful knowledge in a few years of life, you have to buy a chess game that is of little use to show off.