I Arrived in the Journey to the West a Thousand Years Early

That's a great idea. Writing style: The protagonist, after transmigrating, is still assertive when faced with the coercion of a severed finger and a blood-written letter? Has he lost his mind? This is clearly inconsistent with the original owner's personality. Moreover, does he become indifferent and lack a sense of belonging because of this incident?

How can an author publish three books in a row without encountering problems?

The writing is messy and disorganized. The cultivation system seems to exist, but it's not. The story appears profound, but it's actually quite simplistic. The protagonist constantly emphasizes immortality, but is actually courting death. In short, the author's main plot is unclear; it's unclear what they want to write. They're trying to adhere to history while also including immortals.

Transmigrators have no real family ties! One minute they're voluntarily leaving their clan, the next they're showing deep brotherly affection and dedicating themselves to the rise of the Qin state…

The author's ideas are gold-level, the writing is silver-level, the protagonist's emotional intelligence is bronze-level, and the protagonist's character is iron-level. The protagonist's character development is extremely poor; a major flaw is revealed in chapter six. People always need to make a living.

I just don't understand why you, a prince of Qin, whose brother is the king, are responsible for escorting Gongsun Du back to Wei. What kind of intelligence are you showing off? Are they afraid the enemy won't know you're clever? Are they eliminating you first to prevent a future threat? Showing off your intelligence in an enemy country is possible, but there are two prerequisites.

What were you thinking, author? The protagonist traded a year of his life for a prescription, and the medicine contained a hundred-year-old ginseng that could add another year to his life. And the finished product only adds another six months to his life.

This protagonist is so arrogant, thinking he's amazing, but in reality, he just seems rotten inside.

This system is intelligent, can converse, and even mocks the protagonist. Don't you guys think it's discouraging?

The first few chapters were alright, but later you should have kept a low profile. Why did you have to show off like that? You only have a few years left to live, why not use that to buy useful knowledge instead of buying some useless chess game to show off?